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Antonionioni

Homepage: antonionioni.com

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Profile updated: Sun, 28 Sep 2008 11:39:20 am

 

Biography

I write a sonnet every day about the news, booze, amusing, abusing, losing, snoozing and other stuff that rhymes with that. I do other poetry and the occasional play, short story and novel-attempt, too. I hope to add music to my portfolio soon.
I am based in Salford, only a short walk from Manchester city centre.

Samples

Clones

This is the clone zone
All heads shaved to the bone
Cannon fodder out on loan
Before the roadside bomb has blown
See the bonehead
What the tattoo said
This is the dead zone
This is the clone zone


Sometimes

Some times are hard
like these times

Some times were even harder
like old times

Sometimes we complain
like these times

Some time we become plainer
unlike old times



Not-so-dear prudence

Hello there mate, how are ya? Not seen ya for a while.
What? Do I fancy goin’ somewhere for lunch?
Do I hell! Haven’t you heard of the credit crunch?

I don’t like shelling out
I don’t care if they’re selling out of everything
In the so-called sales
I’d rather spend my summers in Wales
In a tent halfway up Cader Idris
Than help out some other guy’s business
Staying under his roof
Paying for his food
New clothes to look good
Nah, not me!
I’ll have a near-naked lunch
One that’s almost free
One I’ve made myself
Out of Marmite sandwiches and tea

What’s that, mate? Can I give you a lift?
Nah, sorry mate, that car was drivin’ me over a cliff

Who needs a jam-jar?
Get on your bike
You won’t need to pay for gyms
You can kick out the jams
I’m peddling pedals here
It’s the end of expenditure
Here’s the deal, I’ll send it ya

You can’t bank on banks no more
The interest’s higher
In stayin’ sober
You’ll be rollin’ in it
If you don’t get stoned

If you wanna fall asleep prematurely
Do it for free and get yourself healthy
Boogie on down to the allotment
Save your salary, grow some celery
Don’t become a cabbage. Grow your own.
Don’t talk shit, just mix in some manure
Grow your own rhubarb
It’s not a scene for has-beens, so don’t do a runner
It’s where the future lies as you grow old and wise

Let’s not go to San Fran-Tesco’s
Less reasons to go to Morrisons’ Hotel
To hell with their out of town locations
Their car, bus and delivery-truck-friendly situations
Let’s not go to the Trafford Centre for the day
Let’s not blow what’s left of our pay
Let’s not fight our way through
The great tide of shit coming to meet us at it
Let’s not say ‘Get outta my way, or
I’ll hit you with my six carrier bags
Bag bag bag bag bag bag’

Okay, take care, mate
I know you’re gonna hate me
But things have changed a bit lately
Take care now
Take care


Sonnet 754 - Anthology

Reading successful poets’ self-pity -
But then they don’t make much - but if they did
As poets they’d still see skulls and debris -
It spurs me to emulate, lift my lid
Revealing wasp-infested stuff that’s hid
But it’s no different, apart from the art
A vase is a vase, a verse a verse. Bid
For one versus another and then part
With cash, but not much. Say thanks and depart
For they aren’t interested either in me
They teach subservience at schools - extra quid -
Belief systems and false gods that the smart
Materialist must ingest outwardly
Now fashion your passion as instructed

All poems are copyright of the originating author. Permission must be obtained before using or performing others' poems.

Last blog entry

Annie Lennox get your gun

Posted on Monday 5th January 2009 6:36 pm

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Israel should not be invading Gaza

But Gaza should not be firing rockets

Israel should not have walled up the frontier

But Arabs should not become terrorists

The west should not have aided Zionists

The Arabs should not be hostile to them

They should not mind their imposed homelessness

Disputes should end over Jerusalem

The Crusades should not have ever been sent

Muslims should not have left Arabia

Christians should not have spread out to the west

Jews should not have had land promised to them

People should not move to land that’s better

They should stay trapped in poor oppressed pockets

 

