Lynn Dye

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Wed 20th Jun 2012 14:33

Stef, the only way out of the you-know-what is to reform to full reserve banking, and can't see that happening any time soon! Mind you, we did have it once so it's not impossible to revert back, trouble is politicians aren't listening.
I was shocked to discover that if the whole of the UK were able to pay down their debts at once there would not be enough money in the economy to do so, and we would still owe billions. That has to tell you how crazy the whole system has become.
Anyway, I'm spouting again, hope you and Patricia are well, and thanks Stef for your comment. L xx

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Marianne Louise Daniels

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Wed 20th Jun 2012 14:23

Hello Jan. Just wanted to send some appreciation. I found your last few posts to be incredibly moving and thought provoking. Good stuffs.

Marianne

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Hugh

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Wed 20th Jun 2012 13:14

"Deep Inside" is amazing,such a lot of passion and meaning in a short poem ,love the way you rhythmiclly repeat "deep inside"as you progress-brilliant!!!

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Laura Taylor

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Wed 20th Jun 2012 11:49

I enjoyed most of this but felt it lost its way a little on the last verse - seems to focus on drinking, could maybe be tightened up?

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Laura Taylor

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Wed 20th Jun 2012 11:44

I liked the beginning of this very much, but felt it came apart a little after the first verse, although I suppose that could be representative of his verbosity!

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Laura Taylor

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Wed 20th Jun 2012 11:38

Hah - very funny :)

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Laura Taylor

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Wed 20th Jun 2012 11:32

Howdy chuck

Ta very much for your note on The Process...I'm glad it's struck such a chord with everyone :)

Yeh, interesting thing that Artists Reward. Sometimes I find the only way I can put a 'remove' between reading the fucking thing 70 times and still being fresh enough to make important editing decisions is to leave it several days in between each edit. And of course a little wine and smoke helps with that too ;D

Ooo yeh, when it comes together - there's no buzz like it is there?! :D

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Patricia &Stefan wilde

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Wed 20th Jun 2012 09:24

They are all the same to me Lynn-
birds of the same greedy nest
who could'nt organise a you-know-what
in a you-know-what.

If any of em were so clever
how come we are in and will be for a long time
the you-know-what.

Amen.xx

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Morgan Brini

Wed 20th Jun 2012 09:15

Oui oui c'est un poème que j'ai composé. J'aimerai aussi beaucoup travailler sur des traductions Français-Anglais d'Alain Suied, mais il me faut plus d'assurance parce que c'est une poésie pleine d'image..

Que me conseilleriz-vous Yavonne?

Thank you Ann, :) this reflexion was coming to me after to read Blake :)

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Ann Foxglove

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Wed 20th Jun 2012 09:15

I started a poetry night - in "the west" - and I believe it is still going strong though I don't run it any more. As long as you weren't writing about that one! ;)

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Ann Foxglove

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Wed 20th Jun 2012 09:09

Some lovely images here - and ideas too. I love the sentiment

"No frontier can contain spirit,

As no wall can stop the wind."

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Ann Foxglove

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Wed 20th Jun 2012 09:05

Hi Matt - welcome to WOL. I enjoyed your very original poem here :)

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Patricia &Stefan wilde

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Wed 20th Jun 2012 08:55

YEAH-IT IS!

So just watch it Brunton!
HAHA!

Nah-twas just a try at sumfink different.

Thanks lovely lady.xx

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Kesha

Tue 19th Jun 2012 22:21

Unique again! You offer us something different. I love the poem Roy's Boys, excellent motivational and inspirational verses.

Kesha

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Lynn Dye

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Tue 19th Jun 2012 21:48

Thank you, Greg. Yes, the Greeks did not deserve any of their mess. But if I have explained it to one person then it is worth while. :-)

Stef, I had to google Eddie George! I have no problem with the Bank of England though, naturally. :-) Thank you for comment. xx

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Yvonne Brunton

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Tue 19th Jun 2012 21:25

C'est un poeme que vous avez ecrit? Je ne le reconnais pas mais je le trouve superbe. Il y a quelques lignes que moi,je traduirais autrement.
Mes felicitations.

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Yvonne Brunton

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Tue 19th Jun 2012 21:11

gosh! this is must better than football!
such chilling hatred.

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Patricia &Stefan wilde

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Tue 19th Jun 2012 20:00

Hi gorgeous!
just popped on to say

GOOD LUCK UKRAINE!!

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Patricia &Stefan wilde

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Tue 19th Jun 2012 19:57

have just come all the way from the lounge
(in 'ar 'ouse)
to thank you Dazzer-ever so greatly!
cheers dude.
now,back to watching England lose!

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Darren Scanlon

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Tue 19th Jun 2012 17:57

Wow...that skeleton has just had its marching orders! Great piece of work. 8-)

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Julian (Admin)

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Tue 19th Jun 2012 17:34

A really good poem, which you read superbly the other night, Jacqui/eline. It was good to see you.

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Ann Foxglove

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Tue 19th Jun 2012 15:32

Hi Hugh! Welcome to WOL. I hope you enjoy becoming part of the site!

