The Hyve Mind

by Kevin Tan

Thursday 25th May 2023 8:50 am

Somewhere on a planet in a cluster far away

Breathes the human hive mind in a universal way

Linking all us humans in the cosmic All

Making us fantastically poetically whole!

I'm not good at performing, that's what everyone knows

At least that's what I think, but I am sure that it grows

My English is inferior to any native tongue

But I'm pretty allround and this is how I get along

I'm jiving with The Hyve Mind and I think that's okay

There's obviously more aliens than humans anyway!

The White Witches whisper and they're hard to resist

But I'm sure that this poem could use a certain twist! :D

Comments

Kevin Tan

Thu 25th May 2023 19:28

Yeah please do so John Botterill. Let's all weave our poems together into one giant poetry!!!

John Botterill

Thu 25th May 2023 18:57

A fab idea. Part of the collective consciousness, Kevin. I think I will join you, brother 😁

Kevin Tan

Thu 25th May 2023 15:24

Yes! Thanks for reading, liking & commenting y'all! I believe that every single poem that is published on Write Out Loud creates a better universe. So let's all keep on writing. I love you all!!!

p.s. Oh and yeah, this poem is not so outrageously cynical. This should be the new direction :P

Manish Singh Rajput

Thu 25th May 2023 15:13

I can only echo Keith's words, Kevin. This poem is so different than what you usually write. I've enjoyed reading this and the return of the white witches too.
Thank you.

keith jeffries

Thu 25th May 2023 09:17

Kevin, are you venturing into new poetic territory? It would seem so. Never be deterred by a language you are not completely familiar with. As long as you describe and express yourself, all will reach the reader's mind. I enjoyed this poem and hope to see more in a similar style and vein.
Thank you for this,
Keith

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