Summing up

We added ourselves to each other

hoping to multiply

but that was until you subtracted your love

and we became divided.

◄ Rule of the blade

Ruined house, neglected garden midsummer ►


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Grace Meadows

Thu 18th May 2023 21:02

Thank you gents for the comments and thank you Lady and gents for the likings. This is one of those simple little gems that thankfully comes to mind on occasions.

Thanks again all!

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 17th May 2023 15:55

Imagination in excellent evidence! A real plus - thanks!

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Kevin Tan

Wed 17th May 2023 15:17

Wow! So Ed-Sheeran-like! Or should I say sheeriffic? That's really hot&cool! 😍🎇🎉


Wed 17th May 2023 00:07

What I would call a simple sweet neat treat Grace-well done girl!


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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Tue 16th May 2023 12:18

Cheers Grace.
I never got the hang of long division.
but was expert on multiplication😊

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John Botterill

Mon 15th May 2023 21:14

I love your punning, Grace. It all adds up to a fine poem. 😁 Bravo

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