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Updated: Fri, 2 Dec 2011 06:38 pm

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Student, new to the poetry scene. Looking for critical feedback to allow me to really develop my writing skills. My work focusses on (but is not exclusive to) the juxtaposition between religion and sexuality.


Friends and foe Full of rage you curse me your words they burn me Scared, shaken, wanting to retreat Want to hide under the covers, won’t ever peek outrage, scorn, malice and hate you damn me, no compassion, your anger unabated Try to ignore you, but I must deal with you and those like you every torturous day You won’t afford me an ounce of humanity Oh Lord... “kill him”, you say. High hopes I have...high hopes Soothing words and kind faces A spirit of strength, a community of love and respect Something, I never did expect Friends. You are my friends.

All poems are copyright of the originating author. Permission must be obtained before using or performing others' poems.

Blog entries by Na'im

Carry me away (07/12/2011)

Faltering Faith (03/12/2011)

Castaway (01/12/2011)

Imprisoned (29/11/2011)

Holier than thou (29/11/2011)

Friends and foes (29/11/2011)

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Audio entries by Na'im

Faltering Faith (03/12/2011)

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Jeff Dawson

Mon 12th Dec 2011 19:08

Hi mate, great writing just had a good look through. Look forward to hearing you read some live when you're ready. ps can you enlarge the text next time, like having a bloody eye test! All the best Jeff

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Winston (Admin)

Fri 2nd Dec 2011 23:55

Hi Na'im, Welcome and thank you for completing your profile. Winston

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Jeff Dawson

Fri 2nd Dec 2011 07:27

Hi Na'im, welcome to WOL, great to meet you & glad you enjoyed Guitar n Verse, hope to see you at WOL. Thanx for comment on Magenta skies, will have a look at your poems later, cheers mate Jeff

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