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Chris Dawson

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Sun 4th Jan 2009 10:00

Absolutely awful Christmas - we've all been ill - including the cat! Mine has settled in to a chest infection - which is hanging on. Bit fed up with it really. Still - the cat seems much improved. Glad you're fine .... you're certainly producing some good work at the moment. Though - as I said - not sure hanging around in graveyards as much as you seem to is a good thing!
I grew up next to a graveyard - my bedroom overlooked it & the St. Mary's Church in Prestwich .... it's the one they nearly always use in Coronation St (the only time I watch it is if I know St Mary's will be on).
Have a good time in London... though I suppose if you are back to work tomorrow it'll be a flying visit? Which uni is he at?
Talk soon,
Cx

 

Chris Dawson

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Sat 3rd Jan 2009 23:22

Keep trying to say hi but can't get 'chat' to work - it seems. So hi, how are you?
Cx

 

Chris Dawson

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Wed 31st Dec 2008 19:26

Porridge is indeed great stuff! I particularly like it with blueberries &/or raspberries.
Happy New Year
Cx

 

Deborah Jordan

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Wed 31st Dec 2008 17:06



thank you Antonionioni, for your comments,muy apreciada. With the wonders that are copy, paste and googletranslate i speak badly in any language but some Italian is sinking in..slowly.

Feliz Año Nuevo, Deb

 

andy n

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Fri 26th Dec 2008 19:01

Nope, in relation to Xmas poem (08) - I wrote it because Mary Poppins is always on!

 

cjd

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Wed 24th Dec 2008 23:22

Happy Christmas
Cx

 

cjd

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Tue 23rd Dec 2008 17:00

Hi there,
Thanks for your comments. Liked your guitar piece. Is Yeats really buried in a car park?
Cx

 

Gus Jonsson

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Tue 23rd Dec 2008 11:45

Thanks for comment Big A....
I was always one for a pretty girl.....
Girl....was fine
Still warm.... and wearing skirt...hacks it for me....
Just love the OS to bits
Gus




 

Nabila Suriya

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Mon 22nd Dec 2008 21:27

oh don't worry about it I had to feed my son! (and the fish)

 

Antonionioni

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Wed 17th Dec 2008 23:30

Hi Janet - thanks. Tried to chat but tech probs :(

 

cjd

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Wed 17th Dec 2008 23:22

ok - didn't get The Fall! but I did know Mark E. Smith when I was growing up. Of course he was just Mark Smith in those days ... the Es came later.
Cx

 

Janet

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Wed 17th Dec 2008 23:18

Hello Antonioni,
i'm ok thanks. Ta for your message.
How's things with you. Looks like a rough time behind you Hopefully
love Janet.x

 

cjd

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Tue 16th Dec 2008 09:00

My connection to this site just froze last night, and then it wouldn't let me back on. Did you have similar problems?
Cx

 

cjd

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Tue 16th Dec 2008 00:07

You mean to tell me you can afford both a carrot AND a stick?
So why are you moaning about Christmas?
Cx

 

cjd

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Mon 15th Dec 2008 23:52

Yes - I thought the word fitted purrfectly! (sorry!)
Cx

 

Antonionioni

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Mon 15th Dec 2008 18:18

No, I'm no knicker nicker, and as for nun's knickers, I've nicked none. Honest!

 

Gus Jonsson

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Mon 15th Dec 2008 18:08

Hi Antonionioni....God thats a mouthful....
Hey you wouldn't nick a nuns Knickers....Would you?

Gus

 

Jeff Dawson

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Sun 7th Dec 2008 20:24

Cheers mate, further to my last comment, I notice you've commented! I wrote it a while back but yes same inspiration as the skies of late, cheers and hope to see you soon! Jeff

 

Gus Jonsson

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Mon 10th Nov 2008 23:34

Even Creepier down the cellers....believe me...I was very regular!

Thanks again
Gus

 

andy n

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Mon 10th Nov 2008 23:07

in relation to elise's poem.. I didn't write it.. I saw her write it just before her birthday the other year .. I hope she wasn't watching Monty Phyton, but who knows! lol

 

Janet Ramsden

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Sun 28th Sep 2008 10:37

Hi Antonioni,
Thanks for your reply.
Can't make Middleton tonight. Going for a meal with some of my family.
Birthday was Thursday 25th September.
I had a really nice day.
Love Janet.xx

 

Janet Ramsden

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Sat 27th Sep 2008 10:44

Hi Antonioni,
I did wonder where you'd got to. I asked Jeff if he'd heard from you.
Hope your new stuff is coming on well.
When do we get a preview?

