clarissa mckone

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Fri 28th Mar 2008 02:23

very nice poem, full of peace

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clarissa mckone

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Fri 28th Mar 2008 02:22

very nice poem, full of peace

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clarissa mckone

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Fri 28th Mar 2008 02:22

very nice poem, full of peace

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David Morgan

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Fri 28th Mar 2008 00:21

Hey Monkey, watcha doing, I was hoping to sell that to Hello Magazine with "my story". And what's with the"tinyurl" Blacburn? My url's as big as anyone else's. Bastards!

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David Morgan

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Fri 28th Mar 2008 00:16

Peter, like Clarissa I can't hear them, my laptop has stopped dealing in sound, but by God the idea of Kare Bush and a Mixed Grill is making me salivate. To paraphrase John Clays "more please". Must go and make myself some toasted cheese,(with Branston Pickle of course), oh Kate, the appetite you inspire in a man.

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Fri 28th Mar 2008 00:07

Hey Steve we need to hear more of these sessions, or is it just difficult to remember them?

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paul

Fri 28th Mar 2008 00:05

He's not throwing up, but bowing submissively to the ghost of the Old Boars Head

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David Morgan

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Thu 27th Mar 2008 23:59

Is that bald chap just throwing up or is he trying to do a Hank Bukowski? We demand an answer.

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Darren Whitehead

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Thu 27th Mar 2008 17:28

Damn! That bald man is sexy!
Damn! That bald man is me!

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Steve OConnor

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Wed 26th Mar 2008 21:25

Howdo you

GOOD! Post your stuff here an' all!

No more Myspace privileges at work. (That's probably a good thing!)

Fuck the B.N.P. is a cracker. More please.

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Tony Walsh

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Wed 26th Mar 2008 17:35

Cheers Dave. Nice to see you there. The better photos are used with kind permission of official photographer Bernie O'Brien.

Yeah, i was a bit nervous about this one but ended up really enjoying it. Mcr Irish Festival is one of the biggest in the world. It meant a lot to me (would have loved my mum and dad to be able to be there) and there were at least 500 people rammed into the magnificent Great Hall of Manchester Town Hall - couple of hundred stood at the back. Despite pacing round nervously for a couple of hours beforehand, muttering my 2 poems to myself, I managed to leave the longest 5 seconds of my life between two lines but managed to recover - not sure if anyone noticed besides my wife!!

Can I just point out that I took no part in the later debauchery to which Mr Morgan refers. I neither singed nor signed any part of Dave's anatomy! I adjourned to the Contact Theatre to mingle following the Apples and Snakes event with Polarbear et al.

Slainte

Tony

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Zuzanna Musial

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Wed 26th Mar 2008 17:11

Great reflection of what happened that night in Paris. I will never understand why those two had to die-because of the pursuit of the paparazzi. They chased them every place they went. The poem says volume and there is some mystery behind as well. Thank you for the sad but truth-spoken poetry.

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Zuzanna

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paul

Wed 26th Mar 2008 09:34

Photos by Gemma O'Neill with more to come from Seamus when he gets back off Holiday

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Zuzanna Musial

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Tue 25th Mar 2008 20:53

Hello to You!

Sad life for a young man. He must of been ill minded for some reason. I guess he deserved to die, although it is not up to me to judge.

Biography

McVeigh was born in Lockport, New York, and raised in nearby Pendleton, New York. He was the middle child of three, and the only male child. He earned his high school diploma from Starpoint Central High School. His parents, Mildred Noreen ("Mickey") Hill and William McVeigh, divorced when he was 10. His parents were of Irish and German origin. McVeigh was known throughout his life as a loner; his only known affiliations were voter registration with the Republican Party when he lived in New York, and a membership in the National Rifle Association while in the military.

Thank you,
Zuzanna

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Zuzanna Musial

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Mon 24th Mar 2008 21:53

Hello Dear Belinda

Thought provoking poem; So many issues just with one word” INDEPENDENT" Well this word is a broad spectrum word to be used. Some like independence and some do no not!

I believe it is a matter of choice which direction an individual takes. Life in general requires being INDEPENDENCE...Again; I can go on and on this one… We had to teach independence our clients who lost the privilege due illness or accidents.
GREAT POEM!!!

Kind Regards,
Zuzanna

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Mon 24th Mar 2008 21:46

Hello Dear Clarissa

This is mainly for fun and not serious looking for someone. I know what you trying to tell in your response. I have tendency to write serious poems. I’ve tried a little humour in this one. Although when I read it still sounds serious...Smile.

Many thanks for the comment!

Warm Regards,
Zuzanna

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Zuzanna Musial

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Mon 24th Mar 2008 21:42

Hello, Malpoet

The write is EXCELLENT!!
You have touched so much truth & issues that apply to the entire World. It is the Liberty that shall be respected…The Statue represent FREEDOM…Where is it?
And you used a lot of important substance in your write...All makes perfect sense. Thought provoking poem... Thank you.

Regards,
Zuzanna

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Pete Crompton

Mon 24th Mar 2008 21:19

hmm I think the link is faulty, it seems to put wol as a prefix??

