Tue 23rd Mar 2010 21:21
Hi Cynthia . thanks for looking at Run way. The title (with the underscore space) was intended to suggest runaway but to keep the airport elememt refered to in the poem. The poem came out of a workshop with Michael BlackburnI attended recently. Win
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Tue 23rd Mar 2010 08:18
Hi Cynthia, thanks for commenting on Kingfisher. Their rarity and spectacular colour does make them legendary, almost mythical.
Your villanelle has attracted much comment. It sounds to me like the tolling of a bell. Sometimes to bolt yourself into a particular form can give you a surprising amount of freedom. Greg
Mon 22nd Mar 2010 17:33
Thanks fo rthe comment ,Cynthia - the poem is one I had to do as I am on the verge...read and apprciate all your work.
Sun 21st Mar 2010 20:05
Hi Cynthia, glad you liked 'Just Passin’ Thro’ (Still Got The Blues for You)'Win :-)
Sun 21st Mar 2010 18:52
Thanks for the comments on "20 Years from Now". I'm pleased you enjoyed it.
Sun 21st Mar 2010 09:49
hope you are well - thanks as ever for reading
spayed is the word i wanted for this poem
Sat 20th Mar 2010 13:48
The path you were walking down was exactly the path I was walking down! All the lines I wrote were exactly what I wish for including the last line. And you didn't upset me in any way, I was truly just confused. Thanks so much for commenting on my work. And also, your description of "The Cape" was a great response to what the piece is about. I'm glad it had that effect on the reader. Thanks again.
Fri 19th Mar 2010 12:38
Thank you, Cynthia, for your comments on "Heartfire", however I don't understand your question or what you mean by propaganda. Drop me a note when you have a moment. Thanks.
Fri 19th Mar 2010 11:59
Thank you for your commens re Culver Cliff Cynthia... most encouraging.
Once again many thanks
Thu 18th Mar 2010 17:54
Sorry about that mistake Cynthia - was Vanilla Ice a pop group? I would agree that ice puts a completely diffent take on it and it was anything but cold. I will try to get along to one of those venues.
Thu 18th Mar 2010 08:26
Thanks for your comments on Eating in Private, Cynthia. You're right, the subject matter is pretty hard to take. These I guess were my father's experiences for more than three years. I had to research it though, he never spoke about it in detail. Apart from the "air-raid stew", that is! Greg
Wed 17th Mar 2010 22:41
Thank you so much for commenting so kindly on Foal. I thought he had cantered off without anyone noticing him! xx
Wed 17th Mar 2010 22:37
hi cynthia - thanks for the recent comments. B
Tue 16th Mar 2010 22:10
Thank you once again for your kind comments and for reading my latest wafflings :)
Tue 16th Mar 2010 18:05
Aw, thankyou so much. I think it's the first time i have ever been complimented for a comment on a poem other than from the author and not always then ha ha
Tue 16th Mar 2010 13:24
I appreciate your thoughts on "The Ultimate Sacrifice". You're so right and I never looked at it that way. Thanks so much.
Tue 16th Mar 2010 12:44
Hello Cynthia and thank-you for your comments on my poems! Vampires are something I've always been into, both as an aspect of folklore and of what they tell is about the very human conditions of lust, greed, obsession etc. I think they force us to contemplate the darker side of humanity and focus on the one thing that fascinates and scares us all; death.
I wrote the three poems as a way of indulging myself in a favourite topic of mine as well as getting in touch with my darker side which is a focus of much of my poetry.
Also, did I mention vampires are cool? ;-)
Mon 15th Mar 2010 00:27
Thanks very much for your comments on 'Scar' - I always appreciate your input. I have left a brief explanation on the poem itself, if you're interested.
Fri 12th Mar 2010 17:52
Thanks for your encouragement for the Funfair pieces, I really appreciate it. I don't agree this is my best work, it's light stuff, not meant for performance in the most part. I prefer the dark stuff or, at least, the different and pieces for performance.
And you think I'm shy - I can't think why you should think that.
Fri 12th Mar 2010 10:46
Hi Cynthia - "the end of the road" thanks for the comments. B
Thu 11th Mar 2010 12:25
Thanks again Cynthia x
Thu 11th Mar 2010 10:37
Hi Cynthia, thanks for your recent comments, really appreciate the feedback. I like your challenge for me to cut down my lengthy rant about not having anything to say (kind of self-defeating anyway I realise). I'll see what I can do... Thom
Wed 10th Mar 2010 13:33
Thanks for your comments on the funfair series Cynthia. I'm glad you enjoyed the flea circus. As you know, this is supposed to be a light series but I'm trying to mix it up a bit to keep it fresh.
Your support has been invaluable, thanks again.
Tue 9th Mar 2010 22:26
'Homeric epithet' - I wish I could say "yes", but alas, it was undoubtedly sloppiness :(
Tue 9th Mar 2010 18:04
Thanks for your lovely comment on 'Cash Converters.'
