Tue 29th Dec 2015 16:21
Wow indeed ❤️
Comment is about Eat it (blog)
Original item by Corr Lens
Tue 29th Dec 2015 15:54
Love this - my kind of poet x
Comment is about The Mountain Poet (blog)
Tue 29th Dec 2015 15:47
I'm new on here and just discovered you - I'm very glad I have x
Comment is about Corr Lens (poet profile)
Tue 29th Dec 2015 14:22
It's as if all's right with everything when I get your seal of approval...Thank you Graham: for reading, for commenting and for your New Year wish.
A very Happy New Year to you and yours :)
Comment is about Graham Sherwood (poet profile)
Original item by Graham Sherwood
Tue 29th Dec 2015 13:51
Thanks Tommy for kind words of appreciation!!
Comment is about When without you (blog)
Original item by Juhi Gupte
Tue 29th Dec 2015 13:00
You have mail!'
Comment is about Be Mine Tonight (blog)
Original item by Preeti
Tue 29th Dec 2015 11:59
You clever girl.
The knowledge of his lack of knowledge.
However, pretending love doesn't hurt is a difficult ask.
It always does, even when it's good!
Happy New Year Preeti!
Tue 29th Dec 2015 09:47
Very clever - I like it! Spring will arrive when it's good & ready I guess! x
Comment is about haiku (blog)
Original item by jan oskar hansen
Tue 29th Dec 2015 09:43
'Let me sing one more song' - yes! I enjoyed reading this one X
Comment is about Final Chapter: Ghost (blog)
Original item by Keith Williams
Tue 29th Dec 2015 09:39
I love the verse 'sellotaped - back up....' it's a powerful image x
Comment is about Lunacy (blog)
Original item by Lynn Hamilton
Tue 29th Dec 2015 09:28
I like the photo you posted along with this - it really shows that if you never know what's lurking underneath if you 'scratch the itch' - I can identify with this x
Comment is about Below the Surface (blog)
Original item by PatricioLG
Tue 29th Dec 2015 09:20
I like your analogy of being 'trapped' in the theatre only able to see what's shown to you & not able to turn & face the 'ghosts' - it conjures up an eerie but very beautiful image - thank you x
Comment is about Row A Seat 1 (blog)
Tue 29th Dec 2015 09:12
Wow! I love this - so simple & honest - & something we should all do! Lovely x
Comment is about Itheist (blog)
Tue 29th Dec 2015 09:05
Hey Patricio thanks for reading my poems & posting comments
Comment is about PatricioLG (poet profile)
Tue 29th Dec 2015 08:56
Hey Preeti - thanks for reading & commenting on 'The Perils of Online Dating' - I'm glad you enjoyed it! Seems woefully hard these days!! Luckily I write or I'd go mad!!
Comment is about Preeti (poet profile)
Tue 29th Dec 2015 08:53
Ah yes FB stalking.... so easy to do these days - and in a Zen like state - I do this trance like without even knowing I'm doing it half the time!! Nice one x
Comment is about Zen and the art of deletion (blog)
Tue 29th Dec 2015 08:42
Thanks Preeti - it's tough being a single gal!!!
Comment is about The Perils of Online Dating! (blog)
Original item by Pixievic
Tue 29th Dec 2015 08:40
Christmas drinking eating too
saying some things you might regret
then spending the rest of the year making up!
I did hope you did too!
Comment is about Katypoetess (poet profile)
Original item by Katypoetess
Tue 29th Dec 2015 04:44
Thanks for reading my poem :) And leaving a comment
Comment is about Pixievic (poet profile)
Tue 29th Dec 2015 04:43
Reminds me of Pink Floyd "Brain Damage"
Tue 29th Dec 2015 04:40
Hi Lynn, interesting. Were you inspired by all the recent Moon chatter on here? ie Octolune. This seems to be a metaphor, I'm curious about the context of what that might be, in your mind. I have my own interpretation.
Did you happen to see the chatter about moon poems on the discussion board regarding Octolune poems? I put something in there which I will post later.
I really enjoyed this one.
Tue 29th Dec 2015 02:24
Hi Preeti, thanks for your comment on my profile page. Much appreciated.
Tue 29th Dec 2015 00:27
Work week thoughts ! Can identify with a lot of this..esp. the gaining
inspiration in between sleep and getting up again... the frustration you speak of is captured well in this one. Nice work
Comment is about Work week thoghts (blog)
Original item by brandon sproule
Tue 29th Dec 2015 00:22
Comment is about Man on the Moon (blog)
Original item by Eva Curless
Tue 29th Dec 2015 00:02
Thank you Freda for your comments on my profile - I think we have a similar style - I've enjoyed reading your work here - I like that you write about 'real' & otherwise thought of 'mundane' things - I think poems can be found in anything - I have one about head lice!! X
Comment is about Freda Davis (poet profile)
Original item by Freda Davis
Mon 28th Dec 2015 23:57
Thank you Freda I'm pleased you enjoyed it - it's definitely written from experience, as most of my poems are, but I think most people can identify with baggage good or bad! x
Mon 28th Dec 2015 23:37
It is a scary place believe me!! All the rules have changed! I'm glad I'm not a teenager too - although to them all this is perfectly normal!!
