Cynthia Buell Thomas
Tue 31st Dec 2013 17:32
The recent poems are zeroing in with great intensity and intimacy, universally relate-able, and 'polished'. Keep posting.
Comment is about The possible dream (blog)
Tue 31st Dec 2013 13:13
I know what you mean about the poem
Happy new year mate and see you soon at Stockport
Now to finsh those cans left over from Christmas!
Comment is about Andy N (poet profile)
Original item by Andy N
Tue 31st Dec 2013 12:28
Being a couple of octogenarians, next time we move the earth, will be via the Sextons shovel.
Happy New Year.
Comment is about Harry O`N eill (poet profile)
Original item by Harry O`N eill
Tue 31st Dec 2013 11:03
Nice one Dave. Yes - I suffer from the same voices all the time and it can be a bugger switching them off.
Dave B says it all - you capture it neatly and that last line really sums it all up. x
Comment is about Voices Off (blog)
Original item by Dave Morgan
Tue 31st Dec 2013 08:03
Wow this poem is very well written, while reading it was like a movie playing in my mind (in a good way haha). I felt the intensity that you are portraying through this poem with every line. The passion that you and your then lover,mostly U, show,is magnificent.
Everybody has different perceptions of a poem.Many have judged mine by telling me how to write it,hell,that's my job not their's! But even then,there's no stopping people from doing that.
You are right,affection is blatant in your poem,Theres no doubt about that whatsoever. The way you have put your emotions down to writing is really gripping and arresting,When I reached the ending,I wanted to yell out "Tommy don't stop!!" Haha I mean the only thing I didn't like about your poem is the fact that it came to an end!
Comment is about Hold me - when does the giving ever stop? (blog)
Original item by Tommy Carroll
Mon 30th Dec 2013 23:12
Enjoyed this, Tommy, good one :-)
Comment is about waiting wanting (blog)
Mon 30th Dec 2013 22:43
Ooh, you are naughty, Stef, but I like you! Hahaha. P.S.What does Patricia make of this poem (song)? LOL Lxx
Comment is about Santa baby! (blog)
David R Mellor
Mon 30th Dec 2013 21:09
thank you Hannah and M.C for your kind words
Comment is about A Gift X (blog)
Original item by David R Mellor
Mon 30th Dec 2013 18:45
Mon 30th Dec 2013 18:44
I LOVE this. I'm new to this website and have been looking at numerous poems but this is the first one I've found that's really caught my attention. Do you have your own blog? I have just created one. Maybe you'd like to see it? http://lifeastoldbymypen.weebly.com/
Mon 30th Dec 2013 18:42
I really like this, although I'm not so keen on the title. Do you have your own blog? I have just created one. Maybe you'd like to have a look?
Comment is about Patterns (blog)
Original item by Dave Bradley
Mon 30th Dec 2013 18:38
I'm interested to read that you prefer the first two verses as I personally preferred the last two. I love the concept too.
Comment is about Time is in the Moment (blog)
Original item by Steve
Mon 30th Dec 2013 17:37
Great questions, nicely put - among the most important questions there are. If 'God is' then clearly something is going on which is beyond human understanding. We do (as a race) appear to expect that we ought to be able to understand everything. Could be aiming too high.
Comment is about Hung Out To Dry (blog)
Original item by Jonnie Falafel
Mon 30th Dec 2013 17:28
That's a familiar feeling and the poem captures it well. Nice one Dave.
Mon 30th Dec 2013 16:25
Pertinent and challenging.
What sort of "merciful" Father does that to his
Son? And to what purpose? It only adds mystery
to the witty observation by Ogden Nash -
How odd of God
To choose the Jews.
Why didn't He do the job on the Romans - or was
that a tacit admission that Might is Right - on
Earth or in Heaven? OK - I know the Romans had
their day eventually but that was more a matter
of human action or inaction as time went by.
After all, we all love a change! And we all
love a good story too.
Mon 30th Dec 2013 14:35
Hi Cynthia Glad you got the poems and sorry to hear that you've been unwell. Hope things pick up in the New ear and that you find some stuff in the book you like.
Comment is about Cynthia Buell Thomas (poet profile)
Original item by Cynthia Buell Thomas
Mon 30th Dec 2013 13:20
Books arrived safely almost immediately. My computer wonked out just before sending you a message, and hasn't recouped until today (incorrect info from experts silenced my Christmas period - not a bad thing - and I was quite ill too, but better now. Better computer access - better me - what's not to like!) I will greatly enjoy your poems. Happy New Year!
Comment is about David Cooke (poet profile)
Original item by David Cooke
Mon 30th Dec 2013 12:54
thanks for the comment m8 over that christmas poem. thankfully it was on a set rate on that day is all i am gonna say lol.
glad you liked it seriously however. bit of a jigsaw poem this one if you know what i mean.
Comment is about Nigel Astell (poet profile)
Original item by Nigel Astell
Mon 30th Dec 2013 12:53
thankfully it was on a set rate, nigel. lol.
glad you liked it m8. bit of a jigsaw poem this one if you know what i mean.
Comment is about Christmas Poem for Cathy (2013) (blog)
Mon 30th Dec 2013 12:51
i can relate to this. seen a few christmas like this with memories of my own family.
Comment is about Surviving Christmas (blog)
Original item by Gray Nicholls
lot said in a few words, lory. i can relate to this. lovely (if that is the right word).
Comment is about dream (blog)
Original item by Lory Gaur
Mon 30th Dec 2013 11:46
Start by declaring an interest, WOL's GigGuide Editor was one of the judges of the competition of which this anthology was the result. (Used to live in Leeds.)
