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Tomás Ó Cárthaigh

Email: tomasocarthaigh@yahoo.com

Homepage: http://www.writingsinrhyme.com

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Last blog entry: Sat, 18 Oct 2008 08:14:07 pm

Profile updated: Fri, 24 Oct 2008 02:28:08 am

 

Biography

I have written some new poems and will be having a book coming out with the YouWriteOn.com press soon, I have been told.

I have a profile up on Facebook now, and an application featuring my poems called "Poetry Dedication".

I love reading others work too, and the work of the three Roberts, Burns, Frost and Service have been a major influence on me, as have the Irish writers Yeats, Colum and Moore.

I like to write old fashioned poetry... you know... the boring kind that rhymes!!! I write on all topics, from the current train of thought. Though not a great runner to church faith occurs as a subject a lot in what I write.

Championing the underdog is another strong theme of by poetry, from the Red Indian to the Roma, to the Scots and ourselves.

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Those Who Faught on That Side



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Above: Nazis at a rally, Francis Stewart, Aosdana member and
former propagandist for the Nazis, and the Aosdana logo,
one of whose members resigned in protest at his membership.
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Many men faught not for Ireland
But under another flag
And of their deeds our folklore feeds
Of them we like to brag
But there are those of whom
A silence does not speak
A veil is drawn as if to warn
That knowledge of them one should not seek.

Underneath the Swastika
Few men now confess
That they had not swevered but winningly served
And not loved their country less
For Germany was not OUR enemy
Against us struck no blow
And may aid and new Irish Brigade
So a United Ireland we may know.

And in the aftermath
When the counting was done
All hushed their role hiding a shamed soul
In the war they had not won.
Were they any less Irish
Then those who faught neath the Union Jack
Nether faught against Ireland, all loved their homeland
Yet were despised when they came back.

God will judge all souls
Declare the good and the bad in time
Weigh the reasons for why men faught and did die
No matter how we think it a crime
For the Soviet Union too killed millions
From Tartarstan to the Ukraine
By famine, in gulag, under the Red Flag
So the Workers Republic could gain



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1.

A tin can rattles
Strong wind blows it down the street
Singing "I'm dancing!"

2.

A drunk is shouting
Swearing loud at everyone
Prayers of thanks for booze.

3.

Summer sun so hot
This would make good holidays
If we'd food to eat!

4.
So much snow we see
Depth of winter holds the earth
So good for our skiing!

5.
Dog is racing fast
Barking at the spinning wheels
Its all he can do.

6.
The ball is bouncing
With children playing joyfully
Now none: broke window.

7.
We love all mankind
Except those we've reason
To hate: they're bad!

8.
There's no better love
Than the faithful pet dog has
For his bad owner

9.
As we live our life
Is how when death it comes
We'll be judged as good.

10.
Thunder inspires
Fear in the fearful hearts and
Awe in hearts of hope.

11.
A Coward thrives
On fear instilled on others:
Call his bluff for proof.

12.
God is a chess player
Man is but a pawn of his
Each holds but a square

13.
Winter closes in
Cold dark and long nights approach
Good for needed rest

14.
Long after I'm dead
People will think and speak of me
Like the cold winter

15.
Hell is where lives
The pious churchgoer who feared God
Who hated his neighbour

16.
If you love money
And you desire much riches
Your spirit is poor.



© Copyright Tomas O' Carthaigh 1999 -2008, All Rights Reserved.

All poems are copyright of the originating author. Permission must be obtained before using or performing others' poems.

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Some Seasonal Poems for Halloween

Posted on Saturday 18th October 2008 9:14 pm

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Here are some seasonal poems for Halloween, all true, as told by my family from North Longford...

"Old Clonbroney" is the story of a man who met a headless horseman when calling on a neighbour after moving into the area.

Famine Victim Ghost Dog
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(left) Irish famine victim with children
(right) A black dog, thought of as a damned soul or personification of Satan
 

Apperantly this is actually true, the miller he was calling on was an uncle of mine who lived in Clonbroney, where an old road led up to a disused cemetry, and a new road now led to the village. The old road partly made the lane to his house and mill that used to be on the side of the old road, but the road was blocked of at the rear, where both sides had grown in to form one hedgegrow that went up the fiends to the old cemetry.
 
