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steve garside

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Last blog entry: 4 days ago

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Biography

I live here in the North West of England and spend my time, when not working, writing and painting.

I have several oil paintings on permanent display in Oldham Community Art Gallery and shall in 2009 be exhibiting my oil paintings at Rochdale Touchstones Art Gallery.

i have also, been attending poetry events on here and out there and am enjoying my time.


http://www.stevegarside.co.uk


Samples

Matese

To earn a stick to walk with,
to sing of Summer's sonnets,
to rise above the dissonance
and smile with fruitful promise.

The laying down of days,
of unpacked clouds and ways,
the open chord of innocence
is strummed with love again.

To rest beneath the trees;
mix metaphors with leaves -
such words take root; branch
out - become, and
bring me to my knees.

What times for men like these?
What place for men like these?
To earn a stick to walk with
and sing of Summer's sonnets.

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Last blog entry

Lou Reed

Posted on Thursday 1st January 2009 11:11 am

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Lou Reed


Happiness. Happiness is incomplete.
It's smoking in your backyard
it's on the corner of your street.
It's waiting in a taxi, with the hot
sweet cherry heat full on -
it's waiting as the meter ticks over and over,
when contentment's long since gone.

 

Happiness, happiness is incomplete.
It's hanging about in your bathroom,
it's trying to massage your feet,
it's waiting in the car park with
commercials droning on;
it's the angered teeth-grit car pushed country mile;
when all you want to do is sleep.

 

It's the priced-out outdoor market stench,
it's the no in 'no place like home',
it's the scraping out of writhing lice
from your child's head with a fine toothed comb.

 

It's in the queuing at the bombed out Christmas
checkout, It's in missing the fuckin' bin,
it's the adoptive parents' anguish at feeling
unable to coax the kids to bed again.

 

It's the klaxon of the ambulance, as it fades and
goes away, it's inhaling mountain woodland's musk,
or clawing at the clay of your stripped bare naked humility at dusk,
with ifs and buts and coulds,
as thoughts like shadows sap your force -
like vampires sharing blood.

 

It's smiling as it's slipping through the long grass - silent as the moon.
It's the trying to find some living solace within a sprawling, empty noon.
It's weeping at the glass smashed bus-stop with rhinestones at your feet.
it's the incessant wiping down of worktops while the west wind kisses the wheat.

 

It's presiding with your arrogance at the top of the top of the pile,
happiness, happiness is incomplete right now without your knowing smile...
It's carpet madness, a cigar called humanity, it's giving up
your seat, happiness divorced from inner peace perfects the knife edge neat.

 

It's the paper waving patricians of Empire's already lost
(counting down from ten), it's the frenzied scribbling of phrases
I'm scrawling with this pen.
Oh how, oh how, oh when will my mind rein in
this stampede of furious thoughts to
set me free again?

 

Happiness, happiness is incomplete,
happiness, happiness is incomplete,
happiness, happiness is incomplete
happiness, happiness is....

 

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Deborah Jordan

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Wed 31st Dec 2008 12:54

is repetition necessarily a filler ? I see it as a way of emphasising something either to yourself or someone else...just my twopenneth... Deb

 

Nabila Suriya

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Wed 31st Dec 2008 10:51

I was constantly saying you are using too much repetition as fillers - nice to see there is less in last set you posted.

 

Gus Jonsson

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Fri 12th Dec 2008 09:55

Thanks Steve

Sheepish wry smile back to you too!
:~}
Regards
Gus

 

sally jenkinson

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Thu 27th Nov 2008 21:10

heeeeeey, thanks so much for taking the time to feedback me. much much much appreciated, especially from someone who's words i like! i like lou reed, both the man and the poym! sally xx

 

Gus Jonsson

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Sun 23rd Nov 2008 10:22

Hi Steve
Thank you... it's taken from a book I'm attempting to write.

A little different from Thursday evening at Freed Up
AnywayThanks again
Gus

 

carol falaki

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Sun 2nd Nov 2008 19:12

Hi Steve,
Thanks for your comment.
I like your poem 'The old lie,' very timely.
Interesting question. I like to think I would have spoken out for Rosa, but suspect I may have sat quietly. You have to be there to know.
I believe things have changed for the better and bigotry is not tolerated in the same way now. I suspect if it weren't for people like Rosa then Obama would not be where he is today. I have my fingers crossed for him for Tuesday.

 

Gus Jonsson

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Tue 14th Oct 2008 12:36

Hi Steve

Thanks for the thought prevoking comments

Cheers
Gus

 

paul

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Thu 12th Jun 2008 10:41

Nice to see you in the flesh Steve!

 

Zuzanna Musial

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Tue 6th May 2008 15:30

HI, Steve

Thank you for the lovely comment!

Appreciated, Zuzanna

 

Maggie Lane

Mon 3rd Mar 2008 14:46

Hi Steve, thanks for your comments - I do love your art work and if you don't mind I will keep in touch with you by email?

Magi

 

Sophie McKeand

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Sun 2nd Mar 2008 11:37

Hey Steve, thanks for the encouraging comment, it's funny because I like to think that I don't care what people think, but it is cool to get positive feedback :)
I am very much enjoying reading the works you are posting, your words and images enrich this site... cheers

 

Maggie Lane

Thu 28th Feb 2008 14:23

Steve, your art work is stunning - thank you for sharing it with us.
xxx

 

Melanie Rees

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Tue 26th Feb 2008 13:29

Hey steve

Welcome to the site. Fantastic poems. I love the way they suggest a deeper, more complex meaning to what is written...intriguing.

Thanks for the thoughtful comment you put on my blog.

Have fun in the land of poetry and prose.

Mel
x

 

Daniel Hooks

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Sat 26th Jan 2008 10:42

nothing to say is also a great poem
I love the imagey please put some more up!

 

Belinda Johnston

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Fri 25th Jan 2008 20:28

I really like the way you have used the words in this poem, they give the poem a beautiful ryhthm i feel.

One of my favourite lines is 'Once her glad eyes traced masses, now a tooth retraces dynastic clashes'.

I just imagine this great woman of her time, like Joan Arc, an iconic female figure.

I think it a wonderful, powerful poem, and well thought out.

Well done

 

clarissa mckone

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Tue 8th Jan 2008 16:19

Hi Steve, nice poem. welcome

 

Zuzanna Musial

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Tue 8th Jan 2008 07:40

Hello Steve

Welcome to 'W.O.L.'World of passion in poetry.
From your Biography shows that you are creative and artistic Soul. It is good to have you here.

The poem of yours it is very well written,
mysterious and thought provoking.

Thank you for sharing your love for writing.

Zuzanna

 

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