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boy with a flute

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Boy with a Flute

Ankles in sand,
goats nose the salt air,
bells stumble against
the thin breath of reed.

A woman wheels past—
hair a sudden banner,
refusal swift as wind.
The goats turn too.

Desire rehearses itself:
first glance,
first quickening,
beauty always ahead.

Still he plays,
as if breath could bind
what wheels carry away.

Sea steady,
trail empty,
music lingering—
a claim on what recedes.


 

 

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Red Brick Keshner

Sat 25th Oct 2025 00:39

Thanks, Rolph 🌷🙏🕊️ I'm so glad something of the poem remains in a heart/mind/soul, since fleeting as moments are they are at times best kept alive in poems and poetry. Let's keep the music playing. Most appreciative, RBK

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Rolph David

Fri 24th Oct 2025 19:17

Hi Red,
I just wanted to say how much your poem stayed with me again. There’s a quiet, almost tender way it captures a fleeting moment—full of life, movement, and subtle longing. I love how the scene makes even the smallest details feel alive, and how the music becomes this fragile attempt to hold onto what is always slipping away.
It’s a beautiful, thoughtful piece—thank you for sharing it.
Cheerio,
Rolph

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