"The Hungry Grass"
was where famine dead collapsed and breathed their last, and the ground on which they fell, should you walk on it, you would be overcome with a terrible hunger, that could not be sadisfied by the best of food, but only by tearing a loaf in your hands and eating the bread only with water or milk, as people did during the famine...
 
There was a spot outside the gate of Willie Carty's in Aughagreagh that was said to be of it, and an event of when he was a boy where a neighbour bust into the house demanding bread after standing on it... which was very bad etiquette in the peasent housholds, where a routine of denying hospitality and only accepting it under protest due to their belief that you "never left a house poorer than when you entered".
 
Ghost story lovers will love this story "Dead Souls and Black Dogs"- its true, honest! - of an old woman who died in North Longford some years back, whose soul, or that of the devil formed the form of a black dog on her death... and walked out the door! Hope that sends a chill up your spines...
 
Again Willie Cartys farm is the focus of the poem "Sitting There Saying Nothing". The ghost poem that tells of how my father swears he saw ghosts at a cousins farm he inherited, supposedly of a woman and her children who died outside the gate on the way to the workhouse... My family, though Irish, were none too helpful to the poor at the time, I gather from family legends...

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Old Clonbroney
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One night dark walking along
A lane onto its end,
A neighbour walked up to a house
To call upon a friend.
The neighbour was new, his friends wife too
Had arrived not long ago,
And friendship new as neighbours do
They called on one another each other to know.
And as he approached the house,
He wondered at how strange shadows moves,
It looked as if it were a hearse,
And all of a sudden a sound of hooves,
And a wall through at terrific speed,
Driven by a horseman with no head,
A hearse up through the feilds fleed
To Old Clonbroney with its dead.
Our hero stood there shaking,
Wondered if he imaged was what he had seen,
When the woman opened the door to the house,
Asked where the horses had been?
He raced into the house so fast,
Slammed behind him the door,
Told how the hearse before him passed,
And where it came from before...
That it went up to Old Clonbroney,
After driving through a wall,
But it was not real: twas but a ghost,
For the wall was not damaged at all.
And drinking whiskey strong his nerves setlled down,
Though still great in him was fear,
Though you may mock and you may frown,
You too would shake if the headless horseman did appear...
And in time the husband returned,
A miller he was by trade,
He came to see his wife terrified,
And his neighbour, a man strong, afraid,
They told him of the horseman,
Of the hearse, that the man had no head,
He srugged his shoulder with a sigh,
Declared one of the neighbours dead.
It was like the banshee,
The miller said of the apparition,
When these neighbours died, the spectre youd see,
So was local superstition,
And so all a prayer they said,
For their own and the deceased sake,
Its not told the name of who was dead,
Or if the miller and his neighbour slept or stayed that night awake!

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Sitting There Saying
Nothing

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She sits there saying nothing
A wee woman and her wains
We know not who she is
That sits there with her bains
As the Scots would say if seeing
What my father claims to have seen
That sitting on a wall
In broad daylight had been…
Going to the workhouse
Stopping for a rest a while
A woman and two little ones
And one of the three smile
But just sitting there
A word by none was said
My father knew from famine times there were
Victims of, and dead
The dead will not harm you
Sometimes themselves they show
So another at another time
Of their pain will know.
Maybe twas too much poitin
Da knew how to make it pure
And enjoyed his brew testing
But I am not so sure.
If dead they be, from famine times
And they to show themselves cease
I hope they rest at the bosom of Mary
And their souls now know peace.
(i) wain: child (ii) bain (baby)

