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The Cursèd Spark

 

 

 

From where came This Sun?

that undid my sleep,

that lit the edges of my dark...

 

that snuffed my rest where it begun

and took itself to keep,

what gave this day its cursèd spark?

 

What prised my eyes upon this light?

that witness I should be,

what turned my head where’er it say...

 

what raised our fists and tongues to fight

for all that would be rightly free,

and not by might be cast away...

 

From where did all this darkness fall?

that shaded what was grown,

that blacked the edges of our light...

 

that snuffed the hope among us all?

that it be never known,

how lesser men denied our right.

 

 

 

 

 

 

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◄ Old man crossing the road

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David RL Moore

Tue 1st Sep 2026 11:43

Hi Uilleam,

I think you are correct about the Owen lines.

Thanks for stopping by.

David

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sun 30th Aug 2026 21:53

There's something about those questions in your poem that reminds me of Wilfred Owen's Futility:

"...Was it for this the clay grew tall?
—O what made fatuous sunbeams toil
To break earth's sleep at all?"

or perhaps it was someone else.

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David RL Moore

Sun 30th Aug 2026 09:09

Thanks for the likes and the comment Graham.

It is a poem of two halves Graham.

My intention was to address an awakening to injustices, after which it is near impossible to not see and question almost every supposed truth we are expected to swallow.

David

thanks again..

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Graham Sherwood

Wed 26th Aug 2026 10:04

A piece of two halves David? Intentional or is it how I am reading this? Either way very strong words in both (halves).

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