Dave Dunn aka Rhumour

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Sun 1st Aug 2010 19:48

Hi Stefan, I have now tweaked the third line of that last stanza, nowt dramatic thar knowz ;)
Best wishes, Dave

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Dave Dunn aka Rhumour

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Sun 1st Aug 2010 19:19

Well I have now tweaked the third line of that last stanza Stefan, maybe it is a little easier on the tongue - especially as I removed the 'deliberate (lol) mistake' :)

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stefan wilde

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Sun 1st Aug 2010 18:58

oh! you see-you are doing it again-stop worrying about posting-put a poem on when it suits you-not anyone else.keep cool girly! yours truly-Mr Potato head-xx

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Bernadette Herbertson

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Sun 1st Aug 2010 18:50

Hi stef im just browsing through.Thing is I have nothing to put on ! I will need to write something soon but alas it has to jump into my thoughts first,I even wonder what on earth it will be about but as soon as it happens my pen and paper will be at the ready Hope you yourself have had a nice weekend xxHerbedacious

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Bernadette Herbertson

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Sun 1st Aug 2010 18:41

Yes stef you beat me ha ha ! funny one Lynn lol xx bernadette

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Sun 1st Aug 2010 18:36

ah but!its your heart that is the perfect size....without doubt lovely girly,and thats all that matters,eh what! now put that cream cake down-lol!-ugs'n'kisses-Stef-xx(G-xx)psst..beat Herbychops on this!

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Sun 1st Aug 2010 17:54

Trust Herbertsons kid to get her twopennyworth in first! jumping the queue in front of old people(like me!)as to having to wait six weeks...no way Lynn..I would have to get a blow up doll,to keep me going-like the one thats in my wardobe...DOH!!..pass the bucket quick! good one sexy Dyechops-lotsa 'thingy'-Stef-xx(B-xx)

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Sun 1st Aug 2010 17:24

Good evening lovely Lady-your request,regarding a happy ending romantic poem has been noted and will soon be undertaken.Sincerely hope you have had a nice week-end and that your week goes well-thank you so much for comments on'Biding my time' and all of your kind thoughts,be thinking of you-speak soon-Steffers-xxxx

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Rachel Bond

Sun 1st Aug 2010 17:13

I think this poem outstanding.

warm, real, moving and beautifully crafted.

excellent x

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Francine

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Sun 1st Aug 2010 17:05

This flows along nicely, Sophie, and you have combined the analogy of the sky with Sky Broadcasting so incredibly well. The imagery is beautiful and fascinating...

Bravo !
Francine x

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

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Sun 1st Aug 2010 16:25

Hi, dear Bernadette! Thank you very much for your beautiful comment on my "Something about me". With warmest wishes to you and your family, Larisa

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Bernadette Herbertson

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Sun 1st Aug 2010 15:59

lovely photograph Larisa you must be so proud of your beautiful grandson..I have 3 gorgeous grandsons and another one due in october so I can relate to your poem very well..love Bernadette x

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Bernadette Herbertson

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Sun 1st Aug 2010 15:51

Well done Lynn you did it gave us a sequel ..well you've started it off now ! this could end up a book ! or at least a short story please as you can't end it here now you have got our minds racing and bet stef will comment soon ..ha ha I beat him to it .. very good follow on so keep on writing ...love Bernadette x x

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Sun 1st Aug 2010 13:31

This is really good and thought provoking. I enjoyed it too.

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Lynn Dye

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Sun 1st Aug 2010 13:30

Hi Ian just stumbled on your poem somewhat late. Really enjoyed it, some excellent lines.

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Lynn Dye

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Sun 1st Aug 2010 13:24

Wonderful poem, Ann, so pure and heartfelt. Respectful hugs, Lynn.

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Banksy

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Sun 1st Aug 2010 13:22

- strong exception - is that taken with a pinch of salt? :)

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Lynn Dye

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Sun 1st Aug 2010 13:09

Hi Bernadette, just posted an answer to you on my 17½ poem. I do remember those coffee ads, they were good, weren't they, but I'm sure Stefan's hoping for a sequel cos I wrote a series on the Angel and the Beachcomber. Anyway, I had fun with writing this sequel, so thanks to both of you for that!! Lynn xxx

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stefan wilde

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Sun 1st Aug 2010 13:03

So brilliantly different! loved it-thanks-Stef.

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Lynn Dye

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Sun 1st Aug 2010 13:03

Thanks Bernadette, yes, I do remember the coffee ad, I think Stefan is remembering my sequels to the Angel poem though. As I said, I hadn't originally planned a sequel to this, but what the heck, I am just about to post it now!! xxx

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Sun 1st Aug 2010 12:56

Hello again Dave, commiserations on your loss of Griff, and thanks for comment on Max. There has to be something extra special about border collies, I think... Warmest Wishes, Lynn

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Lynn Dye

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Sun 1st Aug 2010 12:49

What a stunning picture of you both, Larisa, and a lovely poem. xx

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Rachel Bond

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Sun 1st Aug 2010 12:09

i like this..i found it humorous yet edgy
employed to collect red wine and sushi,

filter and ferment into something fruity -

that's my trickle-down theory of beauty.

i like the trickle down theory of beauty...

