Melissa R. Mendelson

Tue 27th May 2008 16:39

Hi, my name is Melissa, and I'm a TVaholic. If TV were to die tomorrow, then hours would be sent in writing, but with TV still bringing my favorite shows to me, time is lost to them.

Love your stuff. :)

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paul

Tue 27th May 2008 16:17

All the Photographs are by Gemma O'Neill except the ones of her. The top one of Gemma is by Paul Blackburn and the bottom one by Kate Hartree.

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Tue 27th May 2008 16:15

Zuzanna Musial

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Tue 27th May 2008 16:14

Hello, Antonio

It sounds like a problem with the cable for Internet connection. That also occurs here as well. At times, it takes longer then one day.
I guess for the time being you still were able to compose new write in spite of the temporary blurred vision. You made a point in your poetry… Twist about technology in general. It shows that the gadgets are prone to failure.

Thank you,
Zuzanna

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Darren Thomas

Tue 27th May 2008 15:21

I like this one Daniel. 'Showing' us rather than 'telling' us what's going on. Excellent.

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Tue 27th May 2008 12:59

Suicide is a shock to everyone left behind and those of us left can't help but feel responsible for not doing more. Nicely written tribute by one who was left, I feel it.

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Daniel Hall

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Tue 27th May 2008 12:54

It's a tricky argument. The illegal trade is extremely dangers for the protitutes and their clients. The girls (and men) that work in places where it is legalised and controlled often report they enjoy their work. Can an outsider to the world really judge? I can't.

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Daniel Hall

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Tue 27th May 2008 12:48

I'd love to hear the music that flows with your song. Grab a mic and get it recorded!

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Daniel Hooks

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Tue 27th May 2008 09:19

Thankyou all for your comments and a message to you Darren the word is like you say Convoluted and I will be editing it soon and no offence taken.

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Janet Ramsden

Mon 26th May 2008 22:56

Let love live and breathe, forever and a day.
'Always.'

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Jeff Dawson

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Mon 26th May 2008 21:55

Hi Melissa, this is beautiful, having been through my fair share I can truly identify with your sentiments.

Thanks for sharing it and your lovely comments about my work, very much appreciated, hope to have something else out soon, Jeff

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Zuzanna Musial

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Mon 26th May 2008 20:23

Dear Melissa

Beautiful song - There is no need for hurting another. Love, compassion, and respect I can see as the key link in any relationship. If recorded it will be an excellent song!

You are very romantic and it is shows in your written word.
FABULOUS JOB!!

Thank you,
Zuzanna

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Melissa R. Mendelson

Mon 26th May 2008 19:25

Your poetry is a river of beauty, a flow of words and images, and I look forward to reading more of it.

Take care. :)

-Melissa

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Melissa R. Mendelson

Mon 26th May 2008 19:19

Hi, Ally. Glad to be back. I've been busy writing a few things.

I love your poetry and look forward to reading more work from you. :)

-Melissa

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Mon 26th May 2008 17:48

Yay Melissa! Your back. This poem is inspiring and makes me want to dream, to seek, to create.

thank you

Ally x

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Janet Ramsden

Mon 26th May 2008 16:58

Hello again, your profile mentions that you paint.
Is the picture entered one of your own?
It truly captures a soul, entering the light with help from the angels of the night.

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Janet Ramsden

Mon 26th May 2008 16:43

Prostitutes forsake their own dignity.
Some feel they have no choice. Others haven't known any other kind of life.
I could go on but it's not for me to judge.

Janet.

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jennie shaw

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Mon 26th May 2008 15:49

thank you for your comment, yes its a hard road sometimes in our search for happiness

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Mon 26th May 2008 15:47

Hi, apologies for not replying sooner, i've not been on here for a while,,,, thank you for your comments, they are very much appreciated, i'm pleased you liked my writing, thanks again,,, Jennie

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Tomás Ó Cárthaigh

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Mon 26th May 2008 15:28

We all seek the one for life...

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Tomás Ó Cárthaigh

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Mon 26th May 2008 15:28

You got a wry way of saying thinks... I like your poems...

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Tomás Ó Cárthaigh

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Mon 26th May 2008 15:26

The Argentine War was a waste of young mens and womens lives...

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Tomás Ó Cárthaigh

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Mon 26th May 2008 15:25

You write well on complex topics...

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Mon 26th May 2008 15:25

Great to see a rhyming poet...

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Mon 26th May 2008 15:23

Love the coconut poem

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Mon 26th May 2008 15:23

Ian Paisley would turn purpler than he is if he read this!!!

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Mon 26th May 2008 15:21

Ah, Bubo!!! Great to see you here, saw you on WritersCafe.

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Tomás Ó Cárthaigh

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Mon 26th May 2008 15:19

Does he take paypal? I've published online my poety at http://www.lulu.com/cartyweb and achieved moderate sales....

All extra info helps...

