Aaron Dinsdale

Profile image

Tue 3rd Dec 2013 08:43

ello there!

Comment is about Ernie Burns (Poet profile)

Original item by Ernie Burns

Kenneth Eaton-Dykes

Profile image

Mon 2nd Dec 2013 19:05

Hi Mike.

You feeling a bit insecure, catch it off your clients?
Like your style. where've you been are you going to put an appearance in at the Ring 'O' bells at all soon, could do with some more good poets

Cheers Ken

Comment is about A Tug of Love (blog)

Original item by Mike Hilton

David Cooke

Profile image

Mon 2nd Dec 2013 18:11

Hi Joshua Glad you liked the tree poem!

Comment is about Joshua Van-Cook (Poet profile)

Original item by Joshua Van-Cook

Greg Freeman

Profile image

Mon 2nd Dec 2013 16:30

Yes, I had a poem about getting knackered while walking in the Peak District in the summer issue of Orbis, David. Not much else to report in that line just recently! Look forward to meeting up somewhere in the new year.

Comment is about David Cooke (Poet profile)

Original item by David Cooke

Ged Thompson

Profile image

Mon 2nd Dec 2013 16:27

So sad and true, makes me want to get off this computer....

Few more poems to read first though

Good piece,well done mate

Ged

Comment is about Virtual Reality (blog)

Original item by Ian McGregor Hart

David Cooke

Profile image

Mon 2nd Dec 2013 15:57

Hi Greg Glad you liked the tree poem. It's recentish. Hope to make it down your way in the new year. I'm rewading again at Guildford in, I think, JUne, but have some other friends readings so might try to get down for them. Do I remember correctly seeing your name in Orbis or some such recently?

Comment is about Greg Freeman (Poet profile)

Original item by Greg Freeman

Mike Hilton

Profile image

Mon 2nd Dec 2013 15:33

Hi Laura,
Yep will try and make it if I can navigate around works parties, pantomimes, hangovers, football matches etc.

Mike

Comment is about Laura Taylor (Poet profile)

Original item by Laura Taylor

Laura Taylor

Profile image

Mon 2nd Dec 2013 14:11

Hey cheers ears! Long time no see. Hope you're well mate, and maybe see you at the crimbo Tudor? xx

Comment is about Mike Hilton (Poet profile)

Original item by Mike Hilton

Starfish

Profile image

Sun 1st Dec 2013 21:42

Hi Isobel, thank you for reading, your comments are much appreciated.
Starfish

Comment is about Isobel (Poet profile)

Original item by Isobel

Starfish

Profile image

Sun 1st Dec 2013 21:38

Hi. Glad you liked "The Badger". I purloined the rhythm from "The Tiger" by William Blake. Thank you very much for reading.

Comment is about Steve (Poet profile)

Original item by Steve

William Nowak

Sun 1st Dec 2013 21:32

New poem I just wrote...12.30.13

AM I

Am I a number?
Perhaps just another spoke
in your wheel?
Or are your words real?

Two worlds, coming together,
one black, one white.
United by common pain but
seeking in desperation for
their own hearts to be finally right.

Bravery prevails as each person
jumps in and takes a risk,
feeling the passion but also terrible
fear that their hearts will take a hit.

So am I a number or those three
words uttered by you
really true?

My fear warns me that I will soon be
like the ones that came before me.

A distant memory,
like an old photo stuffed into
an unused drawer.
Away for your beautiful eyes,
and no longer having a forever more.

I must wait for these
answers for they are yet to be revealed.
Our fate unknown,
like a newborn child’s destiny.

Am I?

Comment is about Catching my Breath (blog)

Original item by 41sec

Dave Bradley

Profile image

Sun 1st Dec 2013 18:40

I like this a lot, Deb. It's very effective in creating a feeling for words being organic elements of this mysterious world.

Comment is about Leaves (blog)

Comatose

Sun 1st Dec 2013 16:51

Thanks Steve for your lovely comment.Love your profile pic :)

Comment is about Steve (Poet profile)

Original item by Steve

Isobel

Profile image

Sun 1st Dec 2013 10:50

I can appreciate this one too - though I've found it can apply to both genders! x

Comment is about Bag of Cats (blog)

Original item by Starfish

Isobel

Profile image

Sun 1st Dec 2013 10:49

I like your move into comedy Starfish. Move over Robbie Burns - I can understand this one!

