Finally seeing

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I worked into exhaustion,

Then I finally saw,

I was born to write,

And so walked out the door.

I fell in love,

With a perfect female,

But I boarded a train,

And so we derailed.

I finally see it,

My stupid brain,

Knows what it wants,

And takes it away.

Broken heartExhaustionMoving forward

◄ On one knee

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<Deleted User> (8134)

Fri 13th Aug 2010 10:14

Thank you very much Ann, I haven't posted anything in quite a while. I've been writing reviews and articles of a different nature, and just haven't had time for poetry. It feels nice to get something off my chest in a poem though. Hope you are well x

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Ann Foxglove

Fri 13th Aug 2010 09:37

I like this Joseph. Esp the last two lines. You're always very good at being straight to the point.xx

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