Songs
At the songs of the birds,
My heart erupts with joy
And streams of colour fill my world.
At the songs of the trees,
I catch the rusty leaves
Which crumble, softly, in my hand.
At the songs of the clouds,
I imagine myself
Floating, at untold altitudes.
At the songs of the grass,
I listen, intently,
For unlikely scraps of news.
At the songs of the earth,
I marvel, tasting soil,
At the scorching autumn odours.
At the songs of the war,
I sing along, aping
The dull monotony of death.

Stephen Gospage
Tue 4th Nov 2025 08:51
Thank you, Graham. Yes, I think melody does sound much better. Perhaps 'humdrum melody', to keep the rhythm?
Thanks once again for this precious feedback.
And thanks to everyone who liked this poem.