I put them on the site for now (petecrompton.com)

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clarissa mckone

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Mon 24th Mar 2008 18:58

HI Malcom, this is a cool poem. You know, when 911 happened, I was at home watching it, before I went to work. Then I watched the economy start to crumble.I saw the videos of Mr Moore, Im like you, I dont know about him and Im sure I dont agree with all in the film.Im all so sure I dont agree with all the "war". From my view we have become terrorists, by engageing in this war, and not declairing it in the senate, per the constitution. The prision camps are an abomination, with parts of the bill of rights, suspended, it makes for no justice. I have been active in the political arena, and found that nothing can/will get done. I have written my congress and others, to get no answer, I have signed petition after pettition, to have nothing change. as I have stated before Im a libertairian, that has infiltrated the republican party. I can tell you its one bunch of bull shit after another. If I owned the media, or if I was a lobbiest, then I would be given time as I would be paying my elected officials to listen to me. However they already get a fine wage for doing nothing. I believe we are in need of a march on Washington, a possible revolution is around the corner.They tell us McCain is winner of republican party and all delegates, however we have flooded the party, they have no clue just how many are NON McCain, and are pro Libertairian.I dont know what will happen.I know the media lies.I know we will have to go public at some point, that we have taken over the republican party.Great poem man!!! Keep writting, at some point I may not be able to say anything, just to save my family.I hate to think of my country in that way, but I have no trust for it/them.Take care Malcom, remember your government is my government.Not much difference in the 2.

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ian leslie

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Mon 24th Mar 2008 15:26

Hi pal, seen you a couple of times and really enjoyed your performances. Finally plucked up the courage to submit. Hope all is good, Ian.

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ian leslie

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Mon 24th Mar 2008 15:21

Wow, great stuff.

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Zuzanna Musial

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Mon 24th Mar 2008 00:41

Hello Dear Clarissa

Thank you for the great comment!
Yes indeed it sounds like a lyrics, if find a tune for it.I will be able to create a song.
It supposedly to be a poem about love...Smile.
It is original the way came out.

Warm Regards,
Zuzanna

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clarissa mckone

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Sun 23rd Mar 2008 17:27

Hi malcom, nice little poem. Daffodils are one of my top 10 fav flowers.They are in bloom here.

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Belinda Johnston

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Sun 23rd Mar 2008 09:30

Thank you very much David, Mel and Clarissa for your comments. You're all quite right about the character and a mimi story. I sat down for quite some time and thought about the person that influenced this poem. It's like they became part of me, and I was feeling there pain, emotion.

It can be a lonely existence in this world sometimes eh?

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clarissa mckone

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Sun 23rd Mar 2008 05:45

Hi Belinda, this is very nice, I could see it as if its a mini movie. How those words ring in my head and heart. take care

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clarissa mckone

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Sun 23rd Mar 2008 05:43

Hi Zuzanna,
Nice poem, I think if you stop looking you find.Thats what has kinda worked for me.We are not perfect and they wont be either.They can be found any place, normal places you go day to day. Bars are wrong place and I could name others but then Id get called names by some, so I wont say any other wrong places.Friends can find them at times for you. Best is person you can talk to, and are friends with, they make a good life partner. wonderful poem!

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Sun 23rd Mar 2008 05:38

Im sure they are great! I cant get them to work on my PC, cant hear the 2 of them but can hear others.I always liked mixed grill, to read, so Im sure you do it well.As for being in love with kate Bush, cant hear it or understand it, but then, its the PC thing.

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clarissa mckone

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Sun 23rd Mar 2008 05:35

Hi Zuzanna,
This is such a nice poem, its so song like. I hope you are well and that you have a nice Easter. take care Clarissa

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Sun 23rd Mar 2008 02:23

Hi, Nefertiti

Welcome to WOL. - It is a pleasure meeting you.
I have taken the opportunity to read your poems.

All your poems are nicely written. Loved the BNP...You are certainly not afraid to speak your mind. Good for you. I believe that we all belong to this Earth it does not matter where we are from. It is time to stop the discrimination based on race and colour of the skin.


Happy Easter!
Zuzanna

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Zuzanna Musial

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Sun 23rd Mar 2008 02:17

Dear Nefertiti

Well the search at times my takes longer.
Never give up!!

I thought of this as a partial reality in todays world. Talked to a lot of woman and learned that finding the right person it is not an easy task this days. That is why I used this in my poem.
It suppose to be a little humorous write.

Thank you,
Zuzanna

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Sun 23rd Mar 2008 02:10

Dear Melanie

Thank you for the lovely comment on my latest poem...Hope you have a great Easter!!

Kind Regards,
Zuzanna

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Zuzanna Musial

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Sun 23rd Mar 2008 02:09

Dear Malanie

Sorry for my late response. Thank you so much for the comment. This suppose to be a humorous poem, however often times it looks like a reality.
The humour applications are in those places which places the person is looking for her soul mate...Smile.

Warm Regards,
Zuzanna

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Pete Crompton

Sun 23rd Mar 2008 01:18

MEL! Thanks wow you always help me along with my writing with your reviews!