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Darren Thomas

Mon 26th May 2008 14:57

Where would we be without our trusty thumbs? Stranded on hard shoulders for one - i enjoyed this one. Thumb for thought.

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Darren Thomas

Mon 26th May 2008 14:08

Yes, very deep. I particularly enjoyed the first line but struggled with the word, 'convulted' is my dictionary in need of updating or should I read it as 'convoluted'. This is a genuine question and by no means a criticism! So please don't take offence Daniel.

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valentin Prochasson

Mon 26th May 2008 14:06

Tres joli poeme meme si je n ai pas compris tout les details, mon anglais etant mauvais. J ai eu beaucoup de plaisir a le lire.
Continuer ainsi! ;)
I hope you understand this comment.

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Darren Thomas

Mon 26th May 2008 13:54

Hi Melissa - you have a particular style to much of your poetry which I enjoy. On this occasion you have began by asking questions and attempted to answer some. I would be tempted to seperate the line where you repeat the line 'No life is lived easy' into a seperate stanza, giving the appearance that there is a reflective thought between one notion and the next. Does that make sense? You have a talent with words, that's for sure.

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Darren Thomas

Mon 26th May 2008 13:47

On one level it appears that 'drugs' are the insipration for words and creativity and on another level it could be that perhaps the 'words' are the tools with which you empower yourself. I like it. Although to be frank, I seem to enjoy much of what you write. It's all very enjoyable because it's not one dimensional. Fan - tas - ic.

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Darren Thomas

Mon 26th May 2008 13:35

While this piece has a rhyming scheme it does not 'sound' blatant, in the fact that the contents, or the subject, is so intimate that it dilutes the rhyme. This is a very touching piece and one that stands out for its frankness and the author's ability to verbalize such thoughts.
Well done.

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Mon 26th May 2008 12:19

Such beautiful words, thank you Janet x

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Janet Ramsden

Mon 26th May 2008 12:16

Time heals even the greatest of loss.
The bond of love grows stronger.
I'm only ever a thought away.
In you, i live for longer.

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Mia Darlone

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Mon 26th May 2008 11:42

Thanks Jeff, on sale now! I'll email you the advert.
Really enjoyed all your poems - love the simplicity of 'I know you're there' - made me laugh. See you in July.....! (I'll be the one appologising to her parents after the show).

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Janet Ramsden

Mon 26th May 2008 11:11

You touched my heart and made me cry, bringing a lump to my throat. so now i want to run and hide so no-one else will see.

It's lovely Alison, Janet.

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Janet Ramsden

Mon 26th May 2008 02:23

This made me feel a little melancholy, but i'm tired and need some sleep.
Maybe tomorrow it will look different, then i can say, long live life!
Thankyou,Janet.

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Janet Ramsden

Mon 26th May 2008 02:13

Bravo!!

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Janet Ramsden

Mon 26th May 2008 02:10

This reminds me of when i bang my funny bone.
Funny for others but not me.
Aw, i'm sorry. Couldn't resist.
Great stuff, Janet.

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Janet Ramsden

Mon 26th May 2008 01:59

Savour the sunshine and seize the day!
That's the most positive thing i've heard in weeks. Like music to my ears. Brilliant.

"Sympathize." Hmm! Not really what i had in mind but thanks for the thought.
I may only be a 5' nothing size 8, but the years have made me strong enough to cope with almost anything. But yes, i do have rather a sweet tooth, creating temptation and weakness. Ah well.

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Jeff Dawson

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Mon 26th May 2008 01:21

Hi Daniel, deep and dark, how I like it! cheers Jeff

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Mon 26th May 2008 01:14

Hi Antonio, bet you couldn't recite this after about 10 pints!!

Very clever I like it, have you got more than one S on your keyboard? Cheers Jeff

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Jeff Dawson

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Mon 26th May 2008 01:11

Hi Melissa, thanks for your comment about my last poem, I've just read yours and its deep and meaningful - just up my street!

I also took the opportunity at looking at a couple of other, great stuff and will look for more, thanks Jeff

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Melissa R. Mendelson

Sun 25th May 2008 22:00

Your poetry reflects a piece of myself, a piece wishing for love and understanding, but the bitterness of rejection has kept my door shut. I am inspired to maybe open it once again. :)

Melissa

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Melissa R. Mendelson

Sun 25th May 2008 21:54

Ally,

I am a fan of your poetry as well, and I love the haunting touch of each word, poetic and beautiful. I especially love the first paragraph that pulled me in and kept me flowing word over word.

Melissa

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Zuzanna Musial

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Sun 25th May 2008 19:16

Hello and many thanks to all of you -

Daniel, Philip, Janet, Tomas, Mia, Antonio and Jeff.

Thank you for your time to read and comment on my write.
You comments are treasured and appreciated.

THANK YOU!!

Zuzanna

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Jeff Dawson

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Sun 25th May 2008 14:45

Phil, very touching, heart breaking stuff that most of us can relate to, I really felt it, thanks Jeff

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