The Widower
Posted on Thursday 29th July 2010 11:30 am
Pungency,where old cats territorialize the slinking alley
perched atop the crumbling walls,
staring nonchalantly at funereal aspidistra
middle-set on foodless green baized tablecloth.
Where the blue bottled sunlight,
heatedly exaggerates the cat piss smell,
burning bright upon,but less behind,
the filth dimmed window.
The gaudy skin of paint over dead wooden window frame
fools no one,
but cheers up ,with its brightness.
'Needy' clutter,clutters the stone flagged back yard,
gives the old man,glimpsing out
a sense of poor wealth,overcome by happy memories.
Two striped, metal framed deckchairs
virtually rusted into the brickwork,
reminds him of when Blackpool postcards sent,
impressed the neighbours.
Handmade wooden step ladders
each step worn thin by countless ascensions
up to whitewashed ceilings
and dusty high pantry shelfs(shelves)
The now stiffened mangle
that squeezed many a working shirt almost dry.
Though always faithful transport for every work day
the Sturmey-Archer,his iron workhorse
leaning, succombed to a corrosive death.
His look lingers on the old tin bath
precariously suspended by a weakening nail,
brings to mind the frothy hot water gallons
it held in,each Friday night,
before the fireplace,after a mucky factory week
rotted ironically,by water.
Spring delivered weeds edge the small coal pile
he hopes will be little used,in these warmer days.
His eyes move lastly,to the empty washing line
daily bedecked in the past, like multi-coloured sails of a ship
cracking and bellying in the wind, with clothes lovingly hung.
Home-loving hands and heart,
no longer to be seen in the yard.



Heather
Sat 31st Jul 2010 16:58
I love this one. As the others have said, the images are so strong, especially of the tin bath and the washing line at the end. I love the similes you use and the flow of it's great, the words really mesh together perfectly. No criticism.