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Our Eden

Our Eden

 

At long last, years ago,

 

we’d made our house a home;

 

my North-facing patch is cool,

 

and only catches sunlight

 

for a few hours in the morning,

 

with a glow towards the evening.

 

Her patch, South-facing, hot

 

as a Mediterranean vineyard,

 

sloped steeply, needing steps,

 

which I built with my own two hands,

 

using cobbles salvaged from

 

the street behind our house.

 

Two-hundred-year-old homes

 

stood there, but now are gone;

 

past them, the workers’ clogs

                             

would’ve clattered along each day

 

towards their daily grind.

 

Today, her patch, in bloom,

 

is the prettiest in the street,

 

it sports a little bird bath;

 

and mine? it has two ponds,

 

where butterflies and birds

 

and bees may drink at ease,

 

where a scented climbing rose,

 

God’s gift to passers-by,

 

is reaching for the sky.

 

Le Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh,

Dé Domnaigh, an naoú lá de mhí Lúnasa,

an bhliain dhá mhíle is fiche a sé (9/8/2026).

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Mon 17th Aug 2026 08:06

Thanks for the likes and comments:

Trevor Alexander
Kevin TS Tan
Graham Sherwood
John Coopey
Tom Doolan
kimberly
Naomi
Gillian P
Giampiero

The only reason my patch isn't completely dessicated / dead is because it's north-facing well-shaded, and is watered with washing up [grey] water from time to time.

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Trevor Alexander

Tue 11th Aug 2026 19:50

A true Eden.

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Kevin T.S. Tan

Tue 11th Aug 2026 11:55

Then I'll surrender to your 'EDEN', Uilleam.

Because for 10 years (or so) I have been addressing STRUCTURAL-PROBLEMS. Structural problems within EARTH-NATURE-HUMANITY.

There were&are structural BRAINWASHING(S), INDOCTRINATION(S), PROPAGANDA(S). And they continue. They keep doing it.

It's violating rules, regulations, conventions, agreements, amendments, the whole SCHWMAMBAM.

So that's why I'm surrendering to your 'EDEN'. Call it 'co-evolution(s)/ CO-EVOLUTION(S)'.

But I'm typing.

AND SHE AIN'T NO TYPEWRITER, NO!

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 10th Aug 2026 17:03

Sounds like paradise, Uilleam. Nicely written.

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Gillian P

Mon 10th Aug 2026 13:23

A lovely description of your garden Uilleam

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Mon 10th Aug 2026 06:50

Thanks for the likes:
Graham Sherwood
Tom Doolan

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