Lynn Dye

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Fri 30th Jul 2010 23:07

Hi Bernadette, thank you so much for lovely comments on 17½ and Seal Pups. I did enjoy Life's Puzzle - good to have you back posting again! Lynn xx

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Louise Fazackerley

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Fri 30th Jul 2010 23:04

my sort of poetry. your 'fishing industry' poem is really powerful and 'she's gone' is real-life and is my friday night right now :)

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Bernadette Herbertson

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Fri 30th Jul 2010 22:54

Hi Ann how are you , well i hope. i have posted comment on your < Incurable Romantics > blog..ive been rather busy with housepainting yuk ! finished now though so will need to try and write some stuff for wol now ! xx bernadette ps. have put two new ones on if you care to read them. The one titled , An african mothers loss was actually written in 1987 around the band aid era .

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Banksy

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Fri 30th Jul 2010 22:53

Hi - "That black place" - thanks for the comments Win. reading from Anthony just above - have you seen Mercy Street video from Peter Gabriel - makes me shiver just thinking about it - wonderful words http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zs35CBGOxbc all the best. B

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Bernadette Herbertson

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Fri 30th Jul 2010 22:47

Hi Lynn thank you for your comment on my recent blog entry . I have posted comments on your ..17 1/2 and seal pups.. entries ..xxx

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Bernadette Herbertson

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Fri 30th Jul 2010 22:29

Well lynn what can i say you have captured the stark reality of this most truly barbaric carnage of these beautiful babies..poor defencless creatures..could go on and on about this but we all know how bad it is don't we and it is so sad..lv bernadette x x

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winston plowes

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Fri 30th Jul 2010 22:23

Hmm.. I liked this for some reason. The combination of picture and words and the abrupt finish. and the rhythm in the last 3 lines. Win

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Fri 30th Jul 2010 22:21

Hi Lynn thank you for your comment on < An african mothers loss > yes it is so sad and even sadder that it is a reality for these poor people. Enjoyed 17 1/2 and yes a sequel would be good just like the ongoing saga with the kenco coffee < i think it was that one > ad that was on the telly. do you remember it ? like stef i will wait with abated anticipation lol xxbernadette

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winston plowes

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Fri 30th Jul 2010 22:19

Very moving Thomas. liked the whole presentation. Win

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Lynn Dye

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Fri 30th Jul 2010 22:19

I love this poem, Ann, I guess I'm just another incurable romantic!! xx

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Lynn Dye

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Fri 30th Jul 2010 22:09

Just lovely, Dave, and your voice is perfect too.

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Lynn Dye

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Fri 30th Jul 2010 22:00

A lovely poem, Larisa. xxx

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Lynn Dye

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Fri 30th Jul 2010 21:56

Oh, so sad, Bernadette, yet so good. Well done xxx

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Banksy

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Fri 30th Jul 2010 21:28

you daft bugger - you've put an entirely different spin on it now -mind you, I can see what you mean!

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Bernadette Herbertson

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Fri 30th Jul 2010 18:36

thank you so much for your positive comment steph..i actually had dated this one and it was done in 1987 ! !
xx-bernadette

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Isobel

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Fri 30th Jul 2010 17:35

Who's a big boy then...

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spencer

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Fri 30th Jul 2010 16:37

hello there , I thought about the way the sentence was constructed and decided that it had a better impact the way it is , after all it made you think !!

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stefan wilde

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Fri 30th Jul 2010 16:20

Hi again Bernadette-do not trouble yourself regarding writing poems,as I mentioned before,you will like all of us improve with time-no one begins at the top.But it is neccessary to keep reading and listening to poetry audios etc.I,m no better or worse than your good self...just keep plugging away,and who knows one day!.....love-Stef-xx

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stefan wilde

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Fri 30th Jul 2010 16:14

There but for the Grace of God eh Bernadette-we should always remember these poor people,as much as possible...very sad poem,but well written-thank you very much-Stef-xx

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Fri 30th Jul 2010 16:08

Good afternoon to you my lovely friend Bernadette-your kind comment on 'Always-Yes!is very much appreciated-thanks girly! lorrer luv-Stef-xx

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Bernadette Herbertson

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Fri 30th Jul 2010 13:54

Thank you so much steph for your feedback...the thing is with me i have very little knowledge regarding poetry i have never studied it and i only own one book titled < national year of reading 2008..a poem for every day of the year> but it is something i enjoy doing and it all comes fresh from my head so no influence from anywhere just my own original stuff. i do not understand the pros and cons of poetry language so i suppose i am doing ok so far ? i am going to put a blog on now it is one i wrote away back in the eighties around the band aid time.. appreciate feedback on it thanks...lv berniexx

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Fri 30th Jul 2010 09:53

Good morning Larisa-friendship,as long as it is sincere,is so important in this busy hectic life.And it nice to be able to rely on real friends in times of need.Good subject,very good poem-thank you-Stef-xx(M-xx)

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Fri 30th Jul 2010 08:41

Good morning sweetness and light! yep no problems regarding your poem'Lifes puzzles'-I was indicating that you-are-getting better at writing poems,as I can see having read this poem-thanks very much for comments on'Togetherness'-keep well ducky-catch you later-glad you have put your paintbrushes down for a while by the way-Stef-xx

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andy n

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Fri 30th Jul 2010 07:59

powerful piece, tomas.. enjoyed reading this!

