The Hyve Mind
Somewhere on a planet in a cluster far away
Breathes the human hive mind in a universal way
Linking all us humans in the cosmic All
Making us fantastically poetically whole!
I'm not good at performing, that's what everyone knows
At least that's what I think, but I am sure that it grows
My English is inferior to any native tongue
But I'm pretty allround and this is how I get along
I'm jiving with The Hyve Mind and I think that's okay
There's obviously more aliens than humans anyway!
The White Witches whisper and they're hard to resist
But I'm sure that this poem could use a certain twist! :D
Thu 25th May 2023 19:28
Yeah please do so John Botterill. Let's all weave our poems together into one giant poetry!!!
Thu 25th May 2023 18:57
A fab idea. Part of the collective consciousness, Kevin. I think I will join you, brother 😁
Thu 25th May 2023 15:24
Yes! Thanks for reading, liking & commenting y'all! I believe that every single poem that is published on Write Out Loud creates a better universe. So let's all keep on writing. I love you all!!!
p.s. Oh and yeah, this poem is not so outrageously cynical. This should be the new direction :P
Manish Singh Rajput
Thu 25th May 2023 15:13
I can only echo Keith's words, Kevin. This poem is so different than what you usually write. I've enjoyed reading this and the return of the white witches too.
Thu 25th May 2023 09:17
Kevin, are you venturing into new poetic territory? It would seem so. Never be deterred by a language you are not completely familiar with. As long as you describe and express yourself, all will reach the reader's mind. I enjoyed this poem and hope to see more in a similar style and vein.
Thank you for this,
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