stefan wilde

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Fri 6th Aug 2010 17:57

ooer! when the crinkles come'a'creeping eh. brilliant,brilliant poem-thanks John--Stef.

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stefan wilde

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Fri 6th Aug 2010 17:53

write on Dave!-people who don,t give others a chance-little realise they don,t give themselves a chance-here endeth the lesson according to Saint Stefan!(I wish!)ta Mr. D!...you,ll do for me Tommy!

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stefan wilde

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Fri 6th Aug 2010 17:37

Hi big Dave-FunnyDunny! I,ve actually invented a new word describing Welsh people in the rain-Squelsh!-yerv bin a lu v v ly audience-gerrnite now! Mad Wilde-

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ray miller

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Fri 6th Aug 2010 17:21

I thought first 3 verses were very good - so phantom were her dreams is a great line, as Ann said - though I don't think the rest lived up to expectaions.Partly because I'm not familiar with the myth but also I thought the quality of writing waned. It's gangrene by the way.

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Dave Bradley

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Fri 6th Aug 2010 16:32

Hi John

Thanks for commenting on 'Care Home'. Good luck with the book.

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Dave Bradley

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Fri 6th Aug 2010 16:29

This is very good Rachel. Tut, how did I miss it? Hopefully the recent change will mean less blogs slipping by. Nothing since?

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Graham Sherwood

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Fri 6th Aug 2010 15:38

Dave, some really hard-hitting word duo's in this piece.
Sitting/shitting, rubbed and scrubbed and hungry for hugs etc. Absolutely on the money. Graham

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Graham Sherwood

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Fri 6th Aug 2010 15:34

Absolutely charming Ann. I didn't like the "very nice" (waste of words) or the reference to Classic FM but the sentiment shone through.Well done.

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stefan wilde

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Fri 6th Aug 2010 14:35

Good afternoon Ros-very kind of you to comment-look forward to your next poem with the greatest of anticipation!(and the lovely smile too!)thanks-Stefan-x

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Fri 6th Aug 2010 14:30

Hi Lynn-your time blimping my poo-etry is much appreciated with a humungus muchness-hope your workyweek has gone well-lorra love-Wildey-xx-(B-xx)

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Ros

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Fri 6th Aug 2010 14:27

Hello Stefan, this is really very moving!.. Thanks for your comments on my poem. I haven't posted anything for quite a while but may give it another try soon. Thanks again, Ros x

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Lynn Dye

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Fri 6th Aug 2010 14:06

Oops nearly missed this one, Larisa. I agree with Stefan, it is really beautiful xxx

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stefan wilde

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Fri 6th Aug 2010 13:59

First time meeting of you by me-I live one and a half miles down your road-lol!lovely sample poem-very clever! thanks very much-Stefan Wilde-ps-love the smile too!

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Ros

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Fri 6th Aug 2010 13:59

Augusta wrote such a variety of poetry,some extremely beautiful and touching. I always wondered what she would come up with next.
Would really like to see her revisit WOL xx

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Lynn Dye

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Fri 6th Aug 2010 13:45

Lovely poem, Stef, some brilliant lines, I like "darkly gloved in sleep" and several others too. Love, Lynn xxx

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Heather

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Fri 6th Aug 2010 12:35

A quick wit, an amazing sense of rhythm and beat and a fantastic subject matter. What's not to like? This is both original and very well written, I aspire to have your talent with words.

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Heather

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Fri 6th Aug 2010 12:21

The opening and the ending are both so sublime and all the words in between are very nicely put together. I love the emotion and the short lines of this.

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Heather

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Fri 6th Aug 2010 12:19

Thank you so much for your comments on Persephone's Creek, that's exactly what I wanted the shoes to represent :) They were the starting point for my poem actually, it only got the title and mythological theme later.

I love Upong the Quality of love by the way, it flows so smoothly and reads so beautifully. You're a very talented poet xxx

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Heather

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Fri 6th Aug 2010 12:16

Thanks for the comments on Persphone's Creek. I'm glad you liked that line, it's one of my favourites :)

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Heather

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Fri 6th Aug 2010 12:15

Thanks for your kind comments, Andy. I'm half tempted to add an audio, it might get me more used to reading my poems for an audience. I'll take another look at that line,
Heather xx

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Banksy

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Fri 6th Aug 2010 12:02

BTW - you dont look like a ginger minge (as my redhaired ex used to refer to herself) :)

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Fri 6th Aug 2010 12:00

So is you sayin' the rest of me poems is crap? ;-) xxxx
Not at all m'dear - but after perfection what else can you aim for ??
Yes - another dose of perfection !

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Fri 6th Aug 2010 11:53

No - I just thought it'd make a good name - like Chlamydia or Candida (hmm - that's a real name come to think of it !).
"Oh, yes, Chlamydia and I were taking afternoon tea at the Ritz..." :)

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Fri 6th Aug 2010 11:44

Wonderful! this is what drew me in-
I thought of you today.
In a teashop in Penzance.
I couldn't help but read on - great poetry. B

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Dave Dunn aka Rhumour

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Fri 6th Aug 2010 11:38

Hi Ann - I was into digital photo editing to a small extent 25 years ago - but it was getting my hands on the RISC OS system that radically improved things for me - Photodesk was incredibly powerful even 15 years ago - much easier than Photoshop on the PC. You can of course buy photo clip art discs with 'royalty free' images on them - a safe way to find a suitable image. My own interest was born out of the need to provide large images for exhibition panels - most enlargements looked 'blocky' or pixelated when we used the zoom functions on our big colour copier, so I would scan the images into the computer and do what I could to soften the ragged edges, hehe. It can be fun playing with photo editors, but I've yet to find a windows program I like to use for that purpose. best wishes, Dave

