criticism (Remove filter)
They come from far
Blind, I grown blind.
No color, no light.
Pain, I felt pain.
No matter, no gain.
Looking through the mirror glass,
things happen afar.
Taking notion of them,
as they were part.
There's no true,
there's no lie,
everything stays shy.
Scream, scream for those who can't.
Deaf, I am deaf.
No sound, no play.
Help, they need help.
...Tuesday 13th December 2016 9:25 am
The Garden
The Garden
The violets speak softly to me,
They whisper to remember who came before,
The tiger-lilies interrogate me,
They say that spring pastures are no more,
The violet flowers inspire me to see my powers pure,
With the gifts that Venus pours my beauty will adorn,
The tiger-lilies scratch and chase me,
They say my will is cracked and torn,
The...
Thursday 23rd June 2016 5:13 pm
Splendid Is The Flower
Splendid Is The Flower
if I make something beautiful
will you gently touch it
with your perspective
or will you taint it
with a vengeful critics tongue
am I qualified
to judge you
either way
if I make something beautiful
will you take the time
to kiss it with your praise
or will you rip it to shreds
with your own experience
are you qual...
Saturday 7th May 2016 12:19 am
bombardment
hurry..hurry..
volatile flickering glim--
exposed and expiring
within trenchant
tangling convolutions
murmur..murmur..
fragile faithless prayers--
wrestled and relented
from incoherent
idling dissolutions
stumble..stumble..
Sunday 1st May 2016 12:16 am
My Poetry
In writing poetry
I am a hack.
But I enjoy
writing so give
me some slack.
With the
comments don't
be mean, or
overly critical.
Please be
correct,
and please
be political.
This poem was not written
about anyone on writeoutloud.net
This is jus...
Tuesday 2nd July 2013 8:39 am
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