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Bottle palm

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A tiny seed, a hopeful start,
The gardener came, with gentle heart.
He tucked it in the earth so deep,
While I, a little one, did peep.

A bottle palm, so small and frail,
Beside my path, began its tale.
We started small, in sun and rain,
Two different lives, upon the plain.

I felt so big, so strong, so bold,
The little palm, a story told
Of fragile leaves and slender stem,
I towered over it, back then.

But seasons turned, and time went by,
The palm grew taller, reaching high.
It stretched and swayed, with graceful ease,
While I felt small, beneath the trees.

The bottle palm, so proud and grand,
A silent watchman in the land.
It stood so firm, with sturdy grace,
A smile upon its leafy face.

We shared a space, a common ground,
Where roots entwined, and life was found.
The old leaves fell, a gentle rain,
And I let go of childish pain.

The palm grew strong, with thickened base,
While I matured, with slower pace.
We both grew tall, and reached so high,
To touch the boundless, azure sky.

Though strength is different, yours and mine,
A bond we share, a truth divine.
We stand together, side by side,
With roots that run, deep, far and wide.

I see it now, each passing day,
From schoolgirl dreams, to wisdom's way.
It watched me learn, and watched me grow,
And I observed its silent show.

Each year it climbed, a steady climb,
A testament to passing time.
Until it reached a mighty height,
A beacon shining, day and night.

One day I'll leave, and venture far,
Beneath a different moon and star.
But I will hope, with all my heart,
That still it stands, a work of art.

And when I'm gone, I pray it stays,
Through sunny days, and hazy grays.
Perhaps it will miss me, just a bit,
As I will miss its form, exquisite.

Though words unspoken fill the air,
A silent bond, beyond compare.
The bottle palm, my kindred soul,
A story whispered, making us whole.

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Ghazala lari

Tue 9th Dec 2025 13:29

Greg & Uilleam; Your kind words warmed my heart—thank you for taking the time to read and reflect on the poem with such generosity. Faith and hope are indeed timeless, and I’m so glad the poem resonated with you. Grateful for your thoughtful feedback and for the vibrant space Write Out Loud provides to share these pieces.

Your kindness lingers like ink on the page—thank you, Stephen, for seeing the pulse beneath these words.


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Stephen Gospage

Tue 9th Dec 2025 08:18

And also very moving, Ghazala. A lovely poem to read.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sun 7th Dec 2025 21:24

I'll second that, Greg.

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Greg Freeman

Sun 7th Dec 2025 09:05

This is a beautiful poem, full of faith and hope, which is what we all want, at any time of the year. The metre and rhyme is immaculate too, I might add. Many thanks for posting it on Write Out Loud.

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