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She Says Goodbye

She Says Goodbye.

 

She held me tightly in her arms.

Strangely it felt surreal and very calm.

The sorrow was very clear in her eyes.

This was the day she would say goodbye.

 

The journey had finally come to an end.

No longer lovers possibly not even friends.

Her love overtime has slowly waned.

Where my love for her has gained.

 

I feel a heart beating against mine.

Feeling so close to her for the last time.

Thou she is tearing me apart inside.

I still want this to be a good, goodbye.

 

When she releases her arms, my dreams are gone.

I will be here sitting hurting all alone.

All those magic moments will have disappeared.

The world will be empty when she is no longer here.

 

This is a woman I have never hurt or disrespected in any way.

I know right now I should be angry; I should rant and rave.

I should be pleading begging her to stay.

Yet I just want it to end in a caring and friendly way.

 

I want to remember us the way we used to be.

She looks me in the eye and slowly releases me.

I tell her I love her, and she softly smiles.

We both wiped tears from our eyes as she says goodbye.

 

Nataiella 2016.

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TobaniNataiella

Fri 22nd Nov 2024 09:14

Thank you Naomi for the like

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TobaniNataiella

Thu 21st Nov 2024 18:49

Thank you Manish for the like.

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TobaniNataiella

Thu 21st Nov 2024 11:16

Thank you Pragya for the like

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Ray Miller

Thu 21st Nov 2024 09:55

Enjoyed the read. Mostly it has a nice rhythm, but towards the end some lines are very much longer han others - like this one
This is a woman I have never hurt or disrespected in any way.

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