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Stefan Wilde

 

The Widower

Posted on Thursday 29th July 2010 11:30 am

Pungency,where old cats territorialize the slinking alley

perched atop the crumbling walls,

staring nonchalantly at funereal aspidistra

middle-set on foodless green baized tablecloth.

 

Where the blue bottled sunlight,

heatedly exaggerates the cat piss smell,

burning bright upon,but less behind,

the filth dimmed window.

 

The gaudy skin of paint over dead wooden window frame

fools no one,

but cheers up ,with its brightness.

 

'Needy' clutter,clutters the stone flagged back yard,

gives the old man,glimpsing out

a sense of poor wealth,overcome by happy memories.

 

Two striped, metal framed deckchairs

virtually rusted into the brickwork,

reminds him of when Blackpool postcards sent,

impressed the neighbours.

 

Handmade wooden step ladders

each step worn thin by countless ascensions

up to whitewashed ceilings

and dusty high pantry shelfs(shelves)

 

The now stiffened mangle

that squeezed many a working shirt almost dry.

 

Though always faithful transport for every work day

the Sturmey-Archer,his iron workhorse

leaning, succombed to a  corrosive death.

 

His look lingers on the old tin bath

precariously suspended by a weakening nail,

brings to mind the frothy hot water gallons

it held in,each Friday night,

before the fireplace,after a mucky factory week

rotted ironically,by water.

 

Spring delivered weeds edge the small coal pile

he hopes will be little used,in these warmer days.

 

 His eyes move lastly,to the empty washing line

daily bedecked in the past, like  multi-coloured sails of a ship

cracking and bellying in the wind, with clothes  lovingly hung.

 

Home-loving hands and heart,

no longer to be seen in the yard.

 

 

 

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Heather

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Sat 31st Jul 2010 16:58

I love this one. As the others have said, the images are so strong, especially of the tin bath and the washing line at the end. I love the similes you use and the flow of it's great, the words really mesh together perfectly. No criticism.

 

stefan wilde

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Sat 31st Jul 2010 09:46

thanks very much,Ann,Lynn,and never forgetting Bernadette! this poem was inspired in remembering trips to my Auntys 'Coronation Street type terrace,in my childhood.-thanks Lynn-xx(B-xx)-Stef.

 

Lynn Dye

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Fri 30th Jul 2010 22:13

I agree with other comments, Stef, the picture you portray is quite vivid. Love, Lynn xxx

 

Bernadette Herbertson

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Thu 29th Jul 2010 17:48

This says so much steph. I am still imagining the scene even as I write this comment the words stay with me ..It is brilliant even though it is so sad but what a story it tells...lv bernadette x x

 

stefan wilde

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Thu 29th Jul 2010 16:37

all my defences crumble in the face of beauty-you should know me better than that Ann...but very good titling-you shall go to the top of the credits...my love credits! Stef-xx(G-xx)now its your turn to be the servantilian'...read the 'Singing cat'by Stevie Smith-NOW!! lol!

 

Ann Foxglove

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Thu 29th Jul 2010 15:16

Very glad that you are doing my bidding! (Makes a change! ;-)) xx

 

stefan wilde

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Thu 29th Jul 2010 12:43

Very good idea Ann-and-unlike-some-people I wll gladly conform to other suggestions-lol!-Stef-xx(G-xx)

 

Ann Foxglove

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Thu 29th Jul 2010 12:35

Wow, I think this is sooo good. One of your best I think. So very real, well observed (or imagined - or remembered) and so heartfelt. xxxx (PS In my irritating tradition of re-titling your odes - I'd call it "The Widower")

 

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