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Health

Maintain blame.

Complain brain statement.

Upper left neck stretched.

Itchy stiches fickle.

Eyeball swollen pure obscurity

 Of vision.

Grim timid scratching.

 

Attach a face a day to skin.

Peel fear from wreathing bone chunk.

This summer's must have misery.

Every season soul filled.

 

Sick of balance challenge.

Hands of callous shattered.

Head buried smoke sand.

Burning discern.

 

Sandal foot toe blistered.

Arms hanging lack fast.

Struggle of turrent.

Lung tension heart graspless.

And an all

But feathered remedy.

◄ Natural Disasters And Nuclear Foreplay

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melanie coady

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Fri 25th Mar 2011 19:59

wow jesus hun ur fukin gud!! xx miss u here in waterford

Cynthia Buell Thomas

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Thu 24th Mar 2011 10:46

A 'stew' of words, all simmering together, each 'ingredient' keeping its individual taste but contributing to the final flavour of the 'dish'.

Are you calling this style experimental? It is interesting, for sure; needs a lot of discipline in word connotation/associative idea manipulation.

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