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Discharge

Someone said it: Time is a thief.

It takes a part of us each day.

At first, it doesn’t seem too much:

A single hair, a shard of skin,

A tiny speck of recollections;

But the tally mounts, the mirror

Documents this slippery slope.

 

Time, we know, is a one-way bet;

Such a lot goes unrecorded.

Our memories cannot keep up,

So even at our peak the gaps

Expand like huge looming canyons

Into which, despite our efforts,

The daily discharge tumbles.

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 12th Nov 2025 06:48

Thank you very much, Greg. Yes, it's an interesting journey, one way unfortunately!

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Greg Freeman

Mon 10th Nov 2025 16:58

A fine exploration of the poetry of ageing, Steve. An important adventure that is well worth writing about ... before the awfully big one ...

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 10th Nov 2025 13:25

Thank you, Graham. Yes, perhaps time is also a catalyst accompanying these significant changes in our lives, when we give up certain aspects of ourselves. The transition for work to retirement marks an important milestone, usually dictated by the march of time.

And thanks to everyone who liked this poem.

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Graham Sherwood

Sun 9th Nov 2025 08:57

It’s interesting that you see time as a thief. Sometimes I feel that we all too easily give up certain n aspects of ourselves. One is the position of provider as our children grow older and want to provide for themselves and for me too! It is quite humbling.

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