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Early Demise

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He never reached retirement;

He beavered away till the last,

And from his modest office desk

He receded into the past.

 

Nobody threw a party

Or presented him with a watch;

He ploughed on as hard as ever,

Till health took him downwards a notch.

 

At home he composed his poems

In an atmosphere most discreet,

Though colleagues knew of his exploits

And some worshipped at his feet.

 

He lived not long enough to see

His later, complicated fame,

But might have liked the ups and downs

Of this less familiar game.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 5th Oct 2025 08:02

Thank you, Rolph and Graham, and thanks to everyone who liked this.

When I look at this again, it almost becomes two poems: the first two verses concerning the situation of so many people who work hard but don't reach retirement, with the last two verses on the subject of celebrity, before and after death.

I think your comments covered both of these! Thanks again.

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Graham Sherwood

Fri 3rd Oct 2025 09:25

Post Mortem celebrity might well be the best kind judging by the antics of some of them these days

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Rolph David

Fri 3rd Oct 2025 09:16

Good morning Stephen,

Your poem struck me with its quiet sorrow. It portrays a life of constant effort and personal commitment that passes mostly unnoticed, leaving a sense of isolation and unacknowledged devotion. There’s a gentle sadness in how it shows someone giving so much, yet rarely receiving so little recognition or celebration, and it lingers as a reflection on the often-overlooked sacrifices that shape a life. Great piece!
Kind regards,
Rolph

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