Hope to see you soon. Lots o love Janet.xxx

 

Gabriella Enriocco

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Mon 8th Sep 2008 21:21

ahahaha ur crazy lol lovin downin st pillow talk

 

Gabriella Enriocco

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Sun 7th Sep 2008 21:44

haha lovin the cOmments u can c where im cumin from well.. im glad u can relate x

 

Gabriella Enriocco

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Sun 7th Sep 2008 13:43

hola antonio como te llamas nene?
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WOW i love your poem DANGER WOOWW deffinately the best thing i have read in a long time [aside from my own works of course lol oh and my uncles 'chicken town' you now i'd never want to name drop ;)

besitos mijo
get back 2me when ya can x

 

Jeff Dawson

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Sat 23rd Aug 2008 11:14

Great hope to see you there, might have a different t-shirt on! Yes, like the Clash, one of my Favourites!

I was out with Jools last night - Salford Jets and Love Battery at Moses Gate. Fine night! She's a good friend and said you had been chatting, will have to add you myself. It's confusing though, I have another (my best friend) Joolz - she's also on myspace, hence my surprise when you mentioned it as I thought you meant the one with the 'Z'!!

Hope thats cleared that up! cheers jeff

 

Jeff Dawson

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Tue 19th Aug 2008 17:36

Hi Ant, yes it is, it wass the norm in those days and added to the excitement at times. It was the whole day out though and the feeling of belonging to the club and the cause. There used to be loads of violence at Bolton and in those days they had a bad reputation. All different now, very rare any trouble at Norwich unless they play Ipswich! cheers for comment Jeff

 

alex iamb

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Wed 6th Aug 2008 10:11

hey antonio, thanks for your comments, glad I brought a smile to your face. Love your danger poem, brought a piece to mind by penny sailor, you can check out a soundfile here: http://www.myspace.com/pennysailorpoetry

 

Melissa R. Mendelson

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Sat 26th Jul 2008 16:32

Hi, Antonio. Thanks. Being frank is hard to do, but writing allows all I want to say to pour out onto the page. And I do hope my words find their way to her.

Take care. :)

-Melissa

 

Zuzanna Musial

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Wed 23rd Jul 2008 01:15

Antonio,
I remember to prepare myself fort the Year 2000---LOL :) People were buying staples of food whatever, I thought if I am going to die I will, bought two bottles of water 2 litre each…ha, ha.

It is true. I survived this so there will be no end of the World I think. It will be some changes I suppose in Political platform, as they will be forming the NAU- wich is the North American Union and sooner in another 60 years will be ONE WORLD GOVERNMENT' well it will be for our kids but we will be gone by then...It is sad to think of it but there are changes that we do not see right on. Living on this end of the World I have a broader view on the entire map and see what is happening World wide. Although the Politics are more open in Europe then here. Thank you for your kind comment on my poem” Tribute to Soldiers"

Have a wonderful week!

Zuzanna

 

Janet Ramsden

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Sat 19th Jul 2008 12:17

Hey friend, thanks for your quick comment.
I've been really busy too. So busy i haven't even entered a blog this week. I also work days as well as nights. Even my spare time is ruled by catch-up with this, that and the other. ha ha.
On the whole i'm ok though.
I'm trying to get to bolton gig but i might just pop in straight from work. Like you, i'll have to wait and see. The taxman wants me money this month. 'n' as the taxi driver saying goes. "if the wheels ain't turnin'. We ain't earnin'.
Lots o love. see you soon. Janet.xx

 

Antonionioni

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Wed 16th Jul 2008 17:43

21/12/2012 - a fittingly memorable date for this cataclysm! I hadn't heard about this, Zuzanna - thanks for the warning, although I think these doom-mongers are always making these predictions. On a lighter note, remember the Millennium scare when they thought all the computers would stop working?!! But I don't know, we will see...

