moxy casimirs Keg of Curiosity
Sun 26th Apr 2009 10:44
'avioswineproof bivouacs with perspicacious windows for them to look out on the world.' I'm on the case. Patent's just been applied for, am looking at mulched bank-note papier mache life casts they can trot around in (photo-realistic portraits on exterior) with charcoal air filter and state of the art biocide fumigation rumpus.
Comment is about Malpoet (Poet profile)
Original item by Malpoet
Sun 26th Apr 2009 10:20
Hello Sirrah! It's scary being back but fortitude is everything. Well, it's something and it's nowt.
PS I spotted a dalmanda in a bivouac.
Sun 26th Apr 2009 00:08
Instant Classic...what higher praise can I ever need...especially from yer goodself...
Thanx once again
you're a pal
Comment is about (Poet profile)
Sat 25th Apr 2009 20:33
Bonjour Francine! Love lives in your poems... and you Romance the profound. There's a stillness at their core which is astounding and delightful. Encore! Encore!
Sat 25th Apr 2009 20:27
Hello Pete! What a riotous poetry-dandy you are, with your tailored fillips and fiery fandangos. All joy to you and your Muse -- you have the whoosh and wham of Blake about you!
Sat 25th Apr 2009 19:29
Loud, loutish lover, treat her kindly
(Though she needs you
More than she loves you)
Stephen Patrick... golden years Pete - golden years
Comment is about I know it's over (The Smiths) (Blog entry)
Sat 25th Apr 2009 18:43
Hi Sian, which way to turn? Follow your heart - or maybe not that doesn't always work! Ha, thanx for your comment on Crossroads - I think I'm just going with the flow I think and its kinda nice! Where do you live? It doesn't say on your file, be nice to bump into you at a poetry event sometime! Jeff X
Comment is about sian howell (Poet profile)
Original item by sian howell
Sat 25th Apr 2009 18:22
Hi Graham...great fun this piece made me smile...which is much needed...thanks for your comments by the way...spot on as always. I am trying to write something more uplifting at present but my heart isn't in it. Sian X
Comment is about Arab in my carpet (Blog entry)
Original item by Graham Sherwood
Sat 25th Apr 2009 10:47
Garibaldi cannot be beaten except by a fig roll. Leave those soggy bourbons behind. Howdy doody Cayn. I see you're still a solar-powered million watt powerhouse poet!
Comment is about Cayn White (Poet profile)
Original item by Cayn White
Sat 25th Apr 2009 08:26
yes please , mail it to me if you get the time or the inclination :)
Sat 25th Apr 2009 07:29
Francine I appreciate your comments on my poems,we appear to share the the same approach to poetry.It always feels good to get approval from a kindred spirit. Thanks x
The whole essence of this wow number is:
I know it's over
And it never really began
But in my heart it was so real
And you even spoke to me, and said :
"If you're so funny
Then why are you on your own tonight ?
And if you're so clever
Then why are you on your own tonight ?
If you're so very entertaining
Then why are you on your own tonight ?
If you're so very good-looking
Why do you sleep alone tonight ?
I know ...
'Cause tonight is just like any other night
That's why you're on your own tonight
Sat 25th Apr 2009 07:15
What I was struggling to say was,
How well you are getting to know me... is that for better or worse...I wonder?
Do you know it does not really make alot of sense in English, well it did at the time.
I'll change the picture back ..just for you.
Sat 25th Apr 2009 04:22
Awww... 'Love Book' is so adorable...
'Love Book - The Finale' not so much : (
'This Love' is Beautifully written...
Comment is about The Lost Poet (Poet profile)
Original item by The Lost Poet
Sat 25th Apr 2009 04:02
So many nicely written poems...
I especially like 'Bliss'
'I move close
Gently kiss his lips.
His eyes open and look deep into mine.
Arms draw me into his embrace,
We both smile.
Mmmm... it is Bliss : )
Comment is about Valerie Cook (Poet profile)
Original item by Valerie Cook
Sat 25th Apr 2009 03:42
Really like your poem titled 'The Poet and His Muse' has a sort of fairytale quality...
She seems so feminine in every way so this line I find interesting in that I don't understand it's inclusion 'Virility her virtue.'
Care to elaborate?
Comment is about Richard Brooks (Poet profile)
Original item by Richard Brooks
Sat 25th Apr 2009 03:24
Really like your poem 'special delivery.'
It is well written - ending came as a bit of a sad surprise though... even after reading your bio!
Comment is about the other woman (Poet profile)
Original item by the other woman
Sat 25th Apr 2009 02:58
Je vous corrige un peu...
'Oh oui, ma Francine chérie,
Vous finissez par me connaître meilleur.' (mieux)
'Est-ce que ce pour le plus mauvais j'est de la merveille ?' Je suis désolée, mais je ne comprends pas du tout ce que vous voulez dire...
p.s. I liked the first picture much better as it was more mysterious and showed the tower... ; )
Comment is about Gus Jonsson (Poet profile)
Original item by Gus Jonsson
Sat 25th Apr 2009 02:42
Lyrics are moving...
For me, these lines capture the essence:
'I know it's over
And it never really began
But in my heart it was so real'
'Love is Natural and Real
But not for such as you and I, my love'
Fri 24th Apr 2009 18:16
Oh oui, ma Francine chérie,
Vous finissez par me connaître meilleur.