Tue 9th Mar 2010 00:41
Hi Cynthia. Thanks for your thought-provoking comment - I'm still chewing that one over. And thank you for posting this poem
Mon 8th Mar 2010 23:42
Thanks for commenting on my Fairground series - I'll take your suggestions on board for daredevil diver - I was wee bit tired writing that one and it shows a little I feel
Wed 3rd Mar 2010 13:39
Hi Cynthia, many thanks again for your comment. I do seem to be preoccupied by death these days, although i can't say i'm scared of it or anything. It's just what lands on the paper i suppose! x
Sun 28th Feb 2010 17:41
Thank you so much for commenting on my windy poem! I have added a couple more verses. xx
Thu 25th Feb 2010 13:39
Cynthia - it was lovely to meet you properly too last night! I think our paths may have crossed before at WOL in Sale around autumn last year, where we both read?
Tue 23rd Feb 2010 10:58
just wanted to say thanks for taking the trouble to explain a little of your thinking when you wrote your last blog.
After reading some of the other comments and 'hearing' your own, it does make sense now, although i wasn't the only one to think it an unusual juxtaposition.
I do enjoy the opportunity to discuss on this site. Often are the times when the written word is misinterpreted or misunderstood in its context. :-)
Hope you are well,
Mon 22nd Feb 2010 18:20
Cynthia - the warrior - thanks for the comments - the word "liberal" was used in a generic context only & not meant to be political.
Sat 20th Feb 2010 22:48
hello Cynthia, thanks for the comment on Death Comes To Fleetwood. I do see what you mean about it being confusing, I think when I wrote it I imagined it like an aerial view then swooping in to details if that makes any sense at all.
Sat 20th Feb 2010 08:48
glad you like 79-81
did quite a bit of research for that one : )
Fri 19th Feb 2010 19:27
Hi, once again, thank you x
Fri 19th Feb 2010 17:30
Hi Cynthia - let me know next time you plan on visiting a Manchester venue - I would love to meet you, as would Cate.
Fri 19th Feb 2010 17:23
Thanks for kind comments on my dreaming fox. My grandma had a fox stowl - the poor fox seemed to end up with it's tail in it's mouth, when the stowl was put in place. As a small child I was fascinated of course!
Fri 19th Feb 2010 15:58
Hi Cynthia, thanks for the recent comment. I feel like that poem sounds a little naive now because I wrote it five years ago - but I guess that's exactly what it's about. I see what you mean about that 'wife and mother' line as well; but I included it because I know that's what she hoped for in her future - at least back then. Thanks again! Thom
Fri 19th Feb 2010 11:37
Hi Cynthia, thanks for the comments. Yes, I am ok, except for feeling fat, frumpy and 26 weeks pregnant, had a home and family break from everything. How are you? Well, I hope.xx
Thu 18th Feb 2010 20:58
Thank you for your kind comments on my latest waffles! I do feel it's a little undeserved though!
I hadn't thought about the contradictions re the flowers. I just liked how it sounded. Oops!x
Wed 17th Feb 2010 12:44
Moon month is fantastic! I really do like it, thanks for posting it. Also many thanks for your comment on my latest. x
Tue 16th Feb 2010 17:21
Hi Cynthia Thanks again for the comments. We used to spend all the long summer holidays on my grandfather's farm in Ireland. I use to love going up in the hay and spent hours up there reading. I just wish I had the time to do some now!
Mon 15th Feb 2010 13:15
HI Cynthia - thanks as ever for taking the time to read and make comment on my work
re Exegesis - tis a part of something bigger yes : )
Sun 14th Feb 2010 20:09
Thank you Cynthia, very much. Quite like the Bolero touch too! As for marriage, well, we're in our 8th year now so....!! :)
Sat 13th Feb 2010 15:15
Thanks for leaving the comment on The Tide. The poem could be about anyone really, but is actually about my wife's mother, She became increasingly difficult to deal with over the years, and for some reason she always seem to feel she had been cheated of some idealised life she deserved, yet never really made the most of the one (the only one) she had. Sad really.
Fri 12th Feb 2010 22:33
Ooops! Getting my bodily fluids mixed up again! Maybe I meant spunk? I have led a very sheltered life! ;-)
Fri 12th Feb 2010 19:20
Hi Cynthia -
t'was an exercise in reflection on a bad news day
Fri 12th Feb 2010 14:48
Q- "I don't see how Vanilla Sex is talking 'dirty'. What is your definition of 'dirty'?
A - "well-not a lot of women seem to like the word cunt for a start - they seem to think that this good old anglo-saxon is rather demeaning. "Dirty" wasn't meant in a bad way anyway - did you ever hear about Woody Allen being asked if he thought sex was dirty? he replied - "only if it's done right" which just about sums it up for me (at least) :) B
Fri 12th Feb 2010 12:45
Re Collision Course - thanks for commenting. I wrote this yesterday and didn't really like it. It's not a very "me" poem maybe. I did ponder long and hard about "cum" as it's a word I don't like the sound of! As to gender specific, I guess I was looking on blood as being more of a woman's word somehow.
Thu 11th Feb 2010 20:24
Hi cynthia - irony - in both yours & my poems (vanilla) - its difficult to know how much to tell the reader - I've been accused of being both too obtuse & then again too obvious - it is a difficult balance to get right. I liked your poem because sometimes it's good to hear a woman talk dirty & just come out with it & say what she actually wants. In my poem the last verse is the reply from the woman saying that Her desires are darker still.
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