My Flower

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My body is the petals, that eventually fall away,

My life is the long stem, that soaks up everything,

My thoughts are the thorns, heavanly and hellish,

You are my root, that holds me in place.

◄ It is the way it was

Pathetic ►

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melanie coady

Tue 6th Sep 2011 22:44

thank you 4 ur sweet comments frederick xx

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Fkx

Thu 12th May 2011 13:27

Very oriental in its poetic appeal and filled with meaning within each line.

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ian

Mon 14th Mar 2011 21:06

Excellent Beautiful

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melanie coady

Wed 9th Mar 2011 12:39

thank ye all for even taking the time to read my poems it's the boost i need to keep scribbling lol

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kealan coady

Wed 9th Mar 2011 12:37

simple and elegant, great thought awareness and clear theme.

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Jules Clare

Wed 9th Mar 2011 10:02

I wrote My Flower of Hope like this two years ago in Scotland.

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melanie coady

Wed 9th Mar 2011 09:23

thanks huni x

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andy n

Wed 9th Mar 2011 08:13

excellent last line here, Melanie in particular but this is a lovely short piece.. x

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