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Songs

At the songs of the birds,

My heart erupts with joy

And streams of colour fill my world.

 

At the songs of the trees,

I catch the rusty leaves

Which crumble, softly, in my hand.

 

At the songs of the clouds,

I imagine myself

Floating, at untold altitudes.

 

At the songs of the grass,

I listen, intently,

For unlikely scraps of news.

 

At the songs of the earth,

I marvel, tasting soil,

At the scorching autumn odours.

 

At the songs of the war,

I sing along, aping

The dull monotony of death.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 4th Nov 2025 08:51

Thank you, Graham. Yes, I think melody does sound much better. Perhaps 'humdrum melody', to keep the rhythm?

Thanks once again for this precious feedback.

And thanks to everyone who liked this poem.

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 3rd Nov 2025 09:26

I like this and I’ve been racking my brain about the last verse.
Personally I would swap monotony for melody. Good work though Stephen 👍

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