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IF I FORGET (A SONNET)

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(With an enormous nod to Charlie Parr for the title)

 

If your name should seem like frosted glass to me

And these rheumy eyes find your face hard to see

When memory's a thin haze of where we met

Will you remember me if I forget?

If days and dates I've overlooked and missed

If I protest that never have we kissed

When familiars become mere silhouettes

Will you remember me if I forget?

When life is fog and cloud through which I walk

Inclined to neither listen nor to talk

Condemned into my private oubliette

Will you remember me if I forget?

And when I've become the ghost of our duet

Will you remember me if I forget?

◄ WHERE DID THEY GO ?

A KINDER NATION ►

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John Coopey

Mon 10th Nov 2025 10:33

Thankyou Kevin. You know what a sentimentalist I am.

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kJ Walker

Sun 9th Nov 2025 18:25

Simply beautiful. A very poignant poem.

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John Coopey

Fri 7th Nov 2025 11:14

Thankyou Stephen for your kind thoughts. And thanks for the Likes Adam, Aisha and Gillian.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 7th Nov 2025 08:57

It is hard not to be moved by this lovely poem, John. A terrible reality for some and frighteningly near for others.

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John Coopey

Thu 6th Nov 2025 14:41

Thankyou for your kind thoughts, Yanma and Holden. And for the Likes, Aisha, Redbrick, Tom and John.

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Yanma Hidayah

Thu 6th Nov 2025 14:08

This poem carries such depth, and its rhyme brings it to life so beautifully. I truly felt the emotion in it. Thank you for sharing this, @John Coopey.

Holden Moncrieff

Thu 6th Nov 2025 12:40

A beautiful poem, sensitively written, John!🌷

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