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Ann Foxglove

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Fri 6th Aug 2010 11:20

Interesting about the photo Dave. Are you well up on this sort of stuff? I am in a pickle over photos at the mo. I often used to use stuff from Flikka but now Flikka seems to have changed and you can't copy/save an image (or I don't seem to be able to!) I suppose it was prob not legal or something to use the photos? But it was called "Photo sharing" so I did! Will I have to get a camera now and spend all day taking photos to use? And scan stuff from books etc (prob illegal too?) Or have no photo image to go with a poem? That always seemed an integral part of it to me. Oh pooh! xx

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Dave Dunn aka Rhumour

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Fri 6th Aug 2010 11:01

Hehe - and who am I to deny it Ann? ;) The picture is a composite I made from some of my digital photos - the sky from the fens, the wildfowl from Peakirk bird park, the 'house' derived from the village school house - all heavily edited in Photodesk about 12 years ago on my trusty RISC-OS computer... Best wishes, Dave

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Ann Foxglove

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Fri 6th Aug 2010 10:47

So is you sayin' the rest of me poems is crap? ;-) xxxx

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Ann Foxglove

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Fri 6th Aug 2010 10:45

Oh Dave - Now you know that I am always right! ;-) xx
PS The photo intrigues me - is it your holiday home??

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Fri 6th Aug 2010 10:36

Hehe - well there you go - Ann was correct in her assumption :) I thought you might have read this one before on one of the other sites Larisa. It is a purely phonetic (or fun-etic)poem of nonsense, with a nod or 3 to Lewis Carroll :) Best wishes, Dave

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

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Fri 6th Aug 2010 10:29

Hi, Dave! This poem I can't understand either. lol I can only guess. Is it Welsh?

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Ann Foxglove

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Fri 6th Aug 2010 09:50

Hi Abegail - welcome to WOL. I love your sample poem. I must look up your other work!

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Fri 6th Aug 2010 08:56

I like this one - tis one I can identify with and a favourite subject of mine. I like the way you have woven it with myth. The shoes seem to represent a sell out and entrapment in your poem - I think shoes are wonderful images - they can represent so many things.

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Ann Foxglove

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Fri 6th Aug 2010 08:51

Knowing you, is there some weird reason for her name? (A follow up called Opening Ceremony perhaps? ;-)) Reminds me of that song "If you can't be the one you love, love the one you're with" (which has never worked for me alas!) xx

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Fri 6th Aug 2010 08:50

Hi Ann, thanks for commenting in the spirit of the nornesaynce, hehe. I shouldn't worry about Larisa tho', I think she will have seen this one before, but if not she knows me well enuf! Best wishes, Dave

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Fri 6th Aug 2010 08:49

I like this Heather. One of those poems that you need to read a few times. "so phantom were her dreams" is a lovely line.xx

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Fri 6th Aug 2010 08:44

Er . . . all I can say is ner wundellmakur est is blunndge far noot slay ind fandummell waze! (But if Stef's poem confused Larissa I hope she can understand this one Dave!) xx

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andy n

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Fri 6th Aug 2010 08:04

Good stuff, Heather.. You defo should get out and perform your pieces more.

On this piece I really enjoyed this - however on this line you may have a word missing 'She would prophecy of dresses' x

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Fri 6th Aug 2010 00:52

http://www.google.co.uk/images?hl=en&q=fibonacci+in+nature&um=1&ie=UTF-8&source=univ&ei=X1BbTK3WBpi80gTx7KBu&sa=X&oi=image_result_group

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these images express the golden ratio of fibonacci sequence in nature.
ive no idea why your poem reminded me of the rule now other than because its complex structure forms a simple image that is beautiful and can be appreciated on either a complex or simple level.
This mathematical rule either understands or expresses numerous occurances in natures beauty...fascinating

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stefan wilde

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Thu 5th Aug 2010 23:39

Thank you Larisa so much-I am looking forward very much to read your poem about your Father-Stef-xx(M-xx)

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

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Thu 5th Aug 2010 23:33

Hi, Stefan! This poem, as to my opinion, is the best. I love it so much. I remembered my father who taught me a lot. Thank you for sharing. Your poems always inspire me for writing something new. And... now....I am sure....I;ll write about my father.
With love and warmest wishes,

Laura

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Thu 5th Aug 2010 22:29

Thank you for that further insight into your sense of humour... I do love it! I just wish I could respond in kind. My problem is that I only remember the really filthy ones that I couldn't put on here. I'll mail one to that address up there - if it still works. x

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Thu 5th Aug 2010 21:27

Sad news - a friend of mine drowned in a bowl of Muesli -
got pulled in by a strong currant.

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Banksy

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Thu 5th Aug 2010 21:23

waddya mean a terribible joke ??
- that's one of me better ones :)

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stefan wilde

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Thu 5th Aug 2010 18:45

Good evening Anthony-thanks for time and very welcome,kind comment re'Different kind of war'-much obliged-Stef.

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John Darwin

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Thu 5th Aug 2010 14:02

Dave, strikes a chord for me and many others I am sure. A terrible guilt-ridden, haunting one. The chord it strikes, not the piece :-)

John

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andy n

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Thu 5th Aug 2010 13:37

good stuff, dave - well told! the last line threw me a little originally thou..

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Thu 5th Aug 2010 13:35

"earth separates us both" - I like that line it kind of brings you both together.

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Thu 5th Aug 2010 11:56

Isobel. edgy academic = mad professor. No ta. I'll ignore the Black humour.

Rachel. I actually googled "golden rule in nature" there's so many of them! No silver or bronze rules that us lower classes might aspire to live by, all is golden. So which one do you mean?

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Thu 5th Aug 2010 10:05

ahh! gotcha.

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