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in the end

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In the End

 

I carried the shape you traced,

a vessel cut to your measure,

but the grain ran otherwise—

knots where you wanted polish,

splinters where you asked for sheen.

 

I bent, yes,

but the bend was fracture,

and the fracture sang its own line.

 

You looked for a mirror,

I offered a window.

You asked for a key,

I was only a door left ajar.

 

So this saga closes:

not as betrayal,

not as triumph,

but as the quiet fact—

I was never the figure

you drafted in your hand.

 

And still,

I remain:

unfinished,

unwanted,

yet wholly mine.

 

 

 

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Red Brick Keshner

Thu 6th Nov 2025 23:20

Indeed, David (RL Moore), that is such an excellent video clip. One would think they were tailored for each other. Thanks so much for sharing it as well as visiting with my poem. 🙏🕊️🌷

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David RL Moore

Wed 5th Nov 2025 11:31

Mmm that resonates somehow with me.

I know all writings, poetry especially have multiple interpretations. Some are abstract and reach memories and places that mostly lie dormant.

I'm posting a link to a wonderful piece of modern film that for me encapulates what you speak of.

Lovely work RBK.

David.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VXNfxK5Q2Qg

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