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Dust My Broom

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with apologies to Elmore James


The Watergate story was unfolding

the summer I often found myself

covered in dust. Bowie’s Starman

had landed from another planet.

I was a recovering uni dropout

with no clue what to do next.

 

I don’t remember it raining much.

Still, you could only stand it

for an hour or two. We parked

our bins in an alley out of sight

of the foreman, or so we thought.

He knew his motley crew spent hours

 

in the café discussing Tricky Dicky

but were only temporary,

not worth making a row about.

I wanted to be a novelist,

my mate Keith a pop star.

Sometimes we’d go back to his place,

 

write songs. Made a demo

in a studio on Fulham Palace Road.

Discovered I couldn’t sing,

at any rate. A growing

political scandal,

new musical directions,

 

idols with mascara, heady days.

But nothing glam about

road sweeping. When it grew

colder I tired of bunking off,

took an office job.

Lost touch with Keith.

 

 

David BowieNixon

◄ Snow on the borders

Saltmarsh, Alnmouth ►

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Greg Freeman

Tue 13th Jan 2026 08:37

Thanks for your comments, Olivia, Graham, and Steve. Ah yes, the succession of novels - well, three in total - and standard rejection slips! And yes, Graham, I think a lot of my poems are like that. Posted here to mark 10 years since David Bowie left us, this reminiscence was published in a fab annual magazine, Poetry and All That Jazz, produced by Barry Smith and South Downs Poetry Festival, a year or two ago. Thanks for the Likes, Red Brick, Tom, Aisha, K Lynn, Manish, David, and Bill.

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 12th Jan 2026 08:25

A lovely snapshot of bygone days, Greg. We try all sorts of things. I remember writing a short story which consisted entirely of single words punctuated by full stops. At least the publisher sent it back!

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Graham Sherwood

Sun 11th Jan 2026 13:12

The older I get I am moved to analyze my earlier days and whether I made good decisions or not. Would I have liked myself looking back etc.
These sort of poems give more away than we realize and are fascinating as a result.

Good work old friend

G

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Olivia Remsangpuii

Sun 11th Jan 2026 11:44

great poem greg!!

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