Comment is about Ode to a Field Mouse (blog)

Original item by Starfish

Steve Higgins

Profile image

Sun 1st Dec 2013 09:24

The past always has its inevitable effect on the present. Short and sweet Ian but observant.
Steve

Comment is about Moving On (blog)

Original item by Ian Whiteley

Steve Higgins

Profile image

Sun 1st Dec 2013 09:18

If you wrote me a poem like this I most certainly would!
best wishes,
Steve

Comment is about Will you ? (blog)

Steve Higgins

Profile image

Sun 1st Dec 2013 09:17

This is so musical its almost a song lyric. I love it,
Steve x

Comment is about The Badger (blog)

Original item by Starfish

M.C. Newberry

Profile image

Sat 30th Nov 2013 16:32

Hi JC - your comments on my own for "If They Come"
remind me of a pal retired back to Cumbria with
name (and belief) that suggests certain overseas origins: Swainson!
I was impressed to discover that our greatest
queen - "Good Queen Bess" - actually acted to
limit immigration (when the population wasn't
many millions) in the interest of the
social well-being of her people. Pity our modern leaders don't seem to possess the same
sense of responsibility or purpose at a time when it has increased five fold and brought with it problems in a similar ratio!

Comment is about John Coopey (Poet profile)

Original item by John Coopey

John Coopey

Profile image

Fri 29th Nov 2013 22:00

Vivid, Graham.
I especially like the picture of "bronzed ballerinas".
I hate Autumn though.

Comment is about Ballet du Jardin (blog)

Original item by Graham Sherwood

John Coopey

Profile image

Fri 29th Nov 2013 21:58

Never be ashamed to have pride.
Good for you, Shirl.

Comment is about Ninety one Word Story of My Life (blog)

Original item by Shirley Smothers

Comatose

Fri 29th Nov 2013 20:56

Thank you for your lovely kind comment.

Comment is about Starfish (Poet profile)

Original item by Starfish

Comatose

Fri 29th Nov 2013 20:55

I don't use facebook,sorry

Comment is about I (blog)

Ged Thompson

Profile image

Fri 29th Nov 2013 19:21

Thanks for the feedback Sash XXXX

Hope your well?

Ged

Comment is about sash (Poet profile)

Original item by sash

Prashant Bhadwal

Fri 29th Nov 2013 17:35

write and post on facebook here....
https://www.facebook.com/pages/Write-rhymes-Right-rhymes/578232235564471

bring your poems to india...

Comment is about And then the heart does flutter. (blog)

Original item by Ged Thompson/ Liverpool Poet

Prashant Bhadwal

Fri 29th Nov 2013 17:35

write and post on facebook here....
https://www.facebook.com/pages/Write-rhymes-Right-rhymes/578232235564471

bring your poems to india...

Comment is about Abide or Untie (blog)

Original item by Lynsey Knapp

Prashant Bhadwal

Fri 29th Nov 2013 17:35

write and post on facebook here....
https://www.facebook.com/pages/Write-rhymes-Right-rhymes/578232235564471

bring your poems to india...

Comment is about Can your man keep up with you? (blog)

Original item by Philip Fletcher

Prashant Bhadwal

Fri 29th Nov 2013 17:35

write and post on facebook here....
https://www.facebook.com/pages/Write-rhymes-Right-rhymes/578232235564471

bring your poems to india...

Comment is about Friend (blog)

Original item by Patricia and Stefan Wilde

Prashant Bhadwal

Fri 29th Nov 2013 17:35

write and post on facebook here....
https://www.facebook.com/pages/Write-rhymes-Right-rhymes/578232235564471

bring your poems to india...

Comment is about Gulls (blog)

Original item by Paul Sands

Prashant Bhadwal

Fri 29th Nov 2013 17:34

write and post on facebook here....
https://www.facebook.com/pages/Write-rhymes-Right-rhymes/578232235564471

bring your poems to india...

Comment is about Share my Umbrella (blog)

Original item by Gray Nicholls

Prashant Bhadwal

Fri 29th Nov 2013 17:34

write and post on facebook here....
https://www.facebook.com/pages/Write-rhymes-Right-rhymes/578232235564471

bring your poems to india...

Comment is about Poem: The Cross, Stark and Still (blog)

Original item by Joseph J. Breunig 3rd

Prashant Bhadwal

Fri 29th Nov 2013 17:34

write and post on facebook here....
https://www.facebook.com/pages/Write-rhymes-Right-rhymes/578232235564471

bring your poems to india...

