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jennie

Email: jennie996@hotmail.com
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Updated: Tue, 25 Sep 2007 09:50 pm

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Hi there everyone, I started writing poetry a couple of years ago to get me through some bad times. I just picked up a pen and put the words down on paper, and since then I haven't stopped. I get pleasure from seeing what comes from my thoughts and transpires down on the page. To date I have been lucky to have had three of my poems published, one of which has been published in America, to say I had a smile on my face is an understatement :) Feel free to visit 'my space' at jennie996@hotmail and all comments welcome

Samples

Taking in the sights and sounds Yet my eyes they trace the ground Although i smile for all to see They do not sense the depth in me I show the world an outside strength Inside i cry - who am i ? Living this life on my own I do not care for being alone I want to look in anothers eyes And share with him my smile Feel arms around me holding me close Someone to want me for who i am It's not some vast plan I'd like to hold a man Who will bring forth a smile That reaches into my eyes ....

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David Franks

Sun 27th Jul 2008 14:25

Just enjoyed your poem, Jennie.

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jennie shaw

Mon 26th May 2008 15:47

Hi, apologies for not replying sooner, i've not been on here for a while,,,, thank you for your comments, they are very much appreciated, i'm pleased you liked my writing, thanks again,,, Jennie

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Tomás Ó Cárthaigh

Mon 26th May 2008 15:28

We all seek the one for life...

Kevin Connolly

Mon 17th Dec 2007 22:01

This is a great poem, Jennie.
It somehow seems really apt for this time of the year - a time when we all feel the need to be loved.
The rhyming lines are good...

sounds/ ground
see/ me
own/ alone
plan/ man

But the other lines are the hub of the poem:

I show the world an outside strength
Inside i cry - who am i ?
I want to look in another's eyes
And share with him my smile
Feel arms around me holding me close
Someone to want me for who i am
Who will bring forth a smile
That reaches into my eyes ....

Excellent.

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