Cranial evictions

Unravelled minds

leashed to enigmatic wastelands 

wanderers of thought-emptied landscapes

where remnants of the past will never again flare

such scorning grinding mental starvations

covert damagings stemming the supply of sanity

unpicking memories down to the bone

hoarding futures

stealing souls 

◄ Squanderers

Closure ►

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Rose Casserley

Fri 18th Nov 2022 15:08

And my thanks to you Mr Atkinson ( liking )








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Rose Casserley

Thu 17th Nov 2022 23:59

Guilty as charged and agreeable re the tailing off-reparations are afoot! ahem in the meantime ta mucho to the both of you and Helene


ps-re Autumns last leaf Beth I do have some scribbled remnants so I hope I can salvage it-ta for da concern chuck



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Bethany Sallis

Thu 17th Nov 2022 15:19

I agree with Stephen on all counts Rose but like Stephen mentions it still gets the message over.

By the way what happened to your other poem

Autumns last leaf?

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 17th Nov 2022 08:25

I love the way you conclude this, Rose. The last two lines seem to drift away, but the message is crystal clear.

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