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Anon

Updated: Wed, 30 Nov 2011 06:53 pm

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Joining for feedback of my work! I used to write all the time, then stopped, so now attempting to get back in the habit. I like poems rather than poets (if that makes sense!) and my faves include: 'First Day At School' by Roger McGough 'Stealing' by Carol Ann Duffy 'Matilda' by Hilaire Belloc 'The New Duckling' by Alfred Noyes Will add more when I think of them! There was also a really good (but v v long) poem about a lost dog (it might have been lost in Japan??) that I read once and really liked but I can't remember who it's by. It contained the line "you are lost and you know it" either over and over or in a place where the line really stood out as it's the main thing I remember about the poem. It also made reference to "empty neon"?! If anyone's ever read it and knows who wrote it please let me know!!

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You YouTube when you should be working Distracted by dance steps Make-up tutorials How to wear your hair in a bun Humongous sticks of carrot Dipped in garlic houmous Washed down with Corona to Commiserate missing your deadline Europe when you dropped out of uni Questions the time was never right for Emailed frantically to hostels in Amsterdam Your answers on a postcard Eureka moments late at night Over whisky over ice over a spliff Peeling the layers off the beer mat Comforted that someone somewhere at some time felt the same Euthanising extreme emotions With small talk and pleasantries Perpetuating the illusion that no one Reacts to the riot inside Ubiquitous caricatures of stereotypes The same conversations in the same bars The world over Signal home time You go through the motions Post albums of your travels on Facebook Find a suit you don’t hate, a job you do and YouTube when you should be working.

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Blog entries by Anon

HOLIDAY (04/11/2012)

Fixed verse advice (30/11/2011)

Super (30/11/2011)

You. (15/11/2011)

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Isobel

Sun 4th Nov 2012 20:52

Hello Anon. Does your profile picture represent two blank pages or one big hairless arse? You may think I'm joking but it wouldn't be the first time folks have posted such things :)

I like your profile poem. It sounds like you've lived.

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Winston (Admin)

Fri 2nd Dec 2011 12:44

Hi Anon

Welcome to WOL. Winston

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Ann Foxglove

Thu 1st Dec 2011 07:25

Hi Anon - welcome to WOL. Just read your poems so far and enjoyed them. Hope you carry on being creative, and get the feedback you're looking for. Don't be afraid to comment on other people's stuff, it encourages them to comment on yours.

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