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Darren Scanlon

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Tue 19th Jun 2012 14:14

Excelent! Love it. 8-)

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Martin Peacock

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Tue 19th Jun 2012 12:11

Cheers for your comments re: 'A Compilation Of Words'. I have a couple more pieces with unusual layout I'm dying to try WOL's sophistication with!

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Martin Peacock

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Tue 19th Jun 2012 12:08

Hi! Re: your comments on my 'Compilation Of Words' - I reckon the best way to do what you suggest [and, being a visual artist too I like the challenge] would be to create something in Photoshop; any image used would not lose definition. Nice idea: I might go for it.

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Hugh

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Tue 19th Jun 2012 11:52

Well done brought tears to my eyes--yeh it gets my vote.

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Martin Peacock

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Tue 19th Jun 2012 11:50

A warm little poem, although the metre threw me.

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Martin Peacock

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Tue 19th Jun 2012 11:46

Cheers for the comments on 'All In Good Time' [although I'm not sure what you mean by 'end-rhyming'.]

Re: the limericks - nice, although the third and fourth lines lost me and 'icicle' doesn't benefit from the [deliberate?] misspelling.

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Hugh

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Tue 19th Jun 2012 11:32

l Loved it a fabulous read

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Jacqueline Pemberton

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Tue 19th Jun 2012 10:56

Thanks for your encouraging comments. It was a difficult poem to write and achieve the balance between personal experience and emotions we could all relate to.

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Patricia &Stefan wilde

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Tue 19th Jun 2012 10:17

Eddie George-eat your heart out
and move over-haha!xx

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Patricia &Stefan wilde

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Tue 19th Jun 2012 10:12

Chucklingly charming chuck!! xx

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Patricia &Stefan wilde

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Tue 19th Jun 2012 10:10

We laughingly enjoyed this one Darren
thanks.

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Julian (Admin)

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Tue 19th Jun 2012 09:54

You are right, Ann. One can walk for ages around Bolton and never see anything of the St. Ives Festival which runs from 8th - 22nd September. Odd that. Please do your best to get the organisers to upload their events onto the gig guide. Increasing numbers of festivals are doing so since we adapted the software to make it easier to list daily events. Or if you can get him to talk to David Andrew: gig@writeoutloud.net?

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Ann Foxglove

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Tue 19th Jun 2012 09:44

Rather lovely. Agree with Steve about that phrase.

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Ann Foxglove

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Tue 19th Jun 2012 09:43

Great observation Graham. I find when I text I have to 1)find my specs 2)put them on 3)locate the "p" or the "h" or whatever. Takes AGES!!!

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Patricia &Stefan wilde

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Tue 19th Jun 2012 09:41

S incere
T hanks
A nd
N othing
L ess
E ver-!
Y vonne.xx

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Ann Foxglove

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Tue 19th Jun 2012 09:41

Very intriguing - nicely done.

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Patricia &Stefan wilde

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Tue 19th Jun 2012 09:39

OutSTANdingly kind comment Harry!xx

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Ann Foxglove

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Tue 19th Jun 2012 09:38

I loved this! Public transpaort is a great way of "finding" poems - not Larkins etc but our own. I also wondered about that first line - maybe a bit of graffiti is in order?

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Ann Foxglove

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Tue 19th Jun 2012 09:33

It is indeed poignant. I enjoyed reading it too.

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Ann Foxglove

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Tue 19th Jun 2012 09:27

I haven't been to Bolton so I can't comment. It's a shame you didn't see anything Jane. I suppose it's a bit like the St Ives Festival where one minute you can be walking round town and see buskers everywhere, open studios advertised with big arrows pointing you in the right direction, Bob Deveraux and friends entertaining a crowd in the square with music and poetry - and an hour later people are taking a break or there's indoor stuff going on and you could walk through the town and think nothing was happening. Little plug for St Ives Festival 8th-22nd September. (Did you see what I did there? ;)

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Lynn Dye

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Tue 19th Jun 2012 09:20

Hi MC, thanks for the comment on my latest poem, "Fleeced". I am somewhat puzzled as to your rhyme though, as the subject was not about the work ethic, it was about private banks' ability to create money out of thin air as debt. This is affecting the whole world's economy.

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Julian (Admin)

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Tue 19th Jun 2012 07:48

Larkin? Man hands on misanthropy to man.

You didn't say if they had the first line of that poem up in the buses, Joe? Bet they didn't.

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jason

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Mon 18th Jun 2012 22:47

Thanks Ann, i too like your poems, with the metaphors and similes, you have alot of presentational devices which i like :) x

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Greg Freeman

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Mon 18th Jun 2012 22:39

Ah, now I understand it all, Lynn! Thank you. No wonder the Greeks are going spare. Keep up the good work.

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Greg Freeman

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Mon 18th Jun 2012 22:36

I'm a Larkin fan and loved this. Great title, of course. He did make a fine art out of it.

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Greg Freeman

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Mon 18th Jun 2012 22:32

This is a powerful, successful poem, Jackie, with a sense of release at the end. It really is very good.

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Harry O'Neill

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Mon 18th Jun 2012 19:40


Folks,
I can`t withSTANd yout infinite variety.

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Harry O'Neill

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Mon 18th Jun 2012 19:35


Yvonne,

Witty - woman - witty!

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