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MASTERS OF THE FOOTPLATE

All day long they wielded their shovels

shielded their eyes from the lowering sun

all day long they watched for signals

embracing the levers 'til day was done. 

 

They pricked the fire to goad it more

snapped back the door like a lion's cage

until the thrusting lusting pistons

ached with steam and latent rage. 

 

Each man his place and time a rhyme

with looks and nods acros the plate

of rhythm and rails, hard men's tales

the master of the passengers' fate. 

 

Where did they go, where did they go?

said the sky to the trees and the rivers below,

some to diesels some to yards,

no more to watch the firebox glow.

 

They like to pass their memories down

when like us all their eyes grow dim

inspiring youth with wider views

with the thrum of the rails and the railway hymn. 

 

 

◄ NEVER NEVER LAND

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raypool

Sun 8th Mar 2026 11:29

Thanks Jennifer ! Good to hear from you from that slightly dim and distant past.. So glad this appealed, it was a bit of inspiration. These days I think there is a bit of interest now from the kids, picking up the mums and dad's nostalgia.
Best, Ray

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jennifer Malden

Wed 4th Mar 2026 09:49

Great writing, (as usual!) Great memories coming back. Always really enjoyed travelling by train, except on the school train! In particular the second last verse, very nostalgic.

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raypool

Sat 28th Feb 2026 16:34

Firstly thank you all who liked the poem !

So much in agreement Graham, and pencils sharpened on windy platforms too I remember for noting numbers! It was exciting and a window to an adult world now nestling in childhood ambience. I'll get my coat.

Yes John , so glad that feeling came over - success!

An interesting vignette Stephen - that was full of atmosphere (and steam) with a visit to Leigh on Sea in 53. Great days to be a kid. Thanks for the comment re format too!

Best, Ray












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Stephen Gospage

Thu 26th Feb 2026 08:57

A masterpiece of rhythm and rhyme, Ray. I have a faint memory of sitting on a train to Fenchurch Street and watching the steam go past the open window.

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John Coopey

Tue 24th Feb 2026 08:34

I hear the rhythm, Ray. Wonderful.

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 23rd Feb 2026 14:55

wonderfully evocative of my childhood. I feel quite sad these days for children who weren't born in the age of steam!

And even sadder when I see steam trains running today on 'special' trips but backed up by a diesel on the other end!!

It doesn't seem right.

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