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Daniel Hall

Homepage: http://myspace.com/custheyder

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Last blog entry: Fri, 18 Jul 2008 12:06:34 pm

Profile updated: Fri, 2 May 2008 11:52:11 am

 

Biography

Daniel was born in Oldham, but has lived most of his life on the Isle of Man. Not exactly a hotbed of political angst, depravation or social injustice. His work tends towards the contemplative, but with moments of harder edge.

First published in "Clean Sheets" after friends suggested his erotic material was worth the submission. He has also had success getting two of his poems into a book, "This Island Now", which is a collection of work from Manx poets. Daniel is a regular contributor to the Isle of Man Poetry Society, performing at Poetry & Pints evenings and submitting work for the periodic journal of the society.

With a new lease of life in performance poetry, Daniel is now working on new material specifically for performance and open mic work.

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"Orbit"

Of dreams,
I have no idea.
She never speaks
of them.

Her touch,
is never felt,
as screen images
flicker past.

Her world
revolves opposite.
We meet only
in eclipse.


"Mind Doors"

Sure, I opened the doors in your mind,
let in thoughts and sights and sounds.
Illuminated cankerous dark cists
behind which your inner child hid, in fear
and insisted you had no neurosis.

I held out a hand to guide her out
with love and care and honest intent
but she was always craveing without relent
demanding everything I could give and more.
She said, "If you love me, you'll give it all."

I let you into my mind space, private space.
Where I hold secrets, hopes and desires
shared with no one in case they evaporate and die;
leaving me cored out, a husk with nothing
left to reach for, dream for, live for.

No, I had to let you go. Cast you out.
Cut you off, before all my life force
was sucked out, through my eyes. Divorce
you from my heart, my hopes, my dreams.
Then ran to the stones where I might heal.


"Contours"

As the sun bows out
the purple of heather
transforms to flesh
upon hillside hips.

Warmed water breaths
a mist that clings to
reflected curves, a veil
of gossamer white silk.

Pressed together upon
ferns and wild orchids,
entwined contours of
blushing skin yield.


© Daniel Hall, 2008

All poems are copyright of the originating author. Permission must be obtained before using or performing others' poems.

Last blog entry

Head Scream

Posted on Friday 18th July 2008 1:06 pm

The bile you bark in my face
is not some random forecast
that I am to acclimatise to.

 

It enervates every part of me
while you stomp over emotions
and gallivant with my feelings.

 

I'm crushed in a private corner
dank hands protecting my head,
without hope of an ameliorator.

 

 

You might feel the need for a dictionary with this one. Heck I needed a dictionary to check a few of the words before I wrote it. It was written as an exercise using all the words in a given list. I bet you can guess what some of those words were. I was fortunate that the list matched my mood at the time.

 

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Shirley Collinge

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Thu 17th Jul 2008 12:16

Thank you for commenting on my poem.

 

Janet Ramsden

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Mon 14th Jul 2008 14:17

Hi Daniel, we've all missed you.
Hope it's just a case of "i'm on holiday, be back soon."
Love Janet.xx

 

paul

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Fri 27th Jun 2008 08:19

Hi Daniel
Thanks for reading and commenting.

 

Richard Brooks

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Thu 26th Jun 2008 17:51

Hi Daniel, thanks for reading and commenting again, always appreciated. It wasn't one of mine personally but someone in the family. When I wrote it, i tried to write it as a dedication, a sort of eulogy to the unborn that families never forget

 

paul

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Thu 26th Jun 2008 08:42

Thanks for reading my poem "Cream judge" - it isn't about anything just playing with words - try reading it and getting the rhythm going

 

Darren Whitehead

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Mon 23rd Jun 2008 15:50

Daniel. Thanks for your honest feedback. Tactfully put but to the point.
Very useful for me too.
Thank you.

 

Cayn

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Sun 22nd Jun 2008 14:03

Hi Daniel,
Cheers for the comments on my poems, if our paths ever cross I owe you a beer!

 

Sean Stanley

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Thu 19th Jun 2008 15:53

Hi Daniel, thanks for the comment. I appreciate all suggestions and your constructive criticism.
John Togher was thinking of including it in his Mental Virus magazine so to completely re-work it would be foolish as it was a brief and disturbing experience from a couple of weeks previous. I don’t think it could be developed for them reasons and others.
Best Regards

 

Dwornik

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Mon 16th Jun 2008 14:51

hey cust...
i missed going yesterday coz it was fathers day! did you go? send me a message on myspace

 

carol falaki

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Wed 28th May 2008 21:21

Hi Daniel,
Thanks for your comments on waterbirth

Your poems are sensitive. I especially like contours

 

Melissa R. Mendelson

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Tue 27th May 2008 15:45

Thanks, Daniel. I actually sent this song to a musician looking for lyrics, and I'm waiting to hear back from her.

 

Mia Darlone

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Fri 23rd May 2008 11:38

Hi Daniel, thanks for reading the blog and leaving a comment. I'm fine with people not liking my warped sense of humour - just as long as it doesn't offend TOO much....! Glad you liked it.

 

Alison Mary Dunn

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Wed 21st May 2008 16:54

Hi Daniel

'Contours' is really beautiful. Gorgeous flowing imagery, I almost want the scene to go on..

I'm still reading. just had to comment on that particular one first.

Thanks for your very detailed opinions on my offerings. I found them helpful and interesting and yes I guess I am kind of spiritual.

Ally

Ally

 

Jeff Dawson

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Fri 9th May 2008 09:10

Hi Daniel, thanks, Vilnius was a beautiful city, lots of churches, cathedrals etc, nice people food, music and really laid back. And its really cheap only spent 120 in 4 days!! cheers Jeff

 

Zuzanna Musial

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Tue 6th May 2008 17:06

Hello, Daniel

All your poems are very beautiful and well written.
Love the voice recording too!
Great Job!

Thank you for your interesting comment on my last write...Smile.

Best wishes,
Zuzanna

 

Tai Mahmud

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Sun 4th May 2008 07:26

Thanks for the comments bro! Loving your pieces. Very descriptive! :)

 

clarissa mckone

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Sat 3rd May 2008 00:08

Hi Daniel,
Your poems are very nice. thanks

 

Zuzanna Musial

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Fri 2nd May 2008 17:54

Hello, Daniel

I love the picture in your profile. It is unique!

Thank you so much for your comment on my writings. I appreciate a lot!

Your writings are fabulous. I do miss the chance to be able to read my writes in an open microphone. We do not have those yet in my Province. I believe that UK has been the center for an Art in writing.

I feel this in every poet’s heart.

Thank you,
Zuzanna M

 

Mia Darlone

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Fri 2nd May 2008 11:08

Thank you for your comment - I do indeed have a very high level of testosterone.
Really liked your poems - Mind Doors is so typical of us; I think we are too quick to spout the 'all men are bastards' line - when in fact it's often our own doing!

 

Dwornik

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Tue 29th Apr 2008 09:09

hey!!!!!

lovely poems... flirty...poignant......descriptive....charming...

Shelley D


 

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