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No Borders (work in progress)

I swear to you now: each word's taste matters
in ways everyone can share. All the rest
is window dressing. Just as light scatters,
sparkle and shard, we're at our level best

when we favour language. Catch a couple
lightly, roll them around your tongue, savour them.
Don't they have bite and texture? They're supple,
they nourish us. Narratives flavour them,

pepper and salt them with understanding.
So think rogue notions, curried rascal thoughts
slathered with chilli's heat, those commanding
one's rapt attention. On spicy breath floats

a smorgasbord - rich thoughts like you and I,
us and them, and each bound by that word 'and'.
Like magic, threading through us eye to eye,
they spell time, space and culture, common land

and dreams, equal in their differences,
where there's nobody issuing orders,
with neither watchtowers, gates nor fences,
and conclusively, no walls or borders.

M. Peacock 10-121225/19126

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Martin Peacock

Mon 15th Dec 2025 06:59

Thank you very much indeed for your kind comment, Hélène. Yes, we need to talk to each other much more, especially we writers. Language is the glue which holds society together, don't you think?

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Hélène

Sun 14th Dec 2025 16:39

I really like this poem, Martin. Life is indeed a work in progress, and the idea of no borders and communication building bridges between all kinds of people is wonderful.

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Martin Peacock

Sat 13th Dec 2025 16:37

Thank you very much, Greg. As you say, a poem is never finished and this one is niggling at me. There's something not quite 'right' about it. It's not bad, but neither is it good. I'll keep at it though, as I'm a terrier when it comes to my poems. Good enough isn't good enough!

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Greg Freeman

Sat 13th Dec 2025 08:51

A very fine poem, Martin. Wonderful sentiments, and satisfyingly crafted, too. I see it's 'work in progress' ... well, they do say a poem is never finished. But this one already looks good to me.

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