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Fri 30th Jul 2010 00:38

Hi Bernadette - thanks for your comments on @A Certain Lady' :)
Best wishes, Dave

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Bernadette Herbertson

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Fri 30th Jul 2010 00:23

oh yes ann i think all of us can be secret romantics we are all human after all and grow up with the idea of romance but it doesn't always live up to our expectations unfortunetly ! love bernadette xx your words are cleverly put together ..good poem

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Bernadette Herbertson

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Fri 30th Jul 2010 00:13

lovely poem ..bernadette herbertson

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Bernadette Herbertson

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Fri 30th Jul 2010 00:06

hi steph ive just read larisas..the sea..and really enjoyed it as i love the sea myself and it was so discriptive and well thought out...when you say about mine..lifes puzzle...we can only get better does that mean it is not good. dont realy know where the thought came from when i do my poems they come into my head and then are done very quickly it all seems to just flow through my mind. when i wrote cheeky monkey i did it whilst my friend was in the shower ! no more paint brushes for me for a while so no fear of me bringing one onto he sight ha ha! would appreciate another comment from you regards my poem so i understand what you mean..thanks lv herbedaceous !xx

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Fri 30th Jul 2010 00:02

Hi Tommy... Brilliant this. Captures the effort so well. I have riden most of the major mountains regularly in the tour."Between the shoulders lakes of fire" nice... Don't think it relates in any way to Mr Tom. Greatly enjoyed this, thanks Tommy. Win x

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Bernadette Herbertson

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Thu 29th Jul 2010 23:46

Really nice poem Larissa..i love the sea myself and enjoyed reading this.. love bernadette xx

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Thu 29th Jul 2010 22:16

Thank you, Dave! xxx

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

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Thu 29th Jul 2010 22:06

Oh, no Dave! We are not at the age to blush. I remember when I was 20 and an Englishman kissed my hand, I really blushed. Strange, but now I do not blush.
M

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Thu 29th Jul 2010 21:54

A splendid poem of friendship as it should be :)

Best wishes, Dave

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Thu 29th Jul 2010 21:49

You will make me blush Larisa! Many thanks my friend :)

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Alison Smiles

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Thu 29th Jul 2010 21:48

Might it work better with the fourth line of the first verse
Why do you precariously poise? It just felt a teeny bit clumsy - could just be personal preference of couse!

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

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Thu 29th Jul 2010 21:47

Dear Dave! It's not my kindness, it's your greatness.

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Dave Dunn aka Rhumour

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Thu 29th Jul 2010 21:41

Thank you so much for your very kind comments on my voice and poem - much appreciated my friend :) Best wishes, Dave

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Dave Dunn aka Rhumour

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Thu 29th Jul 2010 21:38

Thanks my friend - you are very kind :) I've sent that one to Michelle to use on her radio show hopefully :)

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

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Thu 29th Jul 2010 21:35

Your voice is fantastic. And... your poem is beautiful. I've never heard anything better. With warmest wishes,Laura.xxx

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stefan wilde

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Thu 29th Jul 2010 20:35

Hi Bernadette-have put comment to this poem on your blog-hope thats ok-Stef-xx

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stefan wilde

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Thu 29th Jul 2010 20:33

hey up!!!troubles back! haha-lovely to hear from you again Bernadette-glad you are well,despite the business you are enduring-there again keeping on the move is highly recommended for sure-and re writing in the late hours sometimes is better regarding clarity of mind and silence combined-sometimes works to ones advantage-regarding 'Lifes Puzzle'I can see that like Larisa,s lovely poem'Sea' you have put a lot lot of thought and obviously time into this poem.And like anybody including Mr Me...we can only get better,can we not-well done girly-call in anytime-but DO NOT bring a spare paintbrush-lotsa love-Stef-xx

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stefan wilde

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Thu 29th Jul 2010 19:00

no way would I be taking the P! Banksy-I respect you too much to play the silly buggers-thanks again for comments and extremely good poetry-my best regards-Stefan-

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

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Thu 29th Jul 2010 18:58

Thank you!

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

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Thu 29th Jul 2010 18:55

Hi! Thank you so much for your beautiful comment. With love and warmest wishes, Laura

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Bernadette Herbertson

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Thu 29th Jul 2010 18:49

this is really nice..bernadette herbertson

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Thu 29th Jul 2010 18:15

Thanks Stefan - but I think you are either being altogether too kind or more likely just taking the P*ss ! - either way, don't tell me or it'll just spoil the illusion !

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Thu 29th Jul 2010 18:08

Hi - thanks to both & very amusing. No - I hadn't read the paper yet as the lazy bitch still hadn't ironed the damn thing ;)

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Bernadette Herbertson

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Thu 29th Jul 2010 17:38

hi steph thats me back again. iv'e been sooooooo... busy lately. have been doing some house painting and decided i'd better crawl out of the woodwork and put pen to paper .my latest blog entry was done at 5.30 AM when i was sitting in the kitchen with a brew wondering why the hell I couldn't get to sleep..not sure where it came from well I guess out of my head of course ..amazing what you can write in the early hours ha ha ..probably doesn't make sense ..will appreciate your comment with you being such a superb writer..xx bernadette

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

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Thu 29th Jul 2010 11:05

Hi, Stefan! Thank you very much for reading my poem "The Sea" and for your kind comment. I value it. With warmest wishes, Larisa

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stefan wilde

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Thu 29th Jul 2010 10:54

You have put a lot of work into this beautiful poem Larisa-and its worth every second of your time in having done so-as it is in every second of reading it! brilliant! lots of love-Stef-xx(M-xx)

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