Comment is about Flowers (blog)

Original item by George Stanworth

Prashant Bhadwal

Fri 29th Nov 2013 17:34

write and post on facebook here....
https://www.facebook.com/pages/Write-rhymes-Right-rhymes/578232235564471

bring your poems to india...

Comment is about ONE MORE SHOT (blog)

Prashant Bhadwal

Fri 29th Nov 2013 17:33

write and post on facebook here....
https://www.facebook.com/pages/Write-rhymes-Right-rhymes/578232235564471

Comment is about I (blog)

Prashant Bhadwal

Fri 29th Nov 2013 17:32

Prashant Bhadwal

Fri 29th Nov 2013 17:29

sash

Profile image

Fri 29th Nov 2013 16:47

lovely poem...love the last lines :)

Comment is about And then the heart does flutter. (blog)

Original item by Ged Thompson/ Liverpool Poet

sash

Profile image

Fri 29th Nov 2013 16:36

tnx ged :)

Comment is about Love Is No FairyTale (blog)

Original item by sash

Pete Slater

Profile image

Fri 29th Nov 2013 16:32

Visited by a memory Starfish, thank you for your comments on my poem for my sister (Our kid).

Comment is about Starfish (Poet profile)

Original item by Starfish

Pete Slater

Profile image

Fri 29th Nov 2013 16:30

Thank you for your kind comments on my poem for my sister Carol. It was her birthday on the 26th of this month hence the tribute, funny how thoughts of people you love pay you an unexpected visit.

Comment is about M.C. Newberry (Poet profile)

Original item by M.C. Newberry

Pete Slater

Profile image

Fri 29th Nov 2013 16:25

Hi Andy
Yes it should be a good night.
Thanks for offering your services my mate it is much appreciated. It's also looking like we might have a decent audience. Looking forward to seeing you on the 7th.

Comment is about Andy N (Poet profile)

Original item by Andy N

Mike Hilton

Profile image

Fri 29th Nov 2013 16:21

Brill Laura,
great picture painting and word sculpting reminds me of 'Woodstock times'.

Mike

Comment is about Smoke Rings (blog)

Original item by Laura Taylor

Isobel

Profile image

Fri 29th Nov 2013 12:45

Really emotive stuff, for me at least - I think I would find it hard not to get attached.

I'd agree with Laura that the penultimate line is a powerful one.

I think you could work on the voices within this piece a bit, to make it clearer just who is saying what. Perhaps you could give the child a name and add just a little more detail about the Odeon.

All in all, a lovely piece.

Comment is about And when we were sat in the Odeon (blog)

Original item by Ray Miller

andy n

Profile image

Fri 29th Nov 2013 12:43

lot going on in here, emma. i particularly like the use of the first and last line here but there is a lot of excellent lines in here (really).

really enjoyed this.

andy

Comment is about Travelling Home (blog)

Original item by Emma-Jane Stradling

andy n

Profile image

Fri 29th Nov 2013 12:41

not a problem, emmy. feels weird thinking of myself as a experienced writer, but i guess you could say i am now.

in relation to your stuff, i would defo keep it going as there is a talent there and a very likeable charm which is essential in any creative medium.

Comment is about emmy92 (Poet profile)

Original item by emmy92

andy n

Profile image

Fri 29th Nov 2013 12:39

looking forward to doing the charity do for you, pete as always. jeff has been telling me good stuff, looks like it will be a good un. see you soon!

Comment is about Pete Slater (Poet profile)

Original item by Pete Slater

G. Nichol

Profile image

Fri 29th Nov 2013 12:35

thanks guys. glad you like it. yeah, the ending does have a bit of teeth in it almost literally - lol

Comment is about Share my Umbrella (blog)

Original item by Gray Nicholls

M.C. Newberry

Profile image

Fri 29th Nov 2013 12:31

How true! But it is also my own suspicion that
if this is done regularly, our brains can enter
a make-believe phase that does not recognise
ageing in the reflected image and we see
ourselves unchanged. No wonder the concept of
the magic mirror ("Mirror, mirror on the wall, Who's the fairest of them all?") retains its power.
There is a current exhibition of extraordinary
photos to be found online - the "Young and Old"
theme where the photographer uses older
people gazing at supposedly younger reflections
in the mirror. The effect/illusion is clever
and carries in an instant a lifetime we need
not experience ourselves.

Comment is about Moving On (blog)

Original item by Ian Whiteley

More Comments

Choose page: <-- Prev 1 2 3 146 147 148 149 150 294 441 588 735 882 1029 1176 1323 1461 1462 1463 Next -->