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6 Sweet Hallucine On The Dink Dark River

Deal agreed produce placed

powder and various shrooms

strapwrangled

in a crate of plates

antique now less

she her has her way with a hairclip

tips quick open one and two

thickrich mushy fungal pillars

from a crate and chews and choose

he him grinsleeps on the soft laps

of the dink dark river

covered in wait

but she's up up for love

nature the nifty trigger

pick the cloud tree clean

with her tall bald fingers

observe the space it deserves

she has it all

chews too more

Believe she sees the real hallucine

hair transparent in the satin distance

saint up to her shins in glowater

nightflower glistens dark old

a man appears peers out deep and pays

she snaps back damp velcro

palms undone hands out receives the money

he him halfstill sleep unblinking

they leave in the blue of dawn

on a skinny branch raft

the boat of them

into the morning

 

 

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Marianne Louise Daniels

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Fri 2nd Mar 2012 14:43

This is beautiful!

Laura Taylor

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Tue 28th Feb 2012 13:07

You can tell your age from the use of 'shrooms ;) It was magics or mushies back in the day :D

Anyhoo - these lines are fantastic - they sit so well within the hallucinogenic experience. They are JUST the right words to get the mood over:

Believe she sees the real hallucine
hair transparent in the satin distance
saint up to her shins in glowater
nightflower glistens dark old

(reminds me of the time I mixed a pill with a blotter and sat in the bath for four hours-ish, shin-deep in bright pink and blue bubbles popping all over my legs :D)

Boat of them - great weaving of both and boat

stella jones

Tue 28th Feb 2012 08:45


Enjoyed the use of language and the story told..lots of great images you gave to me.

:)

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