 

Zuzanna Musial

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Wed 16th Jul 2008 14:48

Antonio

Please watch this links. Not sure if the predictions are to the point?


http://pl.youtube.com/watch?v=uZIfyXc8RWk&feature=related

http://pl.youtube.com/watch?v=SUwKDwETctc&feature=related

http://pl.youtube.com/watch?v=x0Tl9VVziYA&feature=related

In response to your comment you can take a look at these videos.
I am not sure what it will be. There are some signs in the World that there will be a Sun will be entering the Milky Way and the will be major shift in an axle of the Earth. The date is set for December 21, 2012...You be the judge.

Please delete this if you do not want to keep it here.

Zuzanna

 

Zuzanna Musial

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Tue 15th Jul 2008 04:53

HI, Antonio

Thank you so much for the nice comment on my poem. As always appreciated a lot!

Have a great week!

Zuzanna

 

Jeff Dawson

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Mon 14th Jul 2008 22:25

Okay mate, will show her and let you know.

I've seen most people I wanted to in music, but never saw Ian Curtis and Joy Division, which is one of those regrets I suppose but they never did that much live obviously.

Something spooky happened tonight though. I did a pub quiz and there were 2 questions, who had their gravesone nicked and what was his epitaph? Obviously I knew both, but what where the chances of that happening the day after i use that photo? Spooky, and I never usually do a quiz on a monday anyway....!!!???!!!

Cheers and hope to meet you soon, Jeff

 

Janet Ramsden

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Sun 13th Jul 2008 22:36

Hi friend, thankyou very much for the comment about children on my nature blog.
I've added a comment of my own on there explaining where the inspiration came from.
I really hadn't thought of it being used so extensively. Food for thought though.
I recently wrote a short story, with the idea of mums and dads reading it to their children but i haven't given it an airing yet.
Maybe i'll let you have a sneak preview.

 

Melissa R. Mendelson

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Sun 13th Jul 2008 20:05

Hey, Antonio.

Thank you for your comment.

I hope you had a great weekend. :)

Melissa

 

Janet Ramsden

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Sun 13th Jul 2008 01:44

Hey Antonionioni, just got home from work and chillin' for half hour. Noticed you haven't blogged today. Hope you're ok.
Love Janet.xx

ps. does this mean we get 2 on sunday?x

 

sarah clark

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Fri 11th Jul 2008 11:41

loving your danger poem
sez x

 

Zuzanna Musial

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Thu 10th Jul 2008 05:33

Good Day, Antonio

Thank you for the nice comment on my poem.
Hope you are doing well.

Have a wonderful day!

Zuzanna

 

Shirley Collinge

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Tue 8th Jul 2008 11:57

Hi Tony,

I am not too bad today. Some days my brain is so foggy. I have been putting my poetry and photos on eSnips for quite some time, most messages are short comments, I even find that difficult at times.

This is a wonderful place to be and I am enjoying my stay. People speak the truth in a courteous manner and I feel I could learn a lot. Thanks for your support and understanding.

Sincerely Shirley

 

Shirley Collinge

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Tue 8th Jul 2008 06:42

Hi Tony,

Thanks again for your comments. I am pleased that you enjoy my poems. I think you will get bored with my comments though. I find it difficult communicating this way but I do appreciate what you have to say. Thanks again.

Sincerely Shirley

 

Janet Ramsden

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Sun 6th Jul 2008 10:52

Hiya, I do like watching the nature programmes, wildlife and stuff.
You have a nice day too. I'm doing the spiritualist church service tonight at Urmston. Never been there before. A long way to go for an hour but what the heck. It's all in a days work.
Ha ha. xx

 

Shirley Collinge

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Fri 4th Jul 2008 18:35

Hi Tony,

'It is' what?

I appreciate all feedback on my poems positive or negative. Thank you for taking the time to read them anyway. Much appreciated.

