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The Big Man

From the land to the sea, 

There are stretches of olive trees growing from cinders 

And a watch of nightingales humming Persian poetry,

Drifting skyward, looking for the big man who would perhaps lend an ear.

 

Atop the clouds, there's an Epicurean paradox 

Instead of the big man. 

Head cradled in his hands, he witnesses pirates from plundered docks 

Ravage his gold-stricken land.

 

But to the accusatory eyes, he's still there, almost human, a salvific silhouette.

They chant, "your creation, your army of sword-wielders, your slain children."

Every ounce of hope distilled through their rose-tinted lenses, 

Still searches for a magician once promised to them.

 

The big man, consumed by his own luminosity,

Feels more out of reach now than he ever did.

"I am what you make of me because you made me."

And what follows is silence paving the way to free will

 

And an unchecked promise of a better afterlife,

And hope that clings to the trilemma without reason,

And the crushing debt of a chamber of eternal fire,

And impunity for warlords baptized by performative repentance.

 

The big man says, after a long pause, 

"Even if you think all is lost,

You should still believe in a heaven for my slain children's cause,

But not in the way you've been taught."

 

As they always feared, the eyes see it written in plain language,

The big man shirking his culpability,

Because there was none to begin with.

It has always been men, their moral codes, their deities. 

 

The eyes now know that there may be no answers,

But divinity lies in unconditional good,

And not in chants, statues, or the big man's self-employed martyrs

Who draw blood and consume flesh, only to lure new recruits. 

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Epicurean paradoxGodoppressionpoliticsproblem of evilreligion

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Shifa Maqba

Wed 28th Jan 2026 01:44

Thank you for your wonderful comments, Hazel, Greg, Adam, Martin, and Graham!
I’m grateful that, at a time when dissent is increasingly scrutinised and suppressed, we still have a forum where we can discuss challenging topics like religion and politics freely.

Thanks all for your roses as well! 😃

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 26th Jan 2026 10:20

Worth it for this line alone. Bravo!!

'a watch of nightingales humming Persian poetry'

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Martin Elder

Mon 26th Jan 2026 10:07

Thought provoking words indeed., that makes good reading.

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Adam Whitworth

Mon 26th Jan 2026 09:24

This poem lends valuable support to the thinking individual who suffers in the shadow of monolithic traditions with all their painfully obvious shortcomings.
I commend it as exemplary poetry and suggest multiple readings for maximum benefit.

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Greg Freeman

Mon 26th Jan 2026 08:33

A beautiful, thoughtful, crafted poem, Shifa.

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Hazel ettridge

Mon 26th Jan 2026 08:23

Perspective vs Realty. What a tricky line we tread - often blindfolded.

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