Dave you aint got the monopoly on age boy! :-)

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Pete Crompton

Sun 23rd Mar 2008 01:09

really good point Clarissa! it makes sense in a crazy way, too put that mad music over all the killing. the killing was stupid in the first place. to underline it with this just extends the lunacy. it is all part of the same self re inforcing club. like jinkies hangin out only with junkies. it all seems fine if you share the same delusion.

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Pete Crompton

Sun 23rd Mar 2008 01:07

thanks Clarissa for all your comments. You always take time to read my work and its great to see what you think. Blind faith is difficult. yes. Im more a pagan I think.

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clarissa mckone

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Sun 23rd Mar 2008 00:10

Hi Peter, very nice poem! Can you imagin being God? Having to hear all at the same time billions of people asking things? I cant, would not want the job.You cant test God. You either have faith, or you dont. Church is not required.Answers come when God can answer and you can hear.Dont you know the answers at times, to the questions you ask?I remember we talked about this before, and you never said what you believe.Blind faith is at best difficult.I have had answers, as I told you. I have seen things, that some would say was of heaven. I dont know, others would say I was crazy, but I know what I saw, and how it made me feel. To not be on drugs or drunk and have visions...well I dont know. Loved the poem. Happy Easter..Psss its a pagan holiday, the way most all churches do it.

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Pete Crompton

Sat 22nd Mar 2008 22:25

thanks, Ive found it. So you took it Paul, great work.

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paul

Sat 22nd Mar 2008 21:28

Hi Pete
I took the photo at WOL's first Poetry Picnic at Entwistle in July 2007, you can find it at
http://tinyurl.com/2go9n5

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Melanie Rees

Sat 22nd Mar 2008 20:16

Lovely poem, beautiful Belle. Its' really interseting the way you have got into the head of the character. It is a very thought provoking poem.

Mel
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Melanie Rees

Sat 22nd Mar 2008 20:07

A lovely poem Peter. I liked the nursey rhyme influence, it works. A dark poem, but with a glimmer of optimism at the end.

I die
I'm born

Lovely.
x

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David Morgan

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Sat 22nd Mar 2008 19:16

I'm sorry Mal, they don't look that saggy to me, not that I'm an expert or even fussy
One shouldn't look a gift horse in the mouth,
or even think of ignoring a playful pussy.

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David Morgan

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Sat 22nd Mar 2008 19:07

I've told you before, young Peter, stop writing poems about me.

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David Morgan

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Sat 22nd Mar 2008 19:05

Love this Belinda, says so much in so few words, tells a story, my weakness, a film within a poem, great.

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David Morgan

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Sat 22nd Mar 2008 19:01

I have to say I was asked to move aside so that one of those photos could be taken, how's that for a brush with fame. TW was excellent as ever, and as far as I remember so was the Guinness and the Janesons. The evening only marred by some nouveau riche notions of topping it with flaming sambuccas in the Tiger Lounge which almost led to conflagration, immolation and singed testicles.

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clarissa mckone

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Fri 21st Mar 2008 01:49

HI Nefertiti,
I enjoyed reading this poem, it has spunk! We females need that spunk, to deal with some men and people in general. Im a peacful person for most all events. But I have teeth and a baseball Bat, and a cross bow, and I can dial 911 very fast, Oh yeah and I can throw well!!! haha i love the poem!

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clarissa mckone

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Fri 21st Mar 2008 01:43

Hi Neil,
I enjoyed reading this poem and thinking about being a cloud and looking down.I think you have done very well with your poem.

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clarissa mckone

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Fri 21st Mar 2008 01:39

HI Neil, I really enjoyed reading this poem and thinking about the words used.I like the poem, its deep and makes us think.I kinda think that some times in life, may need silence, no words can make some times any better.Voids in life, wow, yeah Im sure I have had them. thanks

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clarissa mckone

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Fri 21st Mar 2008 01:32

HI Daniel,
I really like this poem. I think most people are a bit mad, in one way or another.Some of the most sane, have been crazy at times. I know for some its a chemical imbalance. For others its a bad day/week/month/year.I know I have totally lost it at times,no imbalance, I guess I can blame hormones, mine were out of whack for years and IM sure some thought I was really crazy. Ha at times I think Im crazy, but its just life, the ups and downs of it all. My fav movie line "Life is like a roller coaster"I try very hard to be and stay positive, for self and others. Hope your well, TC Clarissa

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clarissa mckone

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Thu 20th Mar 2008 23:30

HI Peter, This is very nice.

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Malcolm Saunders

Thu 20th Mar 2008 14:18

Thank you Robert.

The glimpses were moments when he would be working on a bike he was putting together for me from scrap parts that we had collected and he would introduce me to a knowledge of engineering (e.g. the nature of metal fatigue in aircraft and unexpected failures resulting from it) that I couldn't imagine where or how he had acquired it. Other times he would make an incubator for his chicken and turkey eggs from a light bulb, some recovered glass from an old shed and a thermometer. He never really communicated though.

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