Edinburgh

For the spaces in my heart

Where you dwelt

I will hollow out my pain

 

For the love you gave and took

I will bleed my soul

Until dry it aches no more

 

For the lust that shone

In your eyes

I will tremble and burn

 

For the memory of raging desire

I doubt I'll ever again feel

I will be denied sleep

 

For the lonely hours I choose

I will in exile hide

Romance abandoned

 

For the decision to leave

I will reconcile

Search for the lessons and be thankful

 

For the image of you

Newly developed

I will not weep

 

For the memories I keep

I will be reminded

Of what's possible

 

For the future

I will hope.

Regret ►

Comments

Dave Mountain

Fri 18th Mar 2011 18:38

Nicely put, to the point and philosophical

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Francine

Sun 23rd Jan 2011 20:58

Positive, resolute, with a burning passion... I loved reading this!

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Philipos

Tue 4th Jan 2011 22:59

Hi Petrova - to me this means the ghost of romance lost which still comes back to bite - just posted something of a similar genre called The Haunting - enjoyed yours very much all stanzas and especially the first

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Petrova Fairhurst

Tue 4th Jan 2011 13:09

Thanks again Stella for sharing your insight. I find it interesting to know what a piece induces in someone, as writers we know what a piece is about, well hopefully (wry smile) and what we intend can sometimes be very different to what is received by other eyes/ears.

stella jones

Mon 3rd Jan 2011 22:27

well for me on a personal level it feels of a place, a time of good and bad and of the renewing of self..whether this is right or not I have no idea, it could as easily be the city speaking to an artist or musician, poet..it could be much to many I think..a little ambiguity is good..I use that in my own writes..hope this helps x

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Petrova Fairhurst

Mon 3rd Jan 2011 21:40

Thank you Stella & out of curiosity, what does it hold for you?

stella jones

Mon 3rd Jan 2011 21:06

Oh I do like this...it holds a certain something for me..nice one x

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