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the lantern at low tide


 

At the pier’s end,

a lantern swayed in the wind,

its light holding back

the dark by inches.

 

The tide had gone out hours ago,

leaving the seabed bare —

a map of ridges and hollows

drawn by hands no one remembers. 
Somewhere in the shallows,

a fish turned once,

as if to read the lantern’s flicker

like a message meant for it alone.

 

When the wind dropped,

the light kept moving —

as though the night itself

had learned to breathe.

 

 

 

 

 

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Red Brick Keshner

Fri 26th Sep 2025 02:40

Thanks @Yanma 🌷it is a real joy to write of such and have it bring the same or equal tranquility 🕊🙏🏻

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Yanma Hidayah

Thu 25th Sep 2025 14:57

Hi RBK, your poem “the lantern at low tide” is truly beautiful. It creates such a vivid and tranquil atmosphere. To me, it feels almost like a kind of bedtime story. Overall, the poem blends a naturalistic mood with a reflective tone, and I could feel a silence that carries deep meaning.

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Red Brick Keshner

Tue 23rd Sep 2025 03:14

Thank you so much Clare🌷the sharing of a poetic journey is a true blessing. And this also shall not be easily forgotten 🙏🏻🕊️

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Clare

Mon 22nd Sep 2025 16:32

I love a poem that can take me from reader to observer. Your ability to use language to create such a vivid ‘painting’ is impressive to say the least. This is one that will stay with me for a long time. 👌🏻

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Red Brick Keshner

Mon 22nd Sep 2025 12:13

Thanks, Uilleam🌷greatly valued comment there🕊️🙏🏻

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Red Brick Keshner

Mon 22nd Sep 2025 12:12

Thanks Graham, your much appreciated words mean a whole lot🌷🕊️🙏🏻

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Mon 22nd Sep 2025 10:27

Your “…map of ridges and hollows…” tells such a story, RBK.
As do the “new” pavements in town. Laid only a few years ago, they’re already badly eroded (a cheapo job lot), and remind me of their million-year-old origins. I could almost be strolling along the sands of Morecambe Bay; if only!😏

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 22nd Sep 2025 06:59

Like the fish analogy a lot

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