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Dead Souls And Black Dogs
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The little old lady had lived for long,
She was great of age
And the time was coming along
For her to exit life’s stage
But there were those who dwelt beside her
That strange things of her said
She had contact with the other world
And that strange prayers she made
Some they were of her afraid
And were not afraid to say
That when she was dead
It would not be a bad day.
And so the illness struck
And slowly she got more weak
And by her her neighbours stuck
And failed bad of her to speak
For tis bad ill to speak of the dying
And of those that are past and gone
So to pray and think good they were trying
Though they fooled no one.
They were gathered in the bedroom
More in the living room too
There was but two for a broom
For large houses they were few.
And the toilet it was outside
Water was drawn from a well
As was normal for the times standards applied
As many old people will tell.
And the chatter of the neighbours
As the woman drew her last breath
Was silenced as from her room
Came a shout at her moment of death,
And of a sudden, out the door
A big black dog fled
Snarling, racing across the floor
The spirit of the woman, now dead!
“Twas Satan himself” more say
Came to take her soul to Hell
And to their knees to pray
In unison, they fell.
Those near the door outside raced fast
To the yard where the beast had been
And light twas good though evening was past:
There was no dog to be seen.
If this is all true I don’t know
But to tell it I never fail
For when there is conversation in flow
It sure makes a damn good tale!
 
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The Hungry Grass
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A shiver runs up my spine
As stories I recall
Of people dead in times gone by
I was told of when I was small.
Of famine dead who to the workhouse went
Dropped dead as they our gate did pass
And the ground on which they fell
Became known as the hungry grass.
For should one walk upon it
Even though they did just eat
The hunger gnawing would strike them
Till they were quick upon their feet
And nothing would quench the hunger
So the story’s said
Bar milk and break hand torn
The only sustenance of those now dead.
You could eat meat untill full
At any other time be you would
But this time the hunger only by bread
Hand torn, washed by milk would
Quench the hunger of the dead
Who outside our gate died
Not so terribly long ago
Who to survive tried
But the Lord in mercy took them
Though grain was exported at the time
And people died for want of bread…
Oh the shame for Britain of the crime!
Some people don’t believe the story
When I tell of the Hungry Grass
Should I go there I tell you
On the other side of the road I’ll pass!

 

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Lucy Lepchani

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Sun 9th Nov 2008 22:16

Gritty subject matter well conveyed.

 

Freda Davis

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Thu 14th Aug 2008 12:53

Hi Tomas,
thank you for the comment on my poem. Your website is amazing. You put a lot of energy into poetry. Its great to get into the Write Out Loud site and see so many people out there working so hard for poets and poetry.
Freda

 

Melissa R. Mendelson

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Sat 26th Jul 2008 16:19

Hi, Tomas.

Thank you for your comment. Walls can be our allies, keep the cold hands of life out, or it can be our enemy, keeping life away from us. But no matter what wall we stand behind, everything we are will always be known to the ghosts walking through like in your poem, The Unseen Shadow, which I really liked. :)

 

Lynda Morgan

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Thu 24th Jul 2008 16:55

Hi Tomas

Thank you for your lovely comment on my poem dads ladders. I love the detail of everyday life.

Lynda X

 

carol falaki

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Tue 22nd Jul 2008 10:01

Hi Tomas, thank you for your kind comment on my Burma poem.
I liked your web-site, your poetry gives an interesting insight

 

Zuzanna Musial

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Sat 19th Jul 2008 17:06

Hello, Tomas

Thank you for your comment and information in regard of your poetry site. Any of the languages you mentioned I am not fluent. Do know some vocabulary though,
but that is not enough to be a translator. It is good to hear from you. I like the idea that you are going to write about Egypt, would be interested to red the poems. The subject of an Ancient Culture really fascinates.

Have a great weekend!

Thank you,
Zuzanna

 

barrie singleton

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Wed 16th Jul 2008 13:26

Hi Tomas
Nice to see today's dark underbelly being probed. thanks for comment in my direction.
Barrie

 

jennie shaw

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Mon 26th May 2008 14:49

thank you for your comment, yes its a hard road sometimes in our search for happiness

 

Mia Darlone

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Fri 23rd May 2008 11:44

Thanks for your comment Tomas, I can sympathise with the writing addiction - I'm chair-shaped, but I disagree that rhyming is boring! I think your first poem is really touching, I wish I had the balls to write something serious!

 

Zuzanna Musial

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Fri 23rd May 2008 00:42

Tomas

Thank you for taking the time to read my poem. There is a lot of truth all reality in your comment.