Est-ce que ce pour le plus mauvais j'est de la merveille ?
Merci de nouveau de vos commentaires merveilleux.
Fri 24th Apr 2009 17:21
Hi Francine; just a quick one, thanks for thinking of me. I'm currently relocating to London from Manchester, and down most of next week for interviews and sorting things out. Had nearly finished the poem before it all happened, so will try to find time to finish it and check in more often. I hope all is well with you too.
Comment is about Sister Solstice (Poet profile)
Original item by Sister Solstice
Fri 24th Apr 2009 11:30
I find that the shoe is often missing . . :) but for me the pipe work pie . Why dont we have space travel yet . . . I have been promised aliens and transporter rooms all my life
Comment is about totally random dream trashing (Blog entry)
Fri 24th Apr 2009 10:34
Scott !!! I found you....didn't know your name so was a bit of a task. Have you just finished your 1st or 2nd yr? I'm off now - all done and it feels great. See you around - will keep u posted on events I get involved in as I would like you to read.
Good luck with the MA and i'm sure u will do well.
Fri 24th Apr 2009 07:29
This a fabulous journey...
Great thought process
Every laugh they ever had
Was meaningless, because they aren’t laughing now
Every ringing titter
Very well done
Comment is about The Children are Sleeping (Blog entry)
Original item by Sophie Hall
Fri 24th Apr 2009 03:40
I don't know how I missed commenting on this because I remember reading it... perhaps I was a bit rushed... Love it! Very clever...
Merci aussi pour ta remarque sur mon poème 'Beach Lover'
Comment is about An ode to something quite special (Blog entry)
Fri 24th Apr 2009 03:18
Hope all is well... it's been a while!
Fri 24th Apr 2009 03:01
Got a good laugh from 'work is shit'
Love 'the day i was a guest on the book show'
These lines are quite witty ; )
'so post psychological evaluation
what do you do for relaxation
darling of the nation?
slip your hand in mine
and with sublime coordination
indulge me in some mutual understanding'
Comment is about John Darwin (Poet profile)
Original item by John Darwin
Fri 24th Apr 2009 02:28
Very good imagery here...
and it took me back too...
Comment is about Party to it (Blog entry)
Original item by Steve O'Connor
Fri 24th Apr 2009 02:14
I just read your poem 'Life Is a Gift' and it is very lovely and inspirational...
Comment is about Zuzanna Musial (Poet profile)
Original item by Zuzanna Musial
Thu 23rd Apr 2009 22:40
Identified with this.
Comment is about The thought of you hurting (Blog entry)
Original item by Tony
Thu 23rd Apr 2009 21:04
Hi, many thanks for your comment, some appreciation from a teacher?? 17 years too late maybe or mybe not!! Many Thanks
Thu 23rd Apr 2009 21:02
Aha so this is your writeoutloud page! Congrats on your BA, Im struggling through my first uni year haha let alone 3. Sounds like a cracking course though!
"During this unscheduled but inevitable stop,
my fingers shakey-scramble in my bag
and I pop my headphones in, scrolling
for that song.
I quite dig these lines, so I do - as it is what I do too haha.
Dont suppose youre going to lattitude this year are you? xxx
Thu 23rd Apr 2009 18:47
Poor Andy. Someone ought to tell him that kissing isn't only for the girls.
Comment is about Learning To Kiss (Blog entry)
Thu 23rd Apr 2009 17:01
Lovely end of the day lexicon tapestry, fizzzz and whistle... love it
nor a wishing well on which to draw
not the ruffled feather of yesterdays jackdaw
love these lines
Well done Peter.
Thu 23rd Apr 2009 16:56
I do crosswords when I'm about my ablusions,
however when I get stuck,as you do, and need a prod, as you do, I often ask an itinerant nomad.
Thu 23rd Apr 2009 16:52
Hiya, glad you agree, yes it needs a title to do it justice, what about 'Concerto of Love' ? Was thinking 'Orchestra of Love' or life or something like that, your feelings will help you decide! great Stuff, glad I could help, Jeff X
ps Am gonna come back and look at your profile stuff, looks great! X
Comment is about KtD (Poet profile)
Original item by KtD
Thu 23rd Apr 2009 16:20
Hi Jeff, Thanks for the comment...and you are right! The title needs a bit more to it, I'm not sure what yet, but working on it, any suggestions would be greatfully received! x
Comment is about Jeffarama! (Poet profile)
Original item by Jeffarama!
Thu 23rd Apr 2009 12:24
Hey ho Tone
The Medina is The name of the river that splits east from west on the Isle of Wight...a good old Roman name.. they called the IOW Vectis.
Thu 23rd Apr 2009 12:21
It is so the Isle Wight can win the World Morris Dancing Final, nowithstanding they stop the borders from fraying.
By the way are you still taking the medication.
Comment is about Country file (Blog entry)
Thu 23rd Apr 2009 11:07
Hi Clarissa and Francine!
No it was not a dream it was just thoughts before I went to bed, I just like to type the next word that follows and see what unfolds, an exercise in writing automatic!
I do not recall my dreams from last night, I woke up suddenly and had to rush out to work!