Sun 6th Nov 2011 20:38
HaHaHa! I don't usually have that effect on people LOL ugs an snoggy fings haha xxx
Comment is about (Poet profile)
Sun 6th Nov 2011 20:17
There's something primaeval about being alone in the dark. In a forest? by a lake? You like your adrenalin, Banksy!
Comment is about the kissing gate (Blog entry)
Original item by Banksy
Sun 6th Nov 2011 20:09
Right on an' outta sight!
Good to see you still wearing the clothes, Dave.
Comment is about Hippies (Blog entry)
Original item by Dave Bradley
Sun 6th Nov 2011 20:07
Agree with Alana, this is lovely. xx
Comment is about tumbling (Blog entry)
Original item by Patricia and Stefan Wilde
Sun 6th Nov 2011 20:03
Effective form, MC.
You like your 3 line rhymes.
Comment is about DO YOU REMEMBER MY ENGLAND? (Blog entry)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
Sun 6th Nov 2011 20:02
Ah! I get it now!
I had to revisit the beginnibg again!
Comment is about POETIC JUSTICE (Blog entry)
Sun 6th Nov 2011 19:50
Hi Stef and Tricia, trust you enjoyed your few days away. I haven't been on here much because I broke the screen on my laptop at the beginning of last week! And we have just spent the weekend away in Norfolk. Just borrowing Colin's pc while he's watching tv! Both enjoying retirement now BIG TIME! Keep well, love, Lynn xx
Comment is about Patricia and Stefan Wilde (Poet profile)
Sun 6th Nov 2011 19:44
Enjoyed this, Patricia, nice idea, original. x
Comment is about Fountainous (Blog entry)
Sun 6th Nov 2011 19:24
Really like the feeling here..I would be scared walking about at night time on my own..spooky indeed..think I would have smoked more than one!...really enjoyed your walk..thanks :)
Sun 6th Nov 2011 19:22
Hi - many thanks.
kissing gate - no - I wasn't being obtuse, it's just what they are called.
Sun 6th Nov 2011 19:09
Like this lots...that moment picture is well described..and as Rachel says its like a shot from a film.. :)
Comment is about Knots (Blog entry)
Original item by Hayden
Patricia &Stefan wilde
Sun 6th Nov 2011 18:59
you have 'flabbered my ghast' again.
I am indebted to thee-bigtime!
Sun 6th Nov 2011 18:51
Liked 'Breakfast Pots'. Humorous topped with a light sprinkling of pathos. But really.. it struck me as sad and doesn't it sum us all up!
Comment is about Elaine (Poet profile)
Original item by Elaine
Sun 6th Nov 2011 17:33
i like this scene you create, like a shot from a film.
write a follow on, im keen to read poetry thats written in sequence. what happens next? how s he gonna react to that empty cup..and she. where they going? intriguing.
i watch too many flms, i wish the world were as interesting
Sun 6th Nov 2011 16:17
horsey...i always did have a thing for those with big noses x
i saw his foot/handprints at blackpool. they were very big. ;)
Comment is about Vernon from Bolton way (Blog entry)
Sun 6th Nov 2011 16:16
he is also a good poet. not bad for an italian ;)
Comment is about next step (Blog entry)
Sun 6th Nov 2011 15:27
Funny and unsettling feeling as I read this.Strange how the mind plays tricks when we feel most vulnerable! Love the ordinary language in this too!
Sun 6th Nov 2011 15:19
Haha! Some of my best mates at college were what some would class as 'hippies'.Best natured people I ever met! Enjoyed this dave! Be nice to hear it at The Tudor,maybe?
Sun 6th Nov 2011 13:42
Very real and honest! Kissing gate? (imaginary) or is that where you used to canoodle! x
Sun 6th Nov 2011 13:36
I agree with the sentiment!We need revolutionaries, people who challenge the status quo, xx
Sun 6th Nov 2011 13:28
Sublime! especially last verse xx
Sun 6th Nov 2011 13:24
Very sad! resonates, Like the style of font? and the pic xx
Comment is about exploited (Blog entry)
Sun 6th Nov 2011 13:17
There was a con artist from Senegal
He wasn't a poet at all
We got wise to his scam
And put up the spam
Don't try to con poets on WOL!
