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not the same

Not the same

 

The result is another poem unlike the one

I wrote in my head.

The poem that has another conclusion

this because the inner voice changed my opinion.

I try the Grammarly that informs about passive

the sentence, well it was meant to be passive, worst

of all, it suggests a change of words which is

Ignored I’m not writing a document.

The Grammarly helpful wi...

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the long journey

The long journey

 I have been through the cosmos seen stars and planets

now I’m back to earth, I have seen so many things

right. Bad and ugly, but our world is the greenest, but

it is the only one that can’t keep the peace and the only one

that has religions pitting people against people.

Sadness is to think for every plant we eradicate and

for the animals we kill to make us w...

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