Sincerely Shirley

 

Shirley Collinge

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Wed 2nd Jul 2008 22:57

Hi Tony, I am me, who are you? Shirley

 

Shirley Collinge

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Wed 2nd Jul 2008 18:49

Hi Ant,

I hope it is okay to call you Ant or do you prefer Tony or maybe something else short and sweet? Its a bit easier than Antonionioni. You can call me Shirley Valentine if you want, I have been called worse. I put the heart around my eyes trying to disguise myself but don't think it worked. Everyone guessed it was me. Thank you for reading 'Dance A Dream' and for your lovely comment.

Sincerely Shirley

 

Shirley Collinge

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Wed 2nd Jul 2008 09:53

Hi, Thanks for your comment. It's nice of you to take the time to read my poem 'Theatre of Hell'. Your poems are awesome. My fav is the three 6s one obviously. I think you know the one I mean. Sincerley Shirley

 

Janet Ramsden

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Sun 29th Jun 2008 21:44

Hey friend, please do let me know if you're coming to wigan 10th july. I'll definitely come.
It's about time i practised my microphone skills.
HOLIDAYS!!! what are they? xx

 

Shirley Collinge

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Sun 29th Jun 2008 20:41

Thank you for commenting on my poem She-Wolf.

Shirley

 

Jeff Dawson

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Wed 25th Jun 2008 06:56

Hi Antoni, thanks for your comments, yes people do piss where they are at the front stage! I didn't tend to stay down there, preferred to go around from stage to stage, lining up the bands i wanted to see on the timetable, and having a few beers on the way! To be honest though, I was very lucky with the weather, warm and dry most of the time! Cheers Jeff

 

carol falaki

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Wed 18th Jun 2008 19:07

Hi Antonioni
Have you seen the 14 by 14 website? they take sonnet submissions.
http:/www.14by14.com.
They only want stuff that hasn't been seen anywhere before.
I just wrote my first, might try another.
x Carol

 

Philip Golding

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Tue 3rd Jun 2008 10:57

Hello, Antonio, thank you for your kind words on my poem 'Bluebells'.

Yes I did post it at 2.30am and was seeing the candle burning at both ends, lol. I'd started the poem at about 11.30pm and lost track of time, I was locked into the poem and had to complete it.

Thanks once again

regards
Phil

 

steve

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Mon 2nd Jun 2008 17:34

thanks for the comment : )

Lenin was my dad

 

Melissa R. Mendelson

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Tue 27th May 2008 15:36

I am honored to be in the same category as Nina Simone. Thank you. :)

-Melissa

 

Zuzanna Musial

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Wed 14th May 2008 18:13

Hello, Antonio

Many thanks for your time to read and commenting on my last poem.
Have a wonderful day/evening!

Kind Regards,
Zuzanna

 

Zuzanna Musial

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Tue 6th May 2008 03:36

HI, Antonio

Thank you for the latest comments on my writing...Appreciated!

Best Regards,
Zuzanna

 

Richard Brooks

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Fri 25th Apr 2008 11:28

thanks mate for the comment! I like to write absurd things in my poem but sometimes you talk to homeless people and they have so much wisdom, interesting people! take care

 

Antonionioni

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Thu 24th Apr 2008 08:07

No problem - thanks to you too Zuzanna. I must change that sample poem!

 

Zuzanna Musial

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Wed 23rd Apr 2008 22:29

Hello, Antonio - you are being an avid sportsman. Your poems evolve around different Teams and games... I have been watching some of the Football games in Europe. The Football here has been called Soccer' - Not sure why but the real Football is being played with the oval ball and that has been called Football. We have Eskimo Football Club in Edmonton.

Thank you for the comments on my poetry as well as the info from my BIO.

Kind Regards,
Zuzanna

 

Zuzanna Musial

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Thu 10th Apr 2008 05:58

Hello Antonio, thank you for the comment on my page...It seems the World became so small since we have the Internet - Isn't it?

Kind Regards,
Zuzanna

 

Zuzanna Musial

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Tue 8th Apr 2008 06:50

Hello, Antonio

I like the style in your Sonnet!
Sonnets have been always stylish writes.
They give the reader a wonderful feeling as they written in a rather compact style with a lot of thought provoking lines.

GREAT JOB!

Kind Regards,
Zuzanna

 

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