The Hyve Mind

Somewhere on a planet in a cluster far away

Breathes the human hive mind in a universal way

Linking all us humans in the cosmic All

Making us fantastically poetically whole!


I'm not good at performing, that's what everyone knows

At least that's what I think, but I am sure that it grows

My English is inferior to any native tongue

But I'm pretty allround and this is how I get along


I'm jiving with The Hyve Mind and I think that's okay

There's obviously more aliens than humans anyway!

The White Witches whisper and they're hard to resist

But I'm sure that this poem could use a certain twist! :D


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Kevin Tan

Thu 25th May 2023 19:28

Yeah please do so John Botterill. Let's all weave our poems together into one giant poetry!!!

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John Botterill

Thu 25th May 2023 18:57

A fab idea. Part of the collective consciousness, Kevin. I think I will join you, brother 😁

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Kevin Tan

Thu 25th May 2023 15:24

Yes! Thanks for reading, liking & commenting y'all! I believe that every single poem that is published on Write Out Loud creates a better universe. So let's all keep on writing. I love you all!!!

p.s. Oh and yeah, this poem is not so outrageously cynical. This should be the new direction :P

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Manish Singh Rajput

Thu 25th May 2023 15:13

I can only echo Keith's words, Kevin. This poem is so different than what you usually write. I've enjoyed reading this and the return of the white witches too.
Thank you.

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keith jeffries

Thu 25th May 2023 09:17

Kevin, are you venturing into new poetic territory? It would seem so. Never be deterred by a language you are not completely familiar with. As long as you describe and express yourself, all will reach the reader's mind. I enjoyed this poem and hope to see more in a similar style and vein.
Thank you for this,

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