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NEVER NEVER LAND

Mysteries hold the young in thrall,

their hands reach out to touch the winter's glow

with throbbing hearts to the joy of all.

 

Into the colourful glades of polystyrene

I stare, can't be fooled, a sickly cynic

'cause the magic's not there. 

 

But age remembers those far off days

and somehow the hunger leaves a hole

that longs to be filled.

 

Now Mummy and Daddy have gone

let go of my old hand,

off to other places to sample what children sense

that other world of never never land. 

◄ WEIGH A PIE

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 20th Dec 2025 17:01

Lovely, Ray. As David says, the last verse is special and stops one in its tracks.

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raypool

Sat 20th Dec 2025 16:07

Many thanks to Graham, Stephen, Aisha, John, Yanma and Gillian for your liking the poem.

Thanks for looking in Greg. I fear certain truths will emerge, put it that way...Happy Xmas to you and yours.

So please you liked this David. I was reaching in to uncomfortable areas I think, but I try to be honest. I suppose if you have young children of your own you revisit the magic through them, so that is an added aspect that couldn't apply to me. Happy Xmas.....

Ray

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David RL Moore

Wed 17th Dec 2025 07:32

A beautiful poem Ray.

The delicate sensitivity of that last stanza is deeply touching, I fell into it like Pan in flight.

David X

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Greg Freeman

Tue 16th Dec 2025 16:01

An awfully big adventure awaits us, Ray ...

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