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Elise Lennon

Email: eliselennon@googlemail.com
Updated: Mon, 2 Nov 2009 11:50 am

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I've never written before and have only been an observer for a short while. I want to keep reading and enjoying the diverse work out there. There is alot to be learnt so i'm happier to read rather than write for now.

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Free At first site love Of my life love In full flight love Kinky love Slinky love juicy love consuming love tongues-tied love entwined love white lines love white lies love hands tied love land slide love denied love love died, love controlled love despised love pained love insane love surreal love steals love I am love I hold love In me, love It’s free, love I’m free, love I’m free-love. Billboard Take down your anger Post no more- Slapping at faces that pass your way Lashing at innocents carefree sway Spitting into eyes afraid they will see You- snarling lovers souls away Hiding from who you fear you are- a contorted twisted façade your mask, your display worn to conceal you day upon day layer upon layer lie upon lie i'm frantic to unpeel you- reveal you sure that seek and I will find you sharpened nails to tear at you strip bare you bleed my fingertips for you until- the honesty of blank Bored is exposed your peace restored tender unsure fears lie crumpled on the floor wearable no more I tend your nakedness- raw pure Again You fed me (with your gift)- a decadent voracious feast that devoured my supperless silence, sowed seeds in me to reap- bounteous- replete You enlivened me- awakened me with pleasures and refrain, deliciously, sensuously, stirring me again again I feel, again I breathe, again I am brave- to let dreams flow beyond my sleep and rampage through my veins. The One I am the fine wine you can never afford I am the pre-Raphaelite temptress you chastely ignore I am the sands of time slipping through your fingers I am the fire-licking flames while you warm by embers I am the heart-pounding rhythm your feet cannot keep I am the licentious hedonist as your temperance weeps I am the vibrant dancing dreams when you resist sleep I am the interstellar dimension you’re too small to believe I am the last kiss of summer as your shadow play fades I am the one you will long for in your lonely end-days Quench Brown eyes swirl blue as I’m drawn into you osmosis begins swim within skin fluidly adept exploring your depths engorging your heart- Breathe- pump start flood through your veins minds whirlpool insane overflowing chi saturated energies your essence absorbed by my every pore drenching my being dissipating bad feelings all meanings dissolve calming turbulent souls you siphoned the frown from my once weary brow tranquillity found I succumbed- drowned submerged within blue forever in you Post-date berate I’ve only gone and done it! Am I destined never to learn? ‘Don’t give all on a first date, hold back; make him yearn’ But NO- my inner demon with intentioned lustful ways seduced to submission and teased to fruition over and over again The sweet musk smell of sex, infused his essence still within the aching of my inner thighs light scratches on my skin My body, still responsive replaying our passions shared electric jolts of pure indulgence wild abandonment of cares Now alone between my heady sheets my bedhead crumpled shame wont wash away like laundered linen to be dirtied once again

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melanie coady

Sun 30th Jan 2011 18:25

aw i love ur work hun

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winston plowes

Sun 11th Oct 2009 19:45

She's back ! good to see you posting again. Win x

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Neil West

Sun 11th Oct 2009 17:05

Thank you for sharing my poem Elise, it led me to your work which is very sensual. I enjoy your fluid use of language and look forward to reading more of your writing :)

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winston plowes

Fri 31st Jul 2009 23:54

no, new poems?

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Tomás Ó Cárthaigh

Mon 6th Jul 2009 23:55

"Free" is a nice oem with good flow...

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Andrea

Mon 15th Jun 2009 20:19

I love 'post-date berate' Elise. Very honest and very cool.

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Francine

Sun 29th Mar 2009 05:46

Your poem titled 'Free' is so simple
yet describes uninhibited love so well...

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Jack Baker

Tue 17th Mar 2009 11:28

thanks alot, Quench is very lavish and more than a little erotic!

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shoeless

Sat 14th Mar 2009 11:28

thanks for your comments Elise , yes , do i break you too . its the most painful question

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Seamus Kelly

Tue 10th Mar 2009 20:32

Thanks for your comment about "Different Dad". Sadly the Dad in question is fictional, I don't think I can dance - especially since the salsa classes ended.

Seamus

Deborah Jordan

Sat 7th Mar 2009 10:52

Hi Elise, thank you for your kind comments on "Ask" I really like your poem "The One" hold onto those thoughts, I hope he/she realises what they've let go.. one day. Deb x

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winston plowes

Fri 6th Mar 2009 13:30

Thankyou for your comments on UMT, Nail / Head / Hit. Keep posting
Winston

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Chris Dawson

Wed 4th Mar 2009 23:01

Thank-you for your comments on 'scrabble online'. I like 'The One' - like many others, it seems, I can identify!
Cx

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Mia Darlone

Mon 2nd Mar 2009 15:40

Ah thank you for your lovely comment! I like The One, I wrote one recently along those lines with 'In time you'll realise the grass ain't greener, I'm moving on - you swapped Cristal for Ribena'. Nothing like a bit of bitterness eh?!

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winston plowes

Sat 28th Feb 2009 13:08

Hi Elise, Yes there is lots to learn. we are all learning. Nothing wrong with blurting either lol. Some of my best ones have been blurtatious
Winston

Janet

Fri 27th Feb 2009 14:17

Hi Elise, just want to say thanks for your recent comments which are very much appreciated.

Sorry it took so long but having pc problems.
Janet.x

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sian howell

Sun 22nd Feb 2009 21:36

thanks elise for your kind comments...I have no idea where this one came from but I was drawn to write it...it was heartfelt X

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winston plowes

Fri 20th Feb 2009 14:54

Hi Elise, Thanks for spending time again to look and listen to one of my poems (Nearly Nine). Keep posting.
Winston

Captain of the Rant

Tue 17th Feb 2009 12:12

Hey Elise, thanks for your comment! I think the poem needs a bit of a rewrite personally... but I guess not much of my poetry is meant to be read off the page, so God knows why I post it on here ;) I really like 'Free' from your lot.

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garside

Tue 17th Feb 2009 10:20

Hi Elise

thank you for taking time to read my work and make comment

steve

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sian howell

Mon 16th Feb 2009 14:33

thanks again Elise...for your most recent comment.
Sian X

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sian howell

Mon 16th Feb 2009 12:44

Just read your comment...thank you very much Elise....it is actually inspired by my daughter who is, to me, very precious... she is growing up and blossoming (as they all do). The poem reflects my position as well as hers.
Love your work.
Sian X

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winston plowes

Sat 14th Feb 2009 21:58

Hi Elise, RE Hanged up
An exact interpretation of my little offering! I wanted the words "the end" to signify the end in the traditional way but also for it to be part of the meaning of the poem. Thanks for posting a comment. Winston
Thanks for offering added info for you work here and keep writing and posting

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winston plowes

Thu 12th Feb 2009 23:35

Just read your poem "Free"
Liked the rhythm and a found the choice of rhymes interesting. Especially liked
the stanza -
white lines love
white lies love
hands tied love
land slide love
denied love
love died, love

and the change at the end hit me. Keep looking, keep reading and the more you read the better you get at writting.
Winston

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Chris Dawson

Thu 12th Feb 2009 23:01

Hi Elise,
Thanks for reading & for your comments,
Cx

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shoeless

Thu 12th Feb 2009 14:05

thankyou for your comment , :)

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Gus Jonsson

Wed 11th Feb 2009 17:59

Hi Elise

always tuck my night shirt in my socks when i'm away...

Thanks again
Gus

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