Mon 28th Dec 2015 20:41
Today's complication:- "are you going out with him/her?", no we're just seeing each other, "so when will you be boyfriend and girlfriend?", "we're not ready yet"..... What the hell does that mean, is it a licence to be casual or is it just means of using each other?, I'm so glad that I'm not a teenager anymore and if my relationship should crumble then I don't think I could do all that again!! So frightening!!!
Mon 28th Dec 2015 19:45
Yes interesting - body or baby - or both - and 'not yours...' Something I can identity with - I like it! Vic x
Mon 28th Dec 2015 18:24
Yes have a happy holiday.
Everybody must be having a great time as nobody is seeking out the WOL discussions to communicate.
Lets hope the new year is a bit drier than the tail end of this one.
Comment is about Happy Christmas! (blog)
Original item by Noetic-fret!
Mon 28th Dec 2015 17:30
Hi Martin, thanks for reading Distance and commenting on it. Much appreciated!
Comment is about Martin Elder (poet profile)
Original item by Martin Elder
Mon 28th Dec 2015 17:29
Hi Tommy, Yes, yes please :) Look forward to your suggestions !
Comment is about Tommy Carroll (poet profile)
Original item by Tommy Carroll
Mon 28th Dec 2015 16:44
Stu, please forward IBAN code, I feel compelled to help these poor destitute arsouls!
Comment is about junk 2 (blog)
Original item by Stuart Buck
Mon 28th Dec 2015 16:39
I guess it could be referring to both, which makes it even more interesting.
Mon 28th Dec 2015 16:33
Nice one Cynthia. I am liking this a lot.
Comment is about Hymn of a Northern Clime (blog)
Original item by Cynthia Buell Thomas
Mon 28th Dec 2015 16:23
Love a prerequisite for separation is a prerequisite for forgetting- well, maybe it's the other way around. Like I this. Tommy
Comment is about We Kissed As The House Blew Away (blog)
Original item by Tom
Mon 28th Dec 2015 16:07
Baby or body? I'm tempted to advise you on the structure of this piece (very seldom if ever have I been so to do ((??)) )
Mon 28th Dec 2015 15:15
How have I missed your later work Juhi? "Whilst ardently slanting on walls"...the image is beholden to the words...Tommy
Emer Ni Chorra
Mon 28th Dec 2015 12:07
This one made me laugh :D
That last line!
Comment is about excuse me (blog)
Original item by Andrea Sharpe
Mon 28th Dec 2015 11:18
Oh really thats incredibly wonderful! You even remind me of my late favourate artist from america :michael jackson. I quote :"your love is magical,that how you make me feel...But i have not the words here to explain...Gone is the grace for expression of passion...To tell you how i feel ...But i am speechless,speechless...thats how you make me feel...helpless and homeless,thats how you make me feel... But in your presence.I AM LOST FOR WORDS...WORDS LIKE,"I LOVE YOU" ". Your lines remind me me of that song and its really great
Comment is about (blog)
Original item by Madison Martin
Mon 28th Dec 2015 11:14
Mon 28th Dec 2015 11:01
Hi Ria. If you receive two comments on this apologies. This is a brilliant piece and I'm thoroughly enjoying reading your work. Xxx
Comment is about Chemotherapy (blog)
Original item by Ria Harrison
Mon 28th Dec 2015 10:54
Hi David. Its based on an experience I had at 5.10 am sat at a bedside in intensive care. I should have done as I was told! x
Comment is about Wisp (blog)
Mon 28th Dec 2015 10:42
Thanks for reading and commenting, Mr B. Your comment in itself makes lovely reading! x
Comment is about Sink Ink (blog)
Mon 28th Dec 2015 10:33
Thank you Maddy for your very generous comment. Much appreciated x
Comment is about Recovery Position (blog)
Mon 28th Dec 2015 07:41
Hi Lynn, whats the story behind this?
Mon 28th Dec 2015 00:51
Thank you Cynthia. It is about loss. As I'm sure that you know. Everything passes. xx
Comment is about Elegy (blog)
Original item by John Marks
Sun 27th Dec 2015 22:37
Heh heh! Because I said so....
Comment is about bluelit 2 (12/23/2015) (blog)
Original item by Zach Dafoe
Sun 27th Dec 2015 20:41
Thank you everyone :)
Comment is about Love at last sight, a triolet. (blog)
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