Many thanks Adam for your comments. Funnily after posting I went downstairs and wrote a dozen more lines and realised that it had veered from physical to whimsical and indeed those last four lines weren't a good fit.
Thank you
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Hi Adam - "Edward" - glad you liked it. I read your bio - very impressive. That plinth - I wrote a rather silly poem about that called "Ant & Deck" - I'll post it - but like i said, it is just daft. B
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Thanks for passing by and your comments on my work - a lot of people say they like the imagery in my poems. I enjoyed reading Heart:Burial so please post some more of your poems.
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Hi Adam, wecome aboard. Hope you enjoy exploring the site. Winston
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Hi Adam, welcome to WOL. I enjoyed reading Heart:Burial very much.
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Hello Adam, welcome to WOL. Look forward to reading some of your work.
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darren thomas
Wed 13th Oct 2010 23:34
Hi Adam - I've just enjoyed reading some of your writing. There's a distinct edge to it that sets it apart from much of what I've read recently. Although to be honest - Bukowski, Collins and Thomas are grossly overrated!
That's 'Dylan' by the way... and not...***coughs nervously***
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