Cheers!
Zuzanna

 

Janet Ramsden

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Thu 22nd May 2008 19:11

Hello Tomas, thanks for taking the time to read my writings.
I also enjoy rhyming poems but i try not to make a word fit just for the sake of it. Ha ha, there's a rhyme in there somewhere.
I find your seance and devils scripture intriguing, as i am a spiritualist medium and healer.
Very much a save the world person.
Spiritualists embrace all religions, colour and creed. Perhaps surprisingly, many of our congregation are Catholic.
I've been wading through Miltons "paradise lost," for about six months, amazing imagery there for devil poetry.
Thanks again Janet.

 

Caroline

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Mon 19th May 2008 18:52

tomas, your poetry is very potent, thanks for sharing i enjoyed reading you...caroline xx

 

Zuzanna Musial

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Sun 18th May 2008 05:13

Tomas

Thank you for reading and commenting on my latest poem “The Riders of the Storm”

With sincere appreciation,
Zuzanna

 

Zuzanna Musial

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Thu 15th May 2008 16:43

Hello, Tomas

Thank you for your lovely comment! Yes, you had the right feelings within the lines in my poem. Life as it happens. Often takes toll on everyone and then we feel as a bent tree that would fall if not supported by others in this case family member, friends...Etc.

Warm Regards,
Zuzanna

 

Jeff Dawson

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Sat 10th May 2008 11:09

Hi Tomas, thanks for comment. I've never heard 2 Unlimiteds 'Faces' so will have to see if I can give it a listen! Spooky, hope you liked it anyway, cheers Jeff

 

Rob Sherman

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Sat 10th May 2008 11:03

Thank you for your comment. I am all words and no structure! You, on the other hand, have that under serious control. I love Hound for Iraq.

 

Melanie Rees

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Tue 6th May 2008 08:51

Hi Tomas

thank you for your lovely comments. I think your poem 'shall another read my words' is so beautiful.
mel
x

 

David Agnew

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Sat 26th Apr 2008 13:24

Thank you for your visit.

Although I am curious as to why you think I should rhyme more.

David

 

Zuzanna Musial

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Thu 24th Apr 2008 22:24

Hello, Tomas

Thank you for the latest comments.
It happened that I was living in both systems. In addition, I see not much difference except maybe the working class divided more in a Capitalism versa Communism. Here we do have the Freedom of speech and have your own things like home., car, place to live but the prices you pay having all those goods are tremendous. It is good for those who have good paying jobs. Those who have less paying jobs, then these people live like in a Communism system. I tell you that Communism had good sites too. Like the Education for all was mandatory. Here it is slightly different. If you have money then you do not need to have University to be in Politics. In Communism system one had to be highly educated to be an Economist- this is just an example...Some people left the country and still do, I mean the Communist. Both sites have good trades and as not so good. I need to close here as my comment can go forever, Will come back to read your latest poem...Thank you.

Kind Regards,
Zuzanna

 

Frances Macaulay Forde

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Wed 23rd Apr 2008 15:49

Sorry - also wanted to share a 'hurley' poem which no-one over here (in Australia) understands... it's on my site too.

 

Frances Macaulay Forde

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Wed 23rd Apr 2008 15:48

Thanks for your comments on my site.
I've just posted a reply on there for you...
Frances

 

Nicola Beckett

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Fri 18th Apr 2008 15:15

thanks for the kind words about my poetry.

 

Gemma ONeill

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Wed 16th Apr 2008 19:54

Hi, thanks for the kind words!

I really like Big Eyes Blinking Blankly, it's incredibly powerful.

Gem :)

 

David Franks

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Sun 13th Apr 2008 09:16

Thanks for your visit, Tomas, and, in turn, I do like your meaningful traditional metre-and-rhyme; also great to see verses in Irish as I love the world being multicultural.

 

Dwornik

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Fri 11th Apr 2008 07:46

hya tomas,
your stuff aint old fashioned its cool....diverse too.
the island is lovely..where did you stay?
shelley d

 

Alison Mary Dunn

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Sat 5th Apr 2008 11:14

Hi Tomas,
thank you for your comment on my poem.

Your poem 'Big Eye Blinking Blankly' is very powerful and exposes us here in our luxurious existence.

I like the way you switched it around at the end where the table are turned and how we might feel in the face of starvation.

Extremely sad to read but so true

thanks for sharing

Ally

 

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