Comment is about Spam, spam, spam, spam… (Blog entry)
Original item by Greg Freeman
Sun 6th Nov 2011 12:05
Very nice poem Rachel.Vernon Kay! What a legend,eh? Haha. His horsey features are on display in my Daughter's college in Wigan where he used to be a student.The git's everywhere!
Sun 6th Nov 2011 11:37
True poetry burns brightly in the heart of a guy who can lose a thousand quids worth of fish and write a funny poem about it...
You get my vote...cheers!
Comment is about Vertav Alle Ze Vishiz Gon? (Blog entry)
Original item by John Coopey
Sun 6th Nov 2011 10:54
Everyone gives their time freely on here Steve - something to bear in mind when you're giving the site a bashing... though I know that you are tongue in cheek about most things.
Perhaps a mixed calendar would be a good idea for next year? Are you up for it Steve? Ann? Chris?
It is possible to do these things tastefully and have a laugh. I can remember having a photo taken topless when I was younger. You couldn't see anything cos I had a massive piece of water melon covering my melons. I could probably do it with a grapefruit nowadays...
Comment is about The male muse: poetic chaps bare more than their souls for charity (Blog entry)
Sun 6th Nov 2011 10:49
many thanks... I read about doing this is readers digest, so I thought I'd give it a go - there's no law against walking around in the middle of the night, just that no-one does.
Sun 6th Nov 2011 09:23
Thanks for commenting. It says "turning on"! The original was indeed, something along the lines of turn on, tune in, drop out but I couldn't get all that in. But as it is it does make sense, honest. x
Comment is about Ann Foxglove (Poet profile)
Original item by Ann Foxglove
Sun 6th Nov 2011 09:18
Sun 6th Nov 2011 09:13
Maybe we could try something similar here on WOL - for one day only (I suggest April 1st 2012) all the guys on here could swap their profile pics for a raunchy shot of them in the altogether. Howz about it guys? (Sadly I will be away that day so unable to log on and take a look - shame! :)
Sun 6th Nov 2011 09:04
I really like this Mr B. I walked to the village and back last night - a fabulous night it was too! Moon bright, stars glittering, a few scudding clouds for dramatic effect - even a firework or two. No torch needed. I love walking round alone at night - magical! And reservoirs are SOOOO spooky anyway. You'ze a brave boy!xx
Sun 6th Nov 2011 09:00
Agree with the sentiments Dave - nice poem. But wouldn't the hippies be tuning in rather than turning in - or were they tired hippies? (All that dope no doubt!)
Sun 6th Nov 2011 02:10
There's nothing wrong with nudity, male or female. But the same standards should apply to exhibitionist displays by both genders. Of course, it is considered OK by the Liberal Fascist stablishment both to denigrade men generally and to treat them sex objects - but not to do that to women ... or one might lose one's Arts Council grant, darling.
By the way, this story has only just appeared on this increasingly slow (in news terms) and pompous ("swing those trousers, chaps, and let's do a workshop or go on a residential writing course") website. I read about this calender in a writers' magazine many weeks ago. Do keep up, WOL.
Sun 6th Nov 2011 01:03
Fantasy made flesh?...we all have our dreams and this is pleasingly provocative in its imagery. I remember when I was no more than eight and enjoying lying naked in a stream one afternoon...and they say sex begins at puberty! My mother wasn't best pleased because
I lost a shoe and times were hard then!
Comment is about Dancing in the Moonlight (Blog entry)
Original item by Brian Wood
Sun 6th Nov 2011 00:48
..thanks Laura..most lyrics about my travelling have been songs..bought my first guitar in Lagos..must use more images..cheers.
Comment is about Laura (Poet profile)
Original item by Laura
Sun 6th Nov 2011 00:39
Glad you enjoyed the pay-off, Stella.