Chariots Of Fife

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Inspired by 'After the Storm' by Julie Callaghan

 

Chariots Of Fife

 

Charioteers equestrian came on storms of thunder

Accompanying lightning bolts to dash asunder

Flashing radiantly across darkly skies portending doom from disdainful heights they’d fly

A quadruplet of black and white wild horses, flowing manes, with thundering hoofs and eyes aflame.

Incessant like crashing crescendos echo through from obscured firmaments

 

The heavens swell with the sound of trumpets

Seals being dashed ripped asunder entrained by the clapping sounds of thunder.

Hail and icy winds begin to swell to pour downwards quenching fires from Hell.

Translucent steam rising hisses, like serpents, screaming.

Sulphurous odours emerge from cracked wide fissures. Cleft as if with an axe or Mighty Thor's hammer.

From fixed stars distant, the diurnal parallax pulled against the natural rhythms thus undoing his eternal algorithms precision.  The Grand Architect’s gavel hit upon, sending hence a harmonious frequency resounding…  

 

A deafening silence at once descends to quench disquiet foreboding ends.

Mankind united witnessed, as all glanced skywards.

Through a radiant rainbow Royal Arch,

God’s winged brazen emblazoned charioteers depart.

 

Po

On the threshold of a dreamPo

◄ Just a bit of fun

No laughing matter ►

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Paul Sayer

Sat 18th Jul 2020 15:35

Bluesky You know me well enough to know that I am sometimes flippant and can seem at odds with traditional religious teaching.

I agree with them all. In that, there is only one religion.

The question which one is right?
Or only my God is the true God!

Shows 'No' knowledge or understanding of religion in my scripture and tabernacle.

The pyx, the Eucharist is carried in a cardboard burger box.

Or SHOULD be and given to feed the poor and homeless that we walk across the other side of the road to avoid and avert our gaze.



Bluesky.girl

Sat 18th Jul 2020 15:18

All ears and all heart humanity shall not fall. The charioteers shan't retreat unless their tasks they achieve.
Humanity shall embark on the chariots when it's time to leave the darkness of the world, a ride away into the realms of light breathing happiness and joy.
Let the humanity know it's time.

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Paul Sayer

Sat 18th Jul 2020 14:57

Hello, Shehariah my newest bestest friend.

Thank you once again for you encouraging comments and welcomed support.

Could this be where mankind is heading?

God, I hope so...

I hope she has got an open ear and heart because if not we are all F##ked mate.

Po's lame attempt to make light of his deep souls cry.

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Shehariah

Sat 18th Jul 2020 03:54

I love this one. You paint such brilliant pictures with your words. I’m not super great at critiquing. Ha! I think you probably know you’re brilliant. I’m impressed by your work.

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Paul Sayer

Thu 9th Jul 2020 21:00

Lots going on here not surprised you did not get all the little hints

I know because you were the last to laugh

Kidded 😊Po

Bluesky.girl

Tue 7th Jul 2020 18:02

Too many riddles here🤔🙄

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Paul Sayer

Tue 7th Jul 2020 17:33

Bluesky it is the fastest way to empty a room or distance your self from all partygoers.

Oh! hello what do you do?

I talk to dead people... what the hell was that clang!

as the pin falls to the floor.

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Paul Sayer

Tue 7th Jul 2020 17:30

I gave up the church because I was preaching to the converted.

Most never really understood if I'm honest.

Bluesky.girl

Tue 7th Jul 2020 17:02

I never tell anyone
None believe
I know it clearly.😇

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Paul Sayer

Tue 7th Jul 2020 15:02

Anmolpreet you join our throng
to sing Gods praises we join in song.

Faiths, beliefs, one's understanding
all united notwithstanding
differences once quenched and dissolved
Nectar flows, as wars and conflicts then resolved.

Po

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Paul Sayer

Tue 7th Jul 2020 14:51

Bluesky Angel

Your wings unfurled as into the pits of Jahannam
you were truly hurled.

Then like a blazing phoenix, a winged Gazelle flew you from the depths of hell.

Now hear as your true 'Souls' purpose Allah tell.

Thunder Child

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Paul Sayer

Tue 7th Jul 2020 14:42

Thanks go to Dean, Abdul, and Jon.
your flowers add up to a sweet bouquet.

Bluesky.girl

Tue 7th Jul 2020 13:16

Nevertheless a piece to remember and reread.

Thank you for your genuine remark. It made it all the more clear to me. 😄 undoubtedly it pass by my cloudy couch I was seated on. And like an open air huge screen I witnessed this charioteering steeds over cloudnine......hehehe. the eagles in frenzy soar higher in the eleventh sky. The horses brushed through their wings, but the eagles weren't hurt.
A great gladiator performance, one to remember and replay.

Next time do let us know in advance, so we be well prepared.....hahaha

Oh the blue sky, you still reveal my shining moon. It looks lovely whether its night or noon. To my lovely moon.

Magical chariot. 🔴🟠🟢

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Paul Sayer

Tue 7th Jul 2020 12:11

There always is Julie.

The magic is finding it within ourselves.

Again thank you for your support.

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Paul Sayer

Tue 7th Jul 2020 12:08

Hi Bluesky.girl.
You say...
…” I had to read ‘after the storm’ before I read this poem. Your inspirational poem was a foundation stone to this marvellous work of art”…

I am glad that you seeing my preface {unmasked as it were}. Took time to read the inspirational piece that brought this poem about Bluesky.girl.

BTW. Your new avatar’s stunning artwork and your inspired choice of new sign-in name also allowed me an in-depth insight as too exactly what I wished to convey in this piece.

Again how astute of you to sense my reluctance to stop writing.
I was at ends with myself about the ending... Was this indeed the end.

It was the foreseen outcome of the poem before I began to write. Often my poetry begins at the end in my mind. I then transcribe in verse the means to reach that destination.

I am glad you enjoyed it.

Your applause is louder than the thunderclaps contained within my poetry. 😊🌈

Signed
Po. The Thunder Child

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julie callaghan

Tue 7th Jul 2020 11:49

Wow!

Who would have thought my miserable rainy Sunday afternoon could inspire such a write.
Honestly, I am amazed that my "attempts" would ever be read by others let alone inspire such a poem.
So grateful for the nod.
There was a pot of gold at the end of that rainbow after all.

Thank you

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Paul Sayer

Tue 7th Jul 2020 09:58

Good morning Kate.

Thank you for reading this in such depth.

I was in a state of mind akin to a semi-somnambulistic stupor.

Which is a norm for me in the morn 😉

Po

Bluesky.girl

Tue 7th Jul 2020 09:53

I had to read after the storm, before I read this poem. Your inspirational poem was a foundation stone to this marvelous work of art.

Bluesky.girl

Tue 7th Jul 2020 09:51

Literary excellence. I must say a vivid picture is drawn in mind while reading this piece and pic you have chosen to go with it, all the more helps to give imagination perfect wings to capture the imagery, sounds, emotions, noise, people, God and Angel's characters you have sketched here.
To me I just witnessed a theatrical performance by well trained actors. The way the chariot came and left was awe striking beauty.
A piece well structured, well mapped, well written. I think you didn't wish to stop writing, then why you just stopped? Or may be I just felt, there was something glaringly obvious going to happen before the charioteer left.

Claps!!!!!!👏👏👏

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Kate G

Tue 7th Jul 2020 08:14

Well you've done so much with this one Po. A storm, already awe inspiring has reached the realm of the Gods.....

This one a particularly great line: From fixed stars distant, the diurnal parallax pulled against the natural rhythms thus undoing his eternal algorithms precision.

And now I have to go read After the Storm.

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