Sun 23rd May 2010 10:26
Anthony, Zeus was so devious,he knew just what would happen. After all he masterminded the plot.LOL
Comment is about Pandora`s Legacy (blog)
Original item by Valerie Cook
Sun 23rd May 2010 10:23
I think the woman in the cave has the best deal! Enjoyed this, Ann, full of ideas, expansive
Comment is about women of the world (blog)
Original item by Ann Foxglove
Sun 23rd May 2010 09:43
Hi Isobel, Sorry, i wont be attending on tuesday, lack of babysitter. I'm sure we'll meet eventually! Thanks for asking though, it's quite a nice feeling to know i'm wanted lol x
Comment is about Isobel (Poet profile)
Original item by Isobel
Sun 23rd May 2010 09:20
An unusual poem - like the subject matter cos it's different and so very true. I'm not so sure I can link the title to the theme though.
Like the play on the word intimate and strengh of mumbles and the whole innocent/guilty theme.
One thing I can't take to in your poetry is the use of & - to me it just seems unpoetic - a bit like something I'd expect in a IT document. Hope you don't mind me saying that - better to have a genuine comment than a wooly one, in my opinion!
Comment is about grasping at straws (blog)
Original item by Banksy
Sun 23rd May 2010 09:16
Cate, thanks for your comments on my poems.That's just the kind of criticism I like to hear.If I were more skilful I'd be able to blend poetry into the narrative seamlessly, but as you say, it's too prosaic in parts.
Comment is about Cate (Poet profile)
Original item by Cate
Sun 23rd May 2010 09:13
You aren't by any chance going to the Vanilla Lounge on Tuesday? It sounds like a few Wigan poets may be there. I'm determined to meet you one day! x
Comment is about Kath Hewitt (Poet profile)
Original item by Kath Hewitt
Sun 23rd May 2010 09:08
I would say those are quite ominous musings - you haven't just read the Rapture by any chance?
I like your ideas - as you say, nothing lasts forever, not even our sun... man is just an insignificant grain of sand in the universe ... a cheery thought for a Sunday morning! xx
Comment is about Dead End (blog)
Original item by Dave Dunn
Sun 23rd May 2010 08:59
Ta for your comments, Anthony. The Mad History thing is part of a spoof series on mental illness. Sometimes it's hard to overtrump the facts and I've had at least one person take the Egyptian story at face value!
Comment is about Anthony Emmerson (Poet profile)
Original item by Anthony Emmerson
Sun 23rd May 2010 08:52
I read this last night Cynthia, and couldnt get a take on it, but it lingered in my mind so Ive come back to have another look this morning. That must be a success story! Im still not sure but Im gonna take it that theres hope for all us aspriring poets!
Comment is about Pandora's Box (blog)
Original item by Cynthia Buell Thomas
Sun 23rd May 2010 08:42
This is quite beautiful Nash. I shall go and research the poet you recommend... he must be worthwhile if hes inspired this piece of writing!
Comment is about Puedo Escribir (tonight I can write) (blog)
Original item by Nash
Dave Dunn aka Rhumour
Sun 23rd May 2010 01:00
Hi Stefan, I think the winning numbers for this weekend have already been published... Have a great weekend :)
Comment is about Patricia and Stefan Wilde (Poet profile)
Original item by Patricia and Stefan Wilde
Sun 23rd May 2010 00:53
A good early Sunday morning to you and family Dave-re the great minds-yours taking the lead without doubt!spooky though all the same thought eh!ok,another telepathic venture..er....think of six winning numbers,my email adress is.......lol! Stefan.
Comment is about Dave Dunn (Poet profile)
Sat 22nd May 2010 23:34
Thanks for your comment Ann, much appreciated.
Comment is about Ann Foxglove (Poet profile)
Sat 22nd May 2010 23:32
Thanks again, much appreciated.
Sat 22nd May 2010 23:05
Quite brilliant! Im not sure how it stands as a poem though.... it seems to me to be prose broken up into lines. But this didnt matter as I found it quite riveting to read.
Comment is about Mad History: The Early Egyptians (blog)
Sat 22nd May 2010 23:04
A touch of great minds you mean Stefan? Best wishes, Dave
Sat 22nd May 2010 23:02
Hi Winston, thanks for your comments on 'Dead End' - best wishes,
Comment is about Winston Plowes (Poet profile)
Original item by Winston Plowes
Sat 22nd May 2010 22:53
Te he he....thats a poxy story!
ps luv it!
Comment is about . . . of varts and tickers (blog)
Sat 22nd May 2010 22:45
Yu did a good kon job on us there! Luved it1
Comment is about A Yukon Tale . . . (blog)
Sat 22nd May 2010 22:39
I like this Nash. Simple but quite profound.
Comment is about Pandora’s Box (blog)
Sat 22nd May 2010 22:38
I have to agree with everything said Marianne. A very powerful piece of work.
