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Releasing the Latch

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I can see the coloured arcs of minute rainbows

Refracted within the tears, this spurned woman cries.

And those sharp-edged multifaceted diamonds 

That glint in the corners of large, red, saddened eyes.

Once convinced her tomorrows were future-proof,

Her knees buckle; she softly crumbles to the floor.

She's never felt as helpless or as hopeless as she does right now

Realising it all meant nothing, those everythings before.

I can hazard a guess at the words that have formed behind her lips

Words as yet unspoken, she desperately gasps for breath to catch

She doesn't witness the heavy wooden door that's slowly pulled shut. 

She’s alone: Whilst I walk away, quietly releasing the latch

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Russell Jacklin

Fri 28th Nov 2025 09:01

Recent events inspired this poem, but luckily not my own.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 28th Nov 2025 07:55

I sense some real modern angst here, JD. 'Those everythings before' now mean nothing. A very good read.

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Russell Jacklin

Thu 27th Nov 2025 15:01

That's the second time someone's called my writing 'intriguing' not sure what to make of that

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Thu 27th Nov 2025 09:47

Intruiging JD.

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