First time I'd done this: and struck by quality of work. (Also dose of nostalgia; when a great deal younger did much cycling.)
Had early view of book: well-designed. So congratulations to all in it. And do buy the work: you'll enjoy it.
Can be bought at: www.otleywordfeast.org.uk/spokes
Comment is about MC Newberry's 'Lycra' poem in anthology to mark Le Grand Depart (article)
Original item by Greg Freeman
Mon 30th Dec 2013 11:01
Hear,hear...makes the poetry world sound quite exciting and unexpectedly topical. Echoing Isabel Wigan continues to be the liveliest and most irreverent of nights, obviously not everyone's cup of tea, but with a high premium on entertainment and audience involvement.
Well done Greg.
Comment is about Scandals, royalty, and a great loss: poetry's big news in 2013 (article)
Mon 30th Dec 2013 10:54
It's been good looking back. I've had great fun, along with other Write Out Loud correspondents, in covering all this in the past year. And yes, Julian, I have alerted the necessary media - twice! - in case they weren't paying sufficient attention first time around.
Mon 30th Dec 2013 10:31
Greg, a magnificently written, superbly conceived piece. You should have down this professionally you know! I hope you have FB and Twatted it?
Sun 29th Dec 2013 21:09
Thank you very much Patricia and Stefan and best wishes for 2014.
Comment is about THE BOMB THAT DIDN'T EXPLODE (blog)
Original item by David Subacchi
Sun 29th Dec 2013 17:42
My subtlety didn't fool you then, Steve. Thanks for reading and commenting.
Comment is about Christmas Wrap (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
Sun 29th Dec 2013 11:31
Wrap -rap -Hey, I've just got it! Great one dude . .
Sun 29th Dec 2013 07:59
thank u so much.. :)
i sure like the idea of more morphine :P
besties to you too... :)
Sun 29th Dec 2013 07:17
a nice piece of work - the last stanza pretty much sums up the motif
Comment is about Coastlines and laughter (blog)
Sun 29th Dec 2013 07:06
Thx for your comment Gray
Comment is about TRUTH PROWLS (blog)
Original item by Justin
Sun 29th Dec 2013 06:52
The first two verses came straight out of my pen and sat in my notebook for a considerable time while I worked out what was to come next. I did think of ending after verse four as I wasn't quite so happy with the last part but your suggestion is excellent. Many thanks MC.
Patricia and Stefan Wilde
Sun 29th Dec 2013 00:38
all da best Tommy-danke n all that-;0)
Sun 29th Dec 2013 00:33
Comment is about painted into a corner (blog)
Original item by Paul Sands
Indeed the inaction of that bomb WAS a miracle!
we went to Malta years ago and actually have a photo of our children stood next to it-some size it is and all! it would most certainly have completely blown that beautiful building to bits.
Good poem David-all the best to you for 2014.xx
Sun 29th Dec 2013 00:28
very particular indeed. :)
Sun 29th Dec 2013 00:21
'maybe its you,'....me? me?.. old Mr Wilde?
oh go on then let it be me-then you would need morphine-haha! cute poem Lory.
Best to you for 2014 from the old duffers.xx
Sun 29th Dec 2013 00:13
awww!! lovely poem Jane and soo nice to see you blogging again (wasnt meant to rhyme but hey! it just comes natural-haha)we wish you and yours all the very best for the coming New year.xx
Comment is about Christmas (blog)
Original item by jane wilcock
Sat 28th Dec 2013 23:47
Thanks to you Steve,Solar and Lynn.All the very best to you folks for 2014.xx
Comment is about An August day's surprise. (blog)
Sat 28th Dec 2013 22:47
woahhh!!I nearly missed this beaut!
Comment is about grey sky drinking (blog)
Sat 28th Dec 2013 21:49
this fab piece is sooo worthy of me having to put my continental cocktail and say once again-WOW!
Best wishes for the New Year
O writer of excellence.x
Sat 28th Dec 2013 17:52
Up and down that snow white hill
hope that meter was not running high
it's double rate you know Christmas time.
Sat 28th Dec 2013 17:40
And a Merry Christmas to you Larisa! xx
Comment is about Merry Christmas! (blog)
Original item by Larisa Rzhepishevska
Sat 28th Dec 2013 17:36
That's a great review of the year Greg - you bring it all back so effortlessly!
I don't have any personal highlights - just know that I've thoroughly enjoyed all the nights at Writeoutloud Wigan (The Tudor) - poets of all different abilities and backgrounds, getting together to make great entertainment.
I really loved the Marsden jazz festival also; just wish we had one this side of the Pennines too.
Here's to 2014 - happy New Year, everyone! x
Sat 28th Dec 2013 16:01
I particularly like the first two verses - food
for thought and well conceived.
Not certain about the last line - my own thoughts
tend to go along with the downbeat words in the preceding line...to finish (in my mind) -
"And time can tear apart".
I guess it depends on whether you seek to finish
on an "upbeat" note.
I look forward to your work in 2014.
Fri 27th Dec 2013 22:29
Very visual, John. I almost see it like an old black and white french film.
And I don't know why I like it so much but the repetitive simplicity of
"Where Angus, dear Angus..."
Comment is about To the crags, where eagles soar (blog)
Original item by John Marks
Fri 27th Dec 2013 17:06
Yo jivin me, ma man, MC?
Fri 27th Dec 2013 15:05
Hey brudda - dem lines is a riot
One day dis guy might even try it.
An' go in for de gangsta rap
If some bro hands me shit for crap!
Fri 27th Dec 2013 14:35
Comment is about that silence.. (blog)
Fri 27th Dec 2013 14:33
Lory, content at the simultaneous loss and finding of and in another is a find! I shall use it. ;)
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