Original item by Marianne Daniels
Sat 22nd May 2010 22:34
A lovely reading of your interesting take on the title. I like your first four lines... they cleverly lead the way into the rest of the theme.
Comment is about pandora's jar (blog)
Melissa R. Mendelson
Sat 22nd May 2010 21:48
Hi, Winston. My dreams are a definite source of inspiration, spiraling into a million thoughts.
Thank you. :)
Comment is about Exist (Based on last night's dream) (blog)
Sat 22nd May 2010 21:33
Loved this Melissa, good to see a recent one from you, and inspired by a dream too, fab. You could go anywhere from those first 3 lines which grabbed my attension briliantly. Win
Sat 22nd May 2010 21:23
On the whole Dave, I agree. Nicely put. Win
Sat 22nd May 2010 21:19
Short sweet and clever!
Comment is about Pandora haiku (blog)
Original item by Dave Bradley
Sat 22nd May 2010 21:18
Liked this Pandora poem very much. as it has been said "Gentle / powerful / sad" Win :-)
Comment is about Pandora`s Box (blog)
Sat 22nd May 2010 21:17
I enjoyed reading this Ansy... a modernistic and clever take on the theme.
Comment is about Pandora's lost Box (blog)
Original item by Andy N
Sat 22nd May 2010 21:13
Hum... its like saying we `re not responsible for our own actions cos its all in the genes! A clever take on it though.
Comment is about Pandora's Box Rap (blog)
Sat 22nd May 2010 21:10
Very clever Isobel... its amazing how so many different poems can come out of one theme!
Comment is about PANDORA'S BOX (Germane thoughts to er - agree with...) (blog)
Sat 22nd May 2010 20:50
Stefan - Posted a reply just now in the "latest 10 members" discussion thread. Winston
Sat 22nd May 2010 20:49
thank you so much...appreciated !
Comment is about Santosh Kalwar (Poet profile)
Original item by Santosh Kalwar
Sat 22nd May 2010 20:37
Hi Josh, welcome to WOL. Enjoy.Maybe see you at Bolton WOL. Winston
Comment is about Josh Coates (Poet profile)
Original item by Josh Coates
Sat 22nd May 2010 20:29
Hi there santosh... Hope you enjoy exploring on here. welcome and enjoy. Winston
Sat 22nd May 2010 20:21
Hi cynthia welcome to WOL. I hope you enjoy the site and find something that interests you. Winston
Comment is about Cynthia Greenwood (Poet profile)
Original item by Cynthia Greenwood
Sat 22nd May 2010 19:18
Found this today, made me laugh out loud...
"For those of us who cannot spell
I name this website ROL"
Sat 22nd May 2010 19:16
And once again the angel has fallen on the floor, A fallen angel... great image. Win
Comment is about My First Christmas Poem (blog)
Original item by Cayn White
Sat 22nd May 2010 19:15
good review, although we know thatthere is more to you than that. Keep giging mate... Win
Comment is about Review of a cd wwhich one of my poems appears on (blog)
Sat 22nd May 2010 19:14
Liked this Cayne. good angles on an age old problem. maybe it should be called 'alcoholocaust'? Win
Comment is about Back to the Bottle (blog)
Sat 22nd May 2010 19:11
Rmmber th performance of this.. Nice one . win
Comment is about Help I'm a giraffe (blog)
Sat 22nd May 2010 19:09
I didn't expect the badger diversion... Poor woman1 :-0
Comment is about Displacement Activity (blog)
Sat 22nd May 2010 18:35
spooky comment for you Dave-I was in mind of doing poem on triassic period-'prehistoric memories in shifting sand caverns'-etc etc-just before you popped this good one on.Enjoyed nevertheless-Stefan.
Sat 22nd May 2010 18:10
I have to agree with the powerful imagery at work here Marianne...
so many exquisite lines. Brilliant!
Sat 22nd May 2010 17:22
I love your comment on my poem 'Pandora's Affliction'...
It made my day - You have a wonderful sense of humour! I wrote the poem first, which in turn inspired my choice of photo.
Sat 22nd May 2010 17:12
Thanks Win, mine neither, I walked to school, but there was always THAT girl at school who was more grown up than everyone else, who was always otherworldly.
Comment is about BACK-SEAT BRENDA (blog)
Sat 22nd May 2010 17:11
Indeed, A.E., seems like we never learn. Those girls are always ahead of us every step. Cheers, Nash
Sat 22nd May 2010 17:10
Thank you, Isobel and AE!
Sat 22nd May 2010 17:08
Thank you, Dave. I didn't realize it was a scientific fact. I wonder if remembering dreams from a long time ago is better in women than men too.
Sat 22nd May 2010 16:21
.... but please don't feel you have to comment again.
Sat 22nd May 2010 16:19
Thank-you - removed it 'cos I thought it isn't much good ... but then again I'm not having the best of days. I shall put it back. :)
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