I also loved the basement 'verse'. i still dont know the academic difference of the verse and stanza...but i like your explanation better. your choice of objects and place are familiar the poem is tangible and real on cerebral subject...i like work that is grounded. i like its normalcy unlike the pretensiousness of my own loft.

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Dave Dunn aka Rhumour

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Sun 1st Aug 2010 12:02

Hi Ann - thank you for your comments on 'A Certain Lady' :)

Best wishes,
Dave

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Ann Foxglove

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Sun 1st Aug 2010 11:44

As a redhead wearing reading glasses - I take strong exception to this poem Mr Banksyperson!! (xx)

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

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Sun 1st Aug 2010 11:30

You have a beautiful heart Stefan. Thank you very much for your comment.

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stefan wilde

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Sun 1st Aug 2010 11:23

Beautiful Grandson-beautiful Grandma-beautiful poem! thank you,from a not so beautiful..Stef-xx(M-xx)

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Jonboy Walton

Sun 1st Aug 2010 11:19

Hi Ann,Thanks for posting this link to the fab "Sister Sledge".Just brightened up my morning! What a bass player!By the way,loved your Little Cardboard Box poem too!Felt like I was actually there re-living the moment with you as I read!

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Sun 1st Aug 2010 10:40

I love this Thomas. An excellent poem.

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Ann Foxglove

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Sun 1st Aug 2010 10:36

Lovely poem Dave. xx

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Ann Foxglove

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Sun 1st Aug 2010 10:30

Wot new language have you been learing Kath? I was just thinking of you this morning, wondering where you'd gone. Glad your back and I LOVE this. Talk about original! xx

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Sun 1st Aug 2010 10:27

And I mean Groove babe! xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

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Sun 1st Aug 2010 10:23

Thank you Jeff for reading my poems and for your kind comment. With warmest wishes, Larisa

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

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Sun 1st Aug 2010 10:17

Thank you dear Lynn for your comments on my latest poems. With love, Larisa

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Sun 1st Aug 2010 09:40

Hi Winston

thanks for taking the time to look at the images on the site - and yes to be by the sea indeed - tis a sweet dream eh :-)

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Sun 1st Aug 2010 09:38

Hi Cynthia - apols for the delay - thanks for your thought and good to chat with you recently

take care

steve x

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ray miller

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Sun 1st Aug 2010 08:31

You really ought to call it Thoughts of Partet.The closing two lines are quite beautiful in an odd sort of way! The trouble with "porm" is that it's too close to porn.

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Francine

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Sun 1st Aug 2010 01:45

This makes complete sense to me : )

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kath hewitt

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Sun 1st Aug 2010 01:07

for july

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Sun 1st Aug 2010 01:04

A Skussle of Bips prowl through crumid darkness,
coniphany voices send thoughts of Partet.
The Glucker they seek is salmy
and filled with porm.
Foona-Plate is almost upon them
and soon fildew will be theirs.

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Dave Dunn aka Rhumour

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Sun 1st Aug 2010 00:31

Hi Stefan, thanks for your input on my latest scribble :) I may well revisit it in a day or two, just a bit weary just now to consider it mate... Best wishes, Dave

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stefan wilde

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Sun 1st Aug 2010 00:15

Good morning Dave-brill poem,but would you mind if I put my two pennyworth into the last verse?

'in these darker days we gather,
left here to recall
legacies of having known true
hearts
whose good deeds were never small'

if you prefer to bite my head off,
take yer teeth out first! lol!
catch thi' later owd' son-Stef.

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Sat 31st Jul 2010 23:48

Hi Stefan - thanks for the comments on 'A Certain Lady', much appreciated :) Best wishes, Dave

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stefan wilde

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Sat 31st Jul 2010 22:40

Good evening Larisa-I hope you and Lynn never get together-you would set the world on fire! but what a barbeque!! woo-oo!-lotsa love-Stefan-xx(M-xx)

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stefan wilde

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Sat 31st Jul 2010 22:30

Good evening Dave-you read this with just the right depth of voice-and as Heather mentions,very well ended-Thank you Sir!-Stef.

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Sat 31st Jul 2010 21:29

Hi lovely Bernadette-thanks for recent comments.Glad you have bucked up-but if I see that bottom lip ever quivver again,over Uncle Stefs knee you go!! you are gonna do-and-be fine...I can feel it in me' 'osepipe! lotsa 'ugs'n'kisses-Stef-xxxx

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stefan wilde

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Sat 31st Jul 2010 21:24

A very good evening to you Lynn-one thing about you-you really ooze warmth and friendliness-and I think I speak for a lot of people on here when I say...keep it up girly! lotsa love and thanks-Stef-xx(B-xx)ps glad you got the spider milarkey.

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Sat 31st Jul 2010 21:19

A very good evening to you Heather.To say you have made my day with your comments on 'The Widower' would be a great understatement! thank you ever so so much-with kindest regards-Stefan-x

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Dave Dunn aka Rhumour

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Sat 31st Jul 2010 21:18

Hi Heather, many thanks for your kind appraisal of 'A Certain Lady', much appreciated :)
Best wishes, Dave

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Heather

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Sat 31st Jul 2010 17:18

I love the rhythm of this piece, you've got it spot on and the content's just great. Very charming. I felt that you ended it very well.

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