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Jan Jack

Updated: Sun, 19 Feb 2012 07:40 pm

janniejack2003@yahoo.com

www.perfectverse.co.uk

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Biography

I'm a writer, comedian and bespoke poet. I write verse for customers' special occasions and I specialise in wedding speeches.

Samples

My first Disco I was off to my first disco at the local village hall, Thirteen years old, and I was giving it my ‘all’ I’d washed my hair with Dettol to get rid of all my frizz, It was plastered to my head; I knew I really looked the biz, I added a Ben Sherman shirt and Clarkes Commando shoes, Dressed up to the nines; I knew I couldn’t really lose My friend and I went in; soon I was feeling pretty glad, As I’d noticed I was being surveyed by quite a handsome lad, He didn’t take his eyes off me, ‘twas more than just a glance, He fancied me; I knew that he’d soon ask me for a dance, He walked across the dance floor and my heart filled with pure joy, Until he said “Are you a girl? ‘Cos my mate reckons you’re a boy...” ©Jan Jack 2010

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Jack Pascoe

Tue 21st Feb 2012 11:11

I think i just fell in love! I took a look at the homepage too. Absolutely and utterly brilliant. Light hearted, funny, real, and a pleasure to read out loud.

Please keep posting Jan. You rock my world. :)

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stephen j stirk

Mon 20th Feb 2012 18:00

I thought your poem was fab. Absolutely right up my street Jan. Bravo
Steve

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Fassbinder

Tue 1st Dec 2009 22:58

Good evening Jan

Loved the rhyme and rhythm to I Wish Life Were Different. Take it from me, breasts are no fun. You can have mine. That said, you make a fine point about when it's cold.

Look forward to reading more of your whimsical verse.


Fassbinder

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John Coopey

Sun 27th Sep 2009 01:25

Like the rhythm.
Not so many of us do rhymes either.
Post some more.
JC

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Sophie

Tue 24th Mar 2009 00:10

You can take my breasts if you like - I have far too many.

I enjoyed your poem very much - please keep on making me laugh! I demand the laughs post haste . x

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clarissa mckone

Mon 26th Nov 2007 05:04

LOL thats great! Dont we all wish